Date: 08/19/09 05:27 am Title: Chapter 17
I'm so glad Bill told Tom about his past.
That damn Tyler needs to give it a rest, I'm curious to see what he has planned for Tom.
I really like how you can tell that Tom has changed his ways. No more keeping things from Bill and including Bill in everything.
I don't like Bill's uncle for what he did to him for all those years and the way he still treats him, I don't trust him around the kids.
Author's Response: Bill needed to let it out and vent and Tyler needs sto die...well not yet. Tom has changed and doesnt want to see Bill hurt....by him. Bill uncle is a butthole and needs to like die! I wouldnt trust him around the kids either....especially chirs....rnrnThanks for reviewing!
Date: 08/18/09 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 15
some other conflicts is there should be a characater death or something or kiddnap or phyiscal abuse o one of the kids something grusome ?
btw amazing chapter :D
Author's Response: I have some things planned for the kids...characater death is a...harsh but we'll see. Stay tuned the next chapter will be up tonight....Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 08/17/09 08:37 am Title: Chapter 16
Well if you want me to do you poll :
i like the story very much with its ups and downs ,hard of times,happiest of times but i think before you start "When I Grow Up" you have to finish with Bill and his unborn baby to finish which i was hope you doing anyway because everything like that part the most then show little after but i think be fine to skip few years for next sequel x sorry if i have bad english but that what i think ^^ laterx
Date: 08/06/09 02:22 am Title: Chapter 16
This chapter was a surprise but a good one. Bill's aunt knows what happened to him but she never told him, how could she? Bill could have had 8 children that's a trip. And Tom and his son.
The more I think about it, this chapter was perfect, it's bringing closure to a lot of unanswered questions and issues.
As for making a sequel, yes write it, I would love to read it and contiue this whole journey!
Date: 08/05/09 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 16
IDK if that last review went through. Bah! I'm still distressed.
I would very much like another installment into this series. I have grown very attatched to this storyline. Don't take it away from me just yet, that might cause more stress.
Date: 08/05/09 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 16
I would very much enjoy a sequel to this and "A Beautiful Disaster"-
Bah. I'm so distressed that I don't have any more of this story to read yet.
However, I am still glad to see the Boys back together...is much better that way. I would be so very distressed, otherwise.
Date: 08/05/09 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 15
Thank you thank you thank you for getting them back together....
Date: 08/05/09 05:33 pm Title: Chapter 14
Okay, I just have to say it. Bill and Tom have to be just that. Bill and Tom. And I know this is kinda late in the game for me to be reviewing, however, new to this site. I love what you are doing with this story, keep doing it. I love it that you are including the children's POV in here, too. Children are much smarter than what society credits them for. I love your writing...I do. But like I said before, Bill and Tom have to remain intact. THEY HAVE TO FIX IT, OKAY?!! (Sorry. Getting distressed.)
Date: 08/05/09 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 16
That would be awesome as long as it doesn't involve that many problems with tom and bill maybe the kids because they are growing...
Date: 08/05/09 03:29 pm Title: Chapter 16
Loved the chapter and I liked the bonding issues. The Tyler thing was also nice too. Maybe Bill could file a lawsuit against him or something *hint hint*??
Answer: I think that a sequel is a great idea! You should probably make a series for all these stories. But, please, no cheating in that story!
Date: 08/05/09 02:19 am Title: Chapter 16
Wow! Amazing chapter! I like how Tom is... lol.
OOOH! I would loooove a sequel to this!YAY!
Date: 08/04/09 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 16
Tom, are you fucking serious???I know it isn't Tom's fault but i'm really mad at him.He didn't chose to have another kid but that's what he gets from sleeping around when his HUSBAND is waiting at hom!!*angry look*
Takes deep deep breath* Sorry but Tom made me all mad*pouts*
Anyway....OMG your making another sequel?=D YAY YAY for thatXD
And OF COURSE i'll make you a banner for the next story!!You know, i actually screamed very laud when i saw that you want me to make the banner, i feel so honored, you see i'm not really good at making them so it really means a lot that you chose me*screams*I'M SO EXCITED!!!I also feel very happy you asked me about the first chapter of the story, sorry i haven't answer you back but i've been a lazying aroundXD but don't worry, i'll get back to you as soon as possible=D
Ok i don't wanna be mean or anything but i just don't like Tom's other kid, i know he's just a little kid and it isn't hir fault his father is a manwhore but still.....probably 'cause i haven't read about him, maybe i'd later on but not just yet=( Fuck now i feel very bad 'cause i don't like him, he's just a kid right?plus he's never had a father figure by his side??Shit i'm a mean person=/*hides*
I agree with Tom, he has to the right to discipline his child, i'm not talking about abusing him but a little spank isn't bad.Plus, Bill is doing a bad job at it, he lets Christin do whatever he wants and that isn't healthy.
