Date: 06/29/10 04:51 pm Title: Fantasy Three
"Her17;s life, her17;s cars, her17;s loft and her17;s baby"
his life, his cars and so on
his - belonging (the correct choice)
he`s = he is
hope you don`t mind me pointing out some mistakes to you
Author's Response: No. It's better for the author to know when they've done a mistake.
Date: 06/29/10 02:14 pm Title: Fantasy One
not bad at all.. so many typos and mistakes though.. you should beta read it, just a suggestion
Author's Response: Yeah well that's a bit late since the story's done XD. But I was going to go over it and correct what was wrong with it.
Date: 05/14/10 09:56 pm Title: Fantasy Nine
This is sooo fucking YUMMY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I know XD
Date: 05/14/10 09:32 pm Title: Fantasy Eight
YAYAYAAYAY BILL/TOM SMEXY TIMES!!!
Author's Response: Yes XD
Date: 05/14/10 08:45 pm Title: Fantasy Seven
I was laughing so much my mommy could hear me a mile away! LMAO
Author's Response: HAHAHAH!!!
Date: 05/14/10 08:34 pm Title: Fantasy Six
LOL!!! Jessie and Bill are even funnier when together!!!! Claps *happily*
Author's Response: I agree they are
Date: 05/14/10 08:26 pm Title: Fantasy Five
AWWWW!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I'm glad
Date: 05/14/10 08:08 pm Title: Fantasy Four
YAY YAYA YEAH!!!! GO BILLA GO BILLA GO BILLA!!!!
Author's Response: HAHHAAH!!!
Date: 05/14/10 07:58 pm Title: Fantasy Three
Tomi had a heart to heart moment... I like!
Crea you fucking idiot.
Bill... good job
Author's Response: Yup he did. Yes he is. LOL!!!
Date: 05/14/10 07:44 pm Title: Fantasy Two
OH YUMMY SMEXY TWINCEST TIMES!!!!
Author's Response: Yup
Date: 05/14/10 07:39 pm Title: Fantasy One
OOH YUMMY!!!
Author's Response: XD
Date: 03/14/10 12:27 am Title: Fantasy One
WHAT!? No, i'm not signing that to you. LOL.
Author's Response: Yeah I know... don't worry I got it the first time
Date: 03/13/10 03:08 pm Title: Fantasy One
Haha, you're the author and you don't know. That's mean the characters have a life on their own. Amazing.
Author's Response: Yup
Date: 03/12/10 03:10 pm Title: Fantasy Thirty-Four
Bill's mother side family diner are so fun. OMG!!!! They will get married!!!
Author's Response: LOL!!! Yeah
Date: 03/12/10 12:25 pm Title: Fantasy Thirty-One
What do you mean by " hoping that the teen wouldn't find out what really going on?" Bill can't do something bad to Tom.
Author's Response: I don't know. I haven't read this since i finished it. If you'd had asked me when the chapi came out then I would be able to answer you... so all I can do right now is leave you if an I don't know XD
Date: 03/12/10 12:09 pm Title: Fantasy Twenty-Nine
Hold on Tom!!! Please, hold on!!
Author's Response: LOL
Date: 03/12/10 11:59 am Title: Fantasy Twenty-Eight
Wow! It's Crea that beated up and framed Bushido. He's more sick than i thought. See, it's a good idea to put him in jail. Bushido wants to see him. I'm sure he have a lot of thing to say to him.
Author's Response: Yeah he is a special little gangster. Or maybe it's just an excuse to fuck him again XD you never know
Date: 03/12/10 11:49 am Title: Fantasy Twenty-Seven
Goddamn Crea, can you find a way to put him in jail like Bushido or something like that. He's seriosly getting in my nerves.
Author's Response: HAHAHAHHAHAH!!! Maybe
Date: 03/12/10 11:40 am Title: Fantasy Twenty-Six
I have my idea of what Bill will do to Tom. *signing* i get down on you, get down on you.
Author's Response: Really? Okay. LOL!!
Date: 03/12/10 12:13 am Title: Fantasy Twenty
They really meant to be together. Bill is the one. How the hell Bill end up to be friend with Crea?
Author's Response: I don't know..