Date: 06/19/11 06:00 pm Title: Bang.
Wow. That was a very very good story. It really messed with the personas we are used to. I like the unexpected and the dark when I read. And this delievered it all. :-) I loved it. The unexpected ending got my mind to start working in the best ways possible. I just wish there was more of this. Will Georg pay for it? Will Tom tell? And what would Gustav do? Stuck in the middle of his friends as he is... And what will Tom do? He DID say he wanted Georg... Many questions unanswered at the end there. As I said. This deserves a sequel. :-)
Date: 03/28/11 07:27 pm Title: Bang.
This should've been a two-shot... It's really good.
Date: 02/19/10 01:36 am Title: Bang.
I liked this because it was so bizarrely random! Not random in a this-person-can't-write way, more like random in a this-person-is-messing-with-my-expectations-while-writing-excellently way.
I was entertained and intrigued by the rapid spiraling of events and the even more abrupt ending. I like the unconventionality.
But my appreciation of these cool literary choices is much less powerful than my self-satisfying urge to just have what I want, which is MORE MORE MORE.
Write moreeeeee. :D
yes I can see it's been like a year since this was written, but I think you should write more anyway. It draws the reader in and we want to see where this could head. Lengthen the story bitte! Sequel!
Author's Response: Aww, you're so sweet! I actually was JUST thinking of going back and fixing it up when I saw this review, I know I'm a month late, sorry! Thank you so much!
Date: 01/18/10 12:05 am Title: Bang.
That was so random.
Date: 04/09/09 08:26 am Title: Bang.
more?
Author's Response: Man, I wrote more, and then my laptop crashed. I haven't really been in the mood for it, but if I get inspired...THANK YOU!
Date: 02/15/09 09:42 pm Title: Bang.
write more write more write more write more write more write more
Author's Response: I would, I would...but my laptop is out of comission right now. Explanation is on my bio. Thank you! :)
Date: 02/09/09 03:43 pm Title: Bang.
*gigglesnort* niiice. wait, so wat exactly happened at the end of this? *is confuzzled like the dumb blond she is*
Author's Response: ^_^
Date: 02/09/09 03:34 pm Title: Bang.
i am on cough meds rite now! wat a coinkidynk!
Author's Response: Whoot! I'm on chocolate that I stole from my favorite sex addict! No, not Tom. She's a lesbian version of him though...bah. XD
Date: 02/09/09 02:07 pm Title: Bang.
i dunno if it was a good or bad wow,, it was a wow. i just can't explain it. i think it's good with a little shock mixed in. just wow. d:)
Author's Response: Ah! Yeah, that was my reaction, too. I think I might have been on cough meds when I wrote this...
Date: 02/09/09 11:31 am Title: Bang.
O_o wow, that was just wow. wow wow wow.
Author's Response: Thank you! ...I think. Was that a good wow or a bad wow? I have no idea XD I'm assuming it was a good wow! Thank you!
Date: 02/02/09 09:33 pm Title: Bang.
I loved this, the description really caught my eye, and I think you did a wonderful job writing this out. I hope you do make a sequel/second part :).
Author's Response: Thank you! :) I had a lot of fun writing this, and I actually think I'm going to write a second part/sequel thing tonight, but I'm not sure if I'll finish it tonight. :) Thank you!!!
Date: 02/02/09 06:47 pm Title: Bang.
hahah that was really weird but i liked it!
and OH MY GODDD i can't fucking believe tom refused to have sex, its just WOW!!!lol
if you ever do continue it, i'll be one of the first one to read it!!!!
The end was kinda crazy though!!!lol
Author's Response: Thank you! I thrive on weirdness, always have, always will! :) And Georg was kind of...attempting to force him, and so it's kind of obvious why. I might continue it, I don't know! And I think the end was the result of reading Majestrix's Hell and High Water one too many times, what with Bill and his blades. Who knows...but thank you! :)
Date: 02/02/09 10:25 am Title: Bang.
I love where this is going, very interesting and surprising. Can't wait for more...^^
Author's Response: Thank you! At this point in time, it's staying a oneshot. I don't think there will be any more, but who knows! Thank you! :)
Date: 02/02/09 01:31 am Title: Bang.
whoa that was totally completely unexpected! like wow...it was kinda odd and all, but i have to say i enjoyed it xD i was teary eyed at the end, probably because im listening to Tokio Hotel right now but it only made it better xD it was interesting, if you ever make a continuation i will gladly read it and wait to see what happens next :]
Author's Response: Thank you! It was completely unexpected to me too, because I'm still not sure how my concept became...that. Odd is my favorite adjective! ^_^ Thank you! XD I'm thinking of maybe continuing it, but that will most likely be at some random time. Thank you!
Date: 02/02/09 01:16 am Title: Bang.
Not bad, not bad. It's not like any Torg I've ever read before. But I mean that as a compliment, of course.
Author's Response: Thank you. :) Original is almost always good, so thank you so much!
Date: 02/02/09 12:50 am Title: Bang.
Oookay. Btw, guitar strings f***ing hurt (I use them for cutting clay) and I have no idea how they could be used to pin someone up.
Different, I'll grant you that.
Author's Response: Thank you! And yeah, they can be used for tying people up. I know this for a fact, but the thinner ones are easier to tie knots with. It can be done, trust me on that one. But thank you anyways, different is usually good.
Date: 02/02/09 12:28 am Title: Bang.
well, you already know my reaction this, but I'd like to share it with the review lurkers.
this is amazing, shocking, and totally unexpected, but that is what makes this epic. Yeah, you heard me, EPIC.
Author's Response: ...Was the epic a pun? Cause it's got me snickering! XD And The Odyssey is an epic, so there you go. Ja. I went there. Danke sweetie!