Date: 04/14/09 09:27 am Title: Chapter 4
I could kill Tom for this... I hate him!
I'm suffering and I'm crying a river, right now. I hate how this ended ç__ç
But it was great anyway, I suppose XD
Author's Response: So I guess you were pro Bushido? Just a shot in the dark there...;] I'm sorry you hate the ending! But when I'm writing, and this is only when I'M writing, Tom will beat everyone else, every time. At least, that's how it is now. It may change up in the future. Cheer up though! In the original one shot, Tom didn't win. I'm glad you still thought it was good even though your team didn't win, and I'm happy I could make you cry because that means you were feeling something from my writing. You seemed to really grasp the pain that was in this story; it isn't a happy ending for any of them, and I think you get that. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, especially since things didn't turn out the way you would have liked for them to.
Date: 04/13/09 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 4
Beautiful, and sad. Perfectly fitting for my mood tonight. :) Thanks for updating, and for writing this story.
Author's Response: You are more than welcome--Writing is always a pleasure, even when I wish the written wrod had never been put to paper ;] And thank you, for taking a chance on this story and reading and reviewing.
Date: 04/13/09 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 4
i love this so much, especially the ending, god it was so angsty and painful. you are an amazing writer! please write something else soon!
Author's Response: Yes, 'angst' was the dominating category to put this story in, especially towards the end. Not a lot of my stories end happily. It's a weird personality tic I have. Thank you so much! You don't know how much I adore being called amazing! And I will definitely keep writing. I cannot promise soon--I never do, my muses are much to flighty for such things, but I can say it will PROBABLY be soon. Thank you so, so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: 04/13/09 08:02 pm Title: Chapter 4
woah. i've been following this for a while, and just wow.
i loved the ending; loves how torn between having perfection was almost ruled over by having normalcy, and how we were able, from Bill's point of view, see that he had willingly sought out normalcy, but realized, almost too late, that perfection was the thing he'd need, because without his brother, even normalcy would seem insignificant.
anyways, i just wanted to say wow and thanks for writing this, because it was awesome ^_^ and that i am definitely gonna go check out some of your other stories ^_^
Author's Response: I'm flattered you've been following the story. Not everyday you hear that, you know?rnrnBill in this story was...challenging to write. I didn't know how to keep him consistent. So I'm glad that you seemed to understand one of the messages that was supposed to come through. I wanted him to be someone fighting SO hard against a natural pull, but at the same time, slipping up every once in a while, and almost enjoying it until he felt bad about it later and turned even farther away. He's terrified of what would happen if he just went with his instincts. As it turns out, going with his instincts in this instance would lead him to something painful, but good...And this really has nothing to do with anything you said. Hmm.rnrnThank you so much for reading and reviewing! What you said was very thoughtful, and I was glad to read it. And YES! DEFINITELY go check out some of my other stories :]
Date: 04/13/09 07:59 pm Title: Chapter 4
awe!.
Author's Response: You've said this before, and I gotta admit...the first time I thought you just forgot to type out awesome or something like that ;] You have no idea how much your reviewing has meant to me. It was a kick in the butt to get to writing when I really didn't feel like it. You were also the only one who would talk in ebonics with me :D Thank you so, so much for reading and reviewing and being downright wonderful through this story.
Date: 04/13/09 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 4
If you mean your epilogue is under 500 words, that's okay. That 500 word limit is for the entire word count. Your entire story can't have under 500 words, but if a chapter does, that's fine.
Author's Response: Oh, well thank you for telling me :] I did not know...Perhaps I'll repost sometime. I'm not sure if that's bad etiquette or not.
Date: 03/25/09 09:30 am Title: Chapter 3
It sounds pretty realistic, their fighting.Oh, what are they doing to each other! Bill! just choose tom!
Author's Response: ...Exactly! Just choose Tom, it'll be perfect! But then...Bushido? Bushido could be good...Who knows what will come of things? Thank you so much for reviewing!
Date: 03/25/09 09:30 am Title: Chapter 3
It sounds pretty realistic, their fighting.Oh, what are they doing to each other! Bill! just choose tom!
Author's Response: Yes...
