Date: 08/30/09 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 18
god this story is like crack is so addictive!
Author's Response: Im glad you like it! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 08/30/09 05:47 pm Title: Chapter 18
oh tom...god...so glad that he's okay(well kind of)...
and welcome to new member of the family..
i can't believe this...tyler is horrible..what is he going to do next..oh no...if he's going for the kids...oh bill...
(but i am so enjoying the suspense...eh eh)
thanks!!!
Author's Response: Tom will be ok and yes welcome lil' chole to the trumper clan! Tyler is sick and will get what's coming to him. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 08/30/09 03:31 pm Title: Chapter 18
oh shit.... I am nervous!!!! UPDATE MORE SOON!!!!!
Author's Response: You know Tyler. Always making it bad. Nothing will happen to an extreme. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 08/30/09 01:55 pm Title: Chapter 18
OMG, I have this feeling Tyler will get that girl to take Cris from Tom & Bill..Poor Bill though...Poor Tom
Author's Response: Something like that. I don't want a kidnapping parse but I was thing the girl could be a nanny and does something to chris. Nothing sexually. I was thinking something milder. I have to plan out the next chapter. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 08/30/09 10:10 am Title: Chapter 18
I don't know exactly what you have planned, but please don't make this into some long "they kidnapped one of the kids" story. Please? I'm not going to complain though, I got my car accident :D *dances*
*singing* hurt Tom, hurt Tom, hurt Tom *end singing*
I loved it, really. Very well written :D
Author's Response: I'm not. Trust me. No kidnapping at all. I'm glad your happy about Tom getting hurt. It took FOREVER for me trying to think of something to do Tom. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 08/30/09 10:00 am Title: Chapter 18
when you said bill's pass may happen to someone very close to him you don't mean the kids right please don't tell me that bastard is going to hurt the kids, they don't deserved their innocense stolen. i saw the major character death warning. please don't kill bill or tom or any of the kids. let's aim for a happy ending here.
Author's Response: Bills past is going to happen but it's nothing extreme. The major character death was Serenity's mom. No one else is going to die. Promise. I'm planning for a happy ending. I just need to see how to get there. I want to end this story and move on to the final installment. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 08/30/09 04:19 am Title: Chapter 18
noooo!!!!...don`t let them hurt any of the children that would be very devastating for them....well luv your story and hope ou can update soon.
Author's Response: I'm going to try and not make them hurt the kids. Maybe Jason will redem himself and tell Bil and Tom about the plot. Maybe he will tell Bill's uncle Leon. He's a cop. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 08/29/09 01:05 am Title: Chapter 17
Wow Tyler is more crazy then I thought he was in the beginning. He is so going fatal attraction or single white female right now...and I love it! What can I say I love drama it makes the world a more interesting place :D. Update when you can!
Date: 08/27/09 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 17
Oh my god! I just got home from my boarding school on a long weekend and I just read this and... OH Mah Gawd! This was... Oh Gawd!
Author's Response: Crazy huh? I had to tell about Bill's past because it just might happen again...not to Bill...but to someone VERY close to him....The next part should be updated soon! Thanks for always reviewing!
Date: 08/25/09 07:20 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm an exchange student in Germany this year and have spent the last two weeks on a language and culture camp with only 15 min. internet everyday on very, VERY slow computers so I haven't been able to read anything...It was horrible xD
Anything else I want to see *thinking* I can't think of anything but you'll know if I do xD
I can hardly wait :D Car accident *dances*
Date: 08/24/09 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 17
omg tyler is going to hurt tom!!oh no no no
loved the reunion between bill and tom...don't like when they're not together...;)
Author's Response: Something like that. I loved writting the reunion between them! It's fun! I also dont like then they arent together. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 08/24/09 06:44 pm Title: Chapter 17
I wanna see a car with Tom inside go bang:D
Love the long chapters, they're awesome! This story is awesome, you're awesome, everything's awesome!
