Date: 03/08/09 06:55 pm Title: How Much Can You Take?
Holyshits, batman.
I waited FOREVER, running different scenarios on what lay behind that door and nothing even came CLOSE to the hotness of this chapter.
And yet... it's sad. I feel sad for both of them, because when it's all said and done, they are really hurting each other and any potential friendship/relationship they can have.
Date: 03/08/09 06:48 pm Title: How Much Can You Take?
This was very well written love it... Is there anywhere in this story where Bill can be in control of Tom? Also is Tom ever going to be nice to Bill..Just a some questions you can answer cheers.
Date: 03/08/09 05:58 pm Title: How Much Can You Take?
aww....plz update soon.,.wow this is good=] but it makes me sad that theres no ramanticness in the relationship=[
Date: 03/08/09 05:50 pm Title: How Much Can You Take?
love this!!
Date: 03/08/09 05:23 pm Title: How Much Can You Take?
interesting...
Date: 03/08/09 05:06 pm Title: How Much Can You Take?
cant you upgrade a little more often? its so good, its not fun to wait =(
Author's Response: Misa Sugar: We try, but it's REALLY hard to get synchronized enough to actually work on something. Yell at Para, not me. XD
Date: 03/08/09 05:04 pm Title: How Much Can You Take?
I just typed out a HUGE review and then it dissappeared...and I'm not writing it again. Meh. Sorry!
What I said though was that I love this so much, Tom's a bit of an asshole but it works for this. That seriously was some of the hottest Twincest Non Related smut I've read in a while. And I read a lot of smut. It's even on my iPod. Parallel has seen that. I think. Meh.
Okay, you two better start writing soon because I don't wanna get all impatient again! This is too good and I want more. Nao. :)
(And knowing Parallel, it WAS a 99RB reference. Then again, I'm wrong about a lot of things...)
I'll stop blathering on now. I can't wait for the next chapter! :)
Date: 03/08/09 05:00 pm Title: How Much Can You Take?
I loved this :D Totally worth it ^^ Hmmm, I think I'm more like Parallelheartz in writing xD I really hope you continue soon!!
xx Chi ^^
Date: 03/08/09 04:18 pm Title: How Much Can You Take?
Oh My God! *faints*
that was ver VERY fucking worth waiting! I must say...I like this very icy Tom! Though I feel bad for Bill *0*
I'll sure be waiting for the next update,a nd I don't care how much I'll have to wait because i know it will be good coming out from you 2!
Date: 03/08/09 03:26 pm Title: How Much Can You Take?
*fans self* that was bloody fantastic! You two are writing geniuses! and you pair well together! xD Anyway, I just have to say one word to describe this entire chapter: WOW! If I was the kind who smoked, I might need a cigarette right now haha! I did love it, and not just because it was pure, dangerous, hard, fast, furious smut *drools* but also because it was so well written and descriptive. You really do manage to captivate your audience, my heart was pounding when Tom was teasing Bill. And I felt Bill's rage at being called a whore. And at the end, that last line, I felt his defeat, I wanted to cry for him and punch Tom in the face for what he said! beyond mean! But anyway, I'm sure you have some way for Bill to redeem himself further along in the story. Looking forward to another chapter from you both :D
Date: 03/08/09 03:02 pm Title: How Much Can You Take?
That's almost sad in a way. Thanks for the update! I hope maybe something will happen to cause Tom to be nicer to Bill. Well, and cause Tom to actually WANT to be nicer to Bill. And who knows? Maybe Bill won't be so lucky all the time.
Date: 03/08/09 02:28 pm Title: How Much Can You Take?
ahhhh..*thump*
beep..beeep..
*in a coma*
I don't get how this could happen..at least I didn't die now right?
Date: 03/08/09 02:15 pm Title: How Much Can You Take?
This was amazing smut.
Author's Response: Misa Sugar: Did you seriously read it that fast? Wow. XD We're glad you liked it!
Date: 03/08/09 06:31 am Title: How Unlucky Can You Get?
*cough*
i love it already
can't wait for Tom's punishment *licks her lips*
Date: 03/05/09 08:50 pm Title: How Unlucky Can You Get?
wow, i really love this one almost as much as SMRM... but not quite, update soon please? xx
Date: 03/05/09 10:33 am Title: How Unlucky Can You Get?
lol.
you have to update soon if you're going to leave a cliffie like THAT!
Date: 03/02/09 07:57 pm Title: How Unlucky Can You Get?
ahhhhh!!! i can see you both like people hating you!! please don't make me kill you
ps: love
Date: 03/01/09 07:37 pm Title: How Unlucky Can You Get?
NICE!!! Man, I LOVE you guys for working together!! When will you update??? *puppy dog pout*
Date: 02/25/09 08:47 pm Title: How Unlucky Can You Get?
omg cliff hanger, you NEED to right MORE like nau
Date: 02/24/09 07:13 am Title: How Unlucky Can You Get?
xD God, you are the best pairing there is :P Lolz xD I love this!!!!!!! :D I really really really really really really hope you continue soon!!!!!!
xx Chi ^^