Author's Response: Tom never knew about this other kid until Jasmine told him when they were in LA. Jasmine got pregnant before Bill. Zach and the twins are about 6-6 1/2 months apart.rnrnYup, I'm planing on doing another sequel! And i really liked the banner you did for me recently. I hope you like the first chapter or more so the prologue.rnrnTom's other kids is going to play a big roll in Chris behavior. Not in a bad way but as a influence towards Chris. What i mean is that Chris is going to get jealous and become independent.rnrnTom does have the right to do what he wants with his kid. But Bill doesnt let Chris do what he wants...all the time.rnrnCant wait to hear from you! Thanks for the review!
Date: 08/04/09 08:05 pm Title: Chapter 16
I would love it if you did a sequel because I love reading about this family. I must say I loved this chapter, but no matter how many excuses are made for him, Bill babies Chris way to much. He deserved to get his hands spanked for acting the way he did. I think he got off easy because I would have gotten a lot worse! Can't wait for the next update hun! Keep Up The Good Work! ;)
Date: 08/04/09 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 16
I'm all for another sequal. And I like this chapter, and I can't wait for drama that will be coming that isn't infidelity.
Date: 08/04/09 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 16
great great great thank you
Date: 08/04/09 05:21 pm Title: Chapter 16
Car accident? (a)xD
I'd love to see something dramatic happen, but that might not come as a big shock...Not cheating or some of the main characters dying or anything, but something...yeah, dramatic:D
Great chapter, I love how they're so long!:D
Date: 08/04/09 05:17 pm Title: Chapter 16
hi, I would like that more than anything..Please don't leave us hanging...I love all the stories you have done with this. so please do that for all of us it would be so cool to see what happens with the kids.
Date: 08/04/09 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 16
yesss write another one
Date: 08/02/09 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 15
Just wanted to drop by and remind you that i LOVE this story alot and can't wait 'till the next update=DSo please update again soon??pretty please!!!
I MISS YOU*cries*
Author's Response: I miss you too! I'll update as soon as my beta returns my story. I might update sooner cause I want to update now. I'm so miss you. You like keep on my tail for updates! I'll let you on a HUGE suprise. There is going to be a sequel to Family Portrait. In so excited! It's going to be about the kids growing up with a few suprises along the way. It's going to be called 'When I Grow Up'. I wrote the first chapter out and I'll send it to you when I get home. Tell me what you think of it. Ok? In counting on you to tell me the truth. Add whatever you like. This won't be posted until later. Thanks friend! Your like one of my best friends on this site. Really. rnrn=)rnrnoh! I was wonder if you would do the banner for that story when it time? Please? Lol! rnLove ya!
Date: 07/26/09 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 15
I'm really sorry i haven't been around that much but i was away for 3 weeks and just got back=D
I just wanna say a big THANKS to Tom for finally coming to his 5 senses and realizing that what he was doing is very WRONG and needs to stop NOW!
I'm also happy he told Bill how he feels about their relationship=D
I agree with Nat, bringing Bushido over to the house where his kids live, was very disrespecful of Bill.I mean, Tom cheating on him countless times isn't very nice either...
I love how Tom thinks Christian is turning into a mini-Bill XD
Awwwe, poor Chris, he's gonna miss Bill so much but he's got to stay with his Papa and man up, right Tom?? Is Tom afraid Christian might turn out to be gay??XD
A car crash?You sure love to make us suffer, don't you??=(
Anyway justy wanted to let you know that i still love your story but uhmm kinda forgot to comment...*hides* but you know I LOVE YOU right?=D
Author's Response: I had to make Tom come to his sense sometime or later. However this is providing A LOT of conflict for me.I dont know what to write and it takes longer to write out the chapters, but i'm trying!rnrnI was getting tired of him cheating and i know the others were too. Christian might turn out to be like Bill but he does boys stuff too. And yes Tom is scared that Chris might turn out gay and be a carrier for getting pregnant. I know you love me! Lol! I'll be updating soon so stay tuned!rn=)