I need to sleep xD
Author's Response: You will for sure this time. Its already written out but im thinking of adding more to it be3cause I think it's kinda short. Needs more detail. Is there anything else you would like to see? I have been waiting for your review since I posted the story...lol...Thanks for the review!
Date: 08/23/09 05:08 pm Title: Chapter 17
I'm not feeling very well atm so sorry if i'm not as excited as always!
BILL HAS BEEN PREGNAT BEFORE?O.o
Stupid Tyler made him have a miscarriage!!*growls at Tyler*
Eww Bill's uncle is a fucking pig!!How could he've done that to Bill, to own his fucking nephew!!He's such a sick asshole!!I hope he dies!!!!
So please update soon again!Maybe next time my comment won't be so simple!!
PLEASE UPDATE!XD
Author's Response: Yes Bill has been knicked up before but he couldnt remember it. Bill pig uncle will make a few more apperances in this story and into the next. He's attacked to Bill cause hes so lady like. I will update as soon as i figure what to right and send it to the beta...if she back from vacation. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 08/21/09 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 17
I'll think is really good with what you have done ^_^ i loved how tyler came back and kind of hurt bill (yes i am sick minded person alot of my time lol)i loved how it was threated too and Bill never told Tom how he got the mark did he ? only his flash back with his uncle. i cant wait for tyler got planned for Tom ^_^ oo are you going to like kidnapped tom or something like that. Lock him up in chains with knife and cuts LOL tell him would worthless he is and how he cheated on bill and that his whore and stuff Nah i am gettig to sick minded lol it would be good thought if did x i'll stop now lol
anyway i loved it so much i cant wait for the next one lol i'll be waiting lol
and thanks for thanks thing x Lol later x (sorry if my english suck it is 03:15 am so i am little off)
Author's Response: Tyler HAD to come back. Deep down he isnt a bad guy because he still loves Bill as he always did but when he get alcohol into his system he acts different. He's tired of Bill rejecting him so he kinda snapped. What Tyler has planned isnt much and i think its sucks but i had to put it in there. Thanks for the review!
Date: 08/20/09 05:17 pm Title: Chapter 17
Yay! This is the chapter that I was waiting for. It's so sad what happened to Bill, but at least he knows the whole truth. He is handling the entire thing pretty well considering both his mother and his aunt kept this secret from him. On top of all that his grandma let him get raped by his uncle. How could she life with herself really? I'm also glad that Bill finally told Tom what happened to him those years ago. I wonder what Bill is going to tell his father considering he was also holding this secret from him as well?
Author's Response: I know it is sad what happened to Bill. As for his grandmother she is and will always be a bicth. What happned to bill and his pig of an uncle will come back to play in the sequel to this. History will ALMOST repeat it's self. Bill will confont his father sooner or later. Thanks for reviewing!!!!
Date: 08/19/09 06:15 pm Title: Chapter 17
omg i was reading the thank you and i saw my name and i was so happy i had a shoe fight with my brother. good chapter
Author's Response: Im soooooooooooo glad you were happy when you saw your name! I always want to give thanks to the people who take the time to reiview my story. It means alot to me and i want the reviewer to feel special! So thank you!
Date: 08/19/09 03:12 pm Title: Chapter 17
Oh, no! Impending doom and dread is what I feel about this Tyler punk...not cool, not cool. I am so glad you updated today! I really enjoy this story so much!
Author's Response: Tyler is a asshole who will get his 'doom' soon engough. Thanks for liking this chapter!
Date: 08/19/09 12:26 pm Title: Chapter 17
oh dear.... i cannot wait for the next chapter!
Date: 08/19/09 11:14 am Title: Chapter 17
Oh no, I hope Bill & Tom are going to be safe and not get into any problems...
Author's Response: There is always trouble for them...lol...but it ends happy. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 08/19/09 09:40 am Title: Chapter 17
AH! I'm so glad we moved past the cheating drama and we're dealing with new drama! XD
Author's Response: Me TOO! We have to move past it and enter something else. I'm planning new drama because we cant always have fluffy time! Lol! Thanks for reviwing!