Date: 01/23/11 08:20 am Title: In Flagrante
"Pump me full of fertilizer"? OMG seriously? I just about choked and died right there lol. And I'm still dying. My ribs hurt from trying not to laugh out loud as it's past 2am and I have a bedmate! Plus the accompanying visual to that is not pretty lol. I feel like cackling for some reason hmmm.. Might creep out of bed and find some videos on YouTube of Bill laughing heh. Thanks for the story ;-)
Date: 04/15/09 11:13 pm Title: In Flagrante
I know I said you had me until fertilizer, but I went back and read it again anyway, and it became my favorite part the second time, because it was a joke, not Bill's failed attempt at sexi talk.
Drill my manhole, baby! OMG I DIED!
Date: 03/22/09 03:25 pm Title: In Flagrante
Uuuuh, you had me until 'fertilizer'.
Author's Response: aw, too bad. at least you enjoyed 3-quarters of it. ha =]rn
Date: 02/08/09 05:20 pm Title: In Flagrante
Oh yes, this was so good. I loved how everything sounds so real. The sarcasm adds a great aftertaste to the whole atmosphere.
I love reading a sex scene that just isn't about sex, but contains actual character development. Great job!
Author's Response: dude, i love hearing that my writing isn't as shallow as it seems to me. thanks for that!
Date: 02/08/09 02:33 am Title: In Flagrante
I thought the immense dumping of sarcasm was nice! It wasn't run of the mill and I laughed pretty hard bby. It really wasn't bad, you should be proud :)
Author's Response: a bit late, this, but thanks so much! i rlly don't know what i'd do without the witty humour. it pretty much carries my fics.
Date: 02/06/09 10:50 pm Title: In Flagrante
Nom nom nom *_* I needed some good PWP, so thank you. It was wonderful, from start to language, and just sassy enough. Great job!
Author's Response: phanks, you. yez, i'm planning on mastering the art of PWPs in the near future.
Date: 02/06/09 01:53 pm Title: In Flagrante
I was so happy to see your name, and it's the middle of the afternoon (i.e. AIM is a wasteland), so there was no one to squee to except myself! (which is vastly under-satisfying, in case you ever consider trying it.)
I can actually see Bill making that kind of joke during sex... is that bad? Probably. Either way, I laughed. A lot. ("Daddy" and anything with feet/toes makes me shudder and not in a good way).
As for your writer's block, been there multiple times, so take your time. You're probably just thinkin' too hard about it. Sophia and I are online most nights if you wanna talk about it (I've found it helps). :)
Author's Response: oh noes, sorry about that...and the feet. but i'm glad i made you larf, that's m' goal in all this. i never seem to catch either of you online (boo), but thanks for the kind words (your reviews keep me going)!
Date: 02/06/09 12:33 pm Title: In Flagrante
That was funny.
Author's Response: yusss. funny is what keeps me going.
Date: 02/06/09 12:25 pm Title: In Flagrante
fuck damn that was hot! oh my god....i have no other words than a bunch of "fuck fuck fuck fuck HOLY FUCK" to say. it was that HOT AND SEXY.
oh shiiiiiit. *__*
*melted*
Author's Response: ftw. i melted someone. i think my job here is done. thank you! ^^
Date: 02/06/09 09:02 am Title: In Flagrante
I adored this fic! Even though it wasn't what you were going for, I loved the sarcastic humor in this. Another thing I loved was that sex scene...good Lord that was hot!
Author's Response: thaanks! hot sex, sarcasm: some of life's luxuries. glad to know i brought it.
Date: 02/06/09 07:00 am Title: In Flagrante
I laughed so hard through most of this, and I think I squealed and double checked the name when I saw this on the front page.
I will wait however long you need us to wait for Sine Qua Non and whatever else you wanna give us. This was awesome, and not bad at all, so poo on you if you think so. ;)
Author's Response: this is sooo late, but eye hart u. thanks for all your lurvly reviews that turn me into embarrassed sheepish amanda goo. and sqn is...in the works...i'll tentatively say about 3-qts of the way done. RL keeps interfering though, so it's hard to tell when it'll be ready. nice to know you'll wait for me :)
Date: 02/06/09 06:19 am Title: In Flagrante
wow
Author's Response: good wow, bad wow?rnmaybe wow?rnthanks every which way!
Date: 02/06/09 05:12 am Title: In Flagrante
Oh yeah me likes :) I need these kind of twins TWICE DAILY *__*
Author's Response: har, wish i could serve em up, too.rnthanks babe! glad you like.
Date: 02/06/09 04:44 am Title: In Flagrante
*_*
What is even to criticize here? I'd be stretching if I tried, woman.
Damn.
Every sentence was DFLKGJDFJ. You impress the balls off of me, as usual.
Author's Response: every sentence?! wut. thaaank yoou! i'm sorta suprised anyone likes my elaborate productions, but who am i to bash a good thing.
Date: 02/06/09 03:00 am Title: In Flagrante
Your author's note is redundant and unneccessary, because this fic was so hot I didn't even the tense, or anything except the smutty goodness going on. Me likey. A LOT. XD
Author's Response: XD yay. thank you! maybe i should stop w the self-deprecating a/n's.
Date: 02/06/09 01:08 am Title: In Flagrante
OH SHIT the daddy stuff was hothothot. and the hot sex, the dorky jokes during the hot sex. i love how it breaks up the flow, just for a second :D
mannn I missed your writing! *happy shimmy*
Author's Response: ha. funny story bc i didn't know whether to go for it or not (the daddy), but i felt it fit nice and tight (heh), and i learn from the very best (nudgenudge). yay, happy dance.
Date: 02/06/09 12:17 am Title: In Flagrante
I missed your writing so much. I don't know if there could be anything to criticize from this, it's perfect and I like when your sarcasm just completely drives the fic. It's wonderful with all the little metaphors, analogies and characterization. This site needs more writers like you. Or maybe just a better appreciation for your work, cause you've got something special.
Also this was amazingly hot, that needs to be mentioned as well.
Author's Response: more writers like me! can you imagine? i'm so happy to know i achieved all that (metaphors and analogies and characterizations, oh my), bc i know there's a bunch who go harder than lil' old me. thaaaanks so much!
Date: 02/06/09 12:14 am Title: In Flagrante
i love the way you write....
witty and sexy
Author's Response: wow, thank you. i'll try to keep it up!