Date: 04/09/09 10:48 am Title: Chapter 7
HOLY SHIT...i didn't see that coming...love the insinuation at the end!
Date: 01/15/09 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 7
“I know but,” Tom wriggled in a way that generated a rather pleasant friction between the two of them, “you’ve never gone this far with anyone, and who better to experience this with than your brother?” – *shakes head and giggles* that’s so fucked up!
“This is so fucked up,” Bill managed in between giggles. – see they agree! Lol
Bill closed his eyes. “Just do it, Tomi. Don’t make me beg.” – No come on make him beg I really like it when they beg!
licking his fingers almost sheepishly. - *grins*
Date: 01/15/09 03:07 pm Title: Chapter 6
Tom looked murderous. “You know I can just unlock this anytime, right?!” he yelled through the wood.
There were a few seconds of silence and then a suspicious screech of wood against wood. “Not anymore,” came Simone’s voice merrily, if slightly out of breath. “Unless you think you’re strong enough to break through the door and the antique desk - which, by the way, is worth a lot of money, so don’t try.” – ha ha their mum locked them in a room together…are they going to make out?
“Because then I’ll want to do it again,” Tom said miserably. – as the tellytubies say “again, again”
The twins broke apart like they’d been scalded. Tom’s face was red and his lips looked swollen. “Shit,” he swore. “We have to stop.”
Bill nodded wordlessly. His appearance was much the same as Tom’s. They both looked guilty. – because the kiss was AWESOME?!
“It’s Gordon’s turn to cook tonight, which means the pizza should be arriving in about half an hour.” - *giggles*
Feels like they’ve always been on the edge…and something just snapped.
Date: 01/15/09 02:54 pm Title: Chapter 5
Bill couldn’t breathe, or he could but he just wasn’t getting enough air when he did so. He honestly didn’t know what to say, so he just looked at his brother miserably.
Tom’s eyes widened. “Holy shit. Holy shit.” – Competitive and smart…oh my he figured that out fast. *grimaces*
“Oh, God, you’re not even denying it. You’re not even denying it!” Tom said shrilly. He looked like he had more to say on the subject but then his face paled as he realized something else, something far worse. Bill bit his lip. He knew what was coming. “Jesus Christ, and I kissed you – so what the fuck does that make me?” - *grimaces* Oh my
at which point he promptly dissolved into tears. – oh poo bear, but what do you expect when you keep big secrets from those you love most?
Date: 01/15/09 02:49 pm Title: Chapter 4
18 Euros? – woah that’s fucking expensive CD that’s like 25 bucks American…you sure you meant that? They aren’t that expensive in Europe! I know I’ve bought cd’s there!
Bill stood up, holding his hands out to his sides because it helped him get more air into his lungs or something. – actually the hands on the hips thing has more to do with concentration on your diaphragm and the standing up thing, duh more air…but you knew that one.
Bill frowned. “No, what’s wrong?”
“Nothing’s wrong, it’s just… you really sound like her.”
Bill laughed nervously. “I guess I’ve listened to her too much.”
“Yeah, maybe. But you move like her too.”
“…I guess I’ve watched too many of her videos as well.” He shifted his weight awkwardly. –oops he’s catching on already!
“Um. I need to think about something.” – Yup there it is!
Date: 01/15/09 02:40 pm Title: Chapter 3
“Yeah, I… we made this bet, right, because… it’s kind of dumb, really, but somehow we came up with this plan because, see, neither of us has ever been kissed.” He looked pathetically at Bill. “And we’re sixteen, like you. None of the girls like us.” – What a little liar!
“You came to kiss me,” Bill said, trying to keep his voice from shaking. “You can do that, if you still want to. I don’t mind anymore.” – Um Bill?!...*trails off* ok?! Sure I’ll go with it.
And then Tom gave him the sweetest, gentlest kiss that he’d ever had in his life. – uh-oh this will be a mess later when Tom finds out.
Date: 01/15/09 02:09 pm Title: Chapter 2
“Corinne Berlin’s gonna be on TV tonight!” – it’s amusing how into Corinne Tom is already?! Hum?! What does that say considering it’s Bill?!
“He sounds like me,” Tom said, still smiling. – hum?! I wonder why? *scoffs and laughs while shaking head*
“You don’t want to meet her with me because you know she won’t pay any attention to you!” – it’s funny how competitive you made Tom.
Date: 01/15/09 02:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
It had been Bill’s idea, actually. He’d agreed with his mother’s desire for him to taste superstardom while still keeping his feet on the ground and maintaining a (relatively) normal social circle, but as always, he had to add his own twist to things.- um yeah odd twist!
Corinne Berlin - *giggles* I bet your tired hard to find a city/province in Germany that rhymed with a cute girl name! *smiles bemused*
Very Hannah Montana-esk...I'll give it a try but only because it's better written then most of the dribble on this site...the plot is a little thin but I feel some funny moments and hot sex. *crosses fingers*
Date: 11/29/08 02:46 am Title: Chapter 7
Gah, so beautiful! Not rushed, not cliched, but /beautiful/. Everything seemed to work in perfect sync with one another, which is sometimes lost in a fanfic. Great job =)
Date: 11/12/08 04:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, cool story! xD although I've just read the first chapter, i really liked it..! xD
Date: 11/08/08 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 7
xDDDDDDDDDD LOVE THIS CRACK-BERRY SHIZNIK hahaha. this was really good ^_^
Date: 11/01/08 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 7
this story was really cute!! i loved it!! -)
Date: 10/31/08 10:55 am Title: Chapter 7
0///0 wow luv it have a cookie *gives a cookies*
Date: 10/23/08 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 7
this story was really good. normally i wouldnt like the whole idea of setting the twins in a hannah montana atmosphere but u did it really well. good job :D
Date: 10/09/08 12:35 am Title: Chapter 7
lol i luv this!!!!!!
i almost choked on my Bailey's when i read the last line...
oh and... OMIGOD...
i need to go douse myself with water... maybe of the holy variety...
Date: 10/04/08 12:27 pm Title: Chapter 7
Great story :D I loved it ^^
xx Chi
Date: 08/31/08 09:48 am Title: Chapter 7
Liking the Hannah Montana idea... sounds weird at first but it really works!
I like this; the story doesn't drag on for too long and I like the style of writing. It's not too... dramatic
^_^
xx