Date: 02/20/09 12:50 am Title: Of Coffee Shops and Uncertainty
Love it, love it, love it!
Date: 02/04/09 06:45 pm Title: First Date
hmmmm...interesting...more soon please!!!
fern xx
Date: 02/04/09 02:43 pm Title: First Date
Lol--I liked the stephen fry part, i thought it was funny. poor tom, good thing bill is so patient. i can't wait for more, keep up the good work!! =)
Date: 02/04/09 02:39 pm Title: Of Coffee Shops and Uncertainty
Yay! Two of my favorite authors started a new story together!!! =)
Date: 02/04/09 09:39 am Title: First Date
*giggles* Poor Tomi... Seriously, he's so confused and seems so out of characters that I feel sorry for him. I don't even know if it's a good thing or not he's with Bill... He only seems to get even more confused.
“Umm…can I get the ravioli please…of the...umm...mushroom variety…" This was totally my favorite line from the entire chapter! It's so extremely funny and it portrays his inner turmoil well. On the other hand, it must feel very embarrassing.
Ooh, I wonder what happens next! Now that they're kissing... Well, I'm not sure if Tom is kissing back, but he really should! I mean, who could resist?
By the way, I thought the Stephen Fry thing was funny. And I understood it, mainly because I read about him about... one year ago, when I first heard about him. The way Tom thought about running away just like him was rather fit ^.^
Well, I can't wait for the next chapter and I hope it comes soon! Have a nice day!
Date: 02/03/09 11:14 pm Title: First Date
I liked how Bill was all like "sweetie" and "honey." The napkin bit was funny. I adore Tom's inner monologue.
The writing was high quality, but there were a few grammer mistakes.
Date: 02/03/09 10:18 pm Title: First Date
Bahaha! more please :D
Date: 02/03/09 08:25 pm Title: First Date
oooooo me likie alot the trench part was funny
Date: 02/03/09 06:47 pm Title: First Date
oh bill is such a bad boy, kissing tom like that!!lol
and yeah i also didn't get the stephen fry thingy, probably cos i'm kinda slow but whatever!!!
anyway i'm liking it even more than!!
Date: 02/03/09 05:42 pm Title: Of Coffee Shops and Uncertainty
Poor Tom! I've been in his shoes before (speechless in the face of extreme hotness). You had me cracking up.
Date: 02/03/09 05:28 pm Title: First Date
i understand the stephen fry thing!! woohoo im special!
anyway i love her nervous tommi seems its adorable adn ica nt wait for the next chapter
keep up theamazing writing
much love
xXx
Date: 02/03/09 10:35 am Title: Of Coffee Shops and Uncertainty
Um please contiune, This is a pretty good start. I really want more. Please *Does Bill's pout*, If you update soon, I'll love you forever.
Date: 02/02/09 07:15 pm Title: Of Coffee Shops and Uncertainty
i like it so far!!!!
hahahaha tom is always a funny guy=DD
i fucking laughed my ass off when he said that about the old ladies,but it is true though.lol
Date: 02/02/09 06:04 pm Title: Of Coffee Shops and Uncertainty
Oooh, sounds interesting. I can't wait to see the next chapter! I wonder what Tom's reaction is gonna be - Bill's too! :P I bet it ought to be interesting.
update soon!
Date: 02/02/09 03:14 pm Title: Of Coffee Shops and Uncertainty
lol kasimir omg bill as a slut = yummy
Date: 02/02/09 09:59 am Title: Of Coffee Shops and Uncertainty
Can't wait for more of this story. :3
Date: 02/02/09 02:36 am Title: Of Coffee Shops and Uncertainty
What a nice story! The plot sounds very interesting so far and I can't wait to see what happens when they meet!
Awww, the way you portrayed Bill's love for his job at the coffee shop was so adorable! Although his other personality is weird compared to this one, it's very intriguing and I like it :-)
What I liked best in this chapter was when Tom said that he doesn't necessarily mind being gay, but he doesn't want to be last person to know about his sexuality. So