Date: 04/25/11 10:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
Alright I am confused. Who is Gustav with? I would make a guess and say... Bill? And I love this!
Author's Response: wrong guess :P
Date: 12/13/09 12:52 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm kind of confused.
Author's Response: i can explain, if that makes it better :) honestly
Date: 04/16/09 10:28 am Title: Chapter 1
I can walk you through line by line if you want to :) - maybe not a line by line walk though...how about you send me a word doc of the story with each person colour coded, red, blue and green. *grins* Would you? really?
Author's Response: sure :) is your e-mail given on the site or do you need to send it to me?
Date: 04/16/09 02:49 am Title: Chapter 1
It's beautiful and really well written. I got it sort of by the end. I understood the plotline anyway but I never did figure out who was who exactly and neither did I work out the pattern fully...
Author's Response: I can walk you through line by line if you want to :)
Date: 02/10/09 11:03 am Title: Chapter 1
Author's Response: i could have made it easier to read, i know, but i wanted it to be difficult so people would read it slowly, or even more than once, so they could get it, and by doing that feel more for the characters
and it works.. you have to THINK to understand...
Author's Response: confused the shit out of my girlfriend though :P
Date: 02/10/09 10:36 am Title: Chapter 1
I had to go through it twice to get the switches where they made sense... but once they did... I kinda feel for both Geo and Bill and want to twap Gus for not tangling them all up together they'd be so cute as a three.. not two offcenter pairs..
Author's Response: i could have made it easier to read, i know, but i wanted it to be difficult so people would read it slowly, or even more than once, so they could get it, and by doing that feel more for the characters
Date: 02/10/09 12:10 am Title: Chapter 1
This was really good and very well-written. A little hard to follow at first with the switching of characters, but I think I got it!
Anyway, good job!
Author's Response: thank you very much :)