Date: 03/25/09 05:46 am Title: Chapter 3
This is complete brillance, so PLEASE don't rush it!
I love the characterization going on, and I love the realistic-ness of it.
You think of everything, and I love that, so please, more.
x].
Author's Response: Oh, I have no intentions of rushing. School is crazy, and a lot of times I have a hard time trying to write and get work done. Ah yay! Characterization compliments! Means I'm doing things right :] I try very hard to make them real, and explain everything, so that's great to hear.As always, thank you so much for reviewing.
Date: 03/24/09 10:44 pm Title: Chapter 3
beautiful, and I can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Thank you! The next update, as with all things I write, has it's own schedule and will come when it's good and ready. It's like a baby in that respect :p Thank you very much for reviewing!!!
Date: 03/19/09 11:39 pm Title: Chapter 2
please please please update! I'm dying to know what happens next
Author's Response: I will update as soon as the chapter is finished and really ready. Promise ;] I didn't realize, but I kind of left it on a cliffhanger. Sorry! And thank you for reviewing :]
Date: 03/19/09 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
awe.
I mean.
Wuz up ma homie dis be the shitt fo' shizzle.
Author's Response:
Naw, naw, das cool, das cool. Cracker talk alright wit me. On da real tho, das nice and all fo you to say. I be workin' hard on dis shit mayne, you know. An I got to congratulate you for reviewin', das straight, ya feel me? Real talk ;]
Date: 03/19/09 05:20 am Title: Chapter 2
It's great that you continued this fic. Twins arguing is so cute.
Oh no, tom just took a whore!? No he didn't did he?
Author's Response: If I recall correctly, it was your review that first asked for the story to go on. I hope this really does make you happy :] And yes, he just picked up a prostitute. Never fear, I have a plan! Thank you so much for reviewing!
Date: 03/18/09 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 2
This is really good. I don't even know what it is about it, cuz it's not like the concept is all that different from a lot of other stuff on here LOL, but it is really good, I like it. I'm hoping you'll update fast *hinthint* :D
Author's Response: I'm very glad you like it, and I'll get to work on the update soon as I can. Thank you for reviewing!
Date: 02/28/09 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm usually not so fond of Billshido fics, but I'm glad I decided to read this one.
I absolutely loved it!
Great characterization! I love the communication between the twins.
And your last line...well...that's kinda suggestive, sure this is a one shot? ;)
Nice work!!
Author's Response: Well danke schon! I'm thrilled you made an exception in this case, especially since it led you to review. I am an uninhibited review whore, you know ;] Almost nothing makes me happier than hearing that my characterization was right, so hallelujah praise the Lord!rnrnI have been asked whether this is a one shot only once before. For now, it is. But there are tentative plans in the mix...Anyway, thank you for your day brightening review!
Date: 02/10/09 09:56 am Title: Chapter 1
No way you're calling this a one shot. I need to see how tom wins bill back. Ohhh, damn I don't want to see this end so soon.
Author's Response: Not a one shot? That never crossed my mind, actually. I don't know where it could go...But I'll re-examine if it'll make you happy. Thank you so much for reviewing ;]
Date: 02/09/09 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, I love this. Really, really do love it.
Author's Response: Just as I love that you love it. I really, really do ;]
Date: 02/09/09 08:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really, really liked this. You've got great characterization and I love how you incorporated the bracelet and necklace, and Tom and Bu's reaction to them. You had me grinning at the last line.
Author's Response: You have no idea how much I love it when people tell me they liked my characters (though I can't take all the credit--Bill and Tom are their own entities). The jewelry was something I didn't intend to do. Originally there was just a bracelet. The guitar pick was a very recent add on. But I know my ersonal creative prices ant all that interesting :] Thank you so much for the read and review.
Date: 02/09/09 08:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
HOMIE! you don't know me, but you should. In bad. NAH, Jk. I love ittttt
Author's Response: Ay homes, YOU should know ME, ya digg? Nah mayne, I'm just playin'; it's nice to meet yo fine self. There, now we aquainted. Das wassup.rnrnI love talking like that. It makes my dad so upset :] I'm glad you love it.
Date: 02/09/09 07:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oooh looooove *_*
Author's Response: Thank you very, very much! Very, very, very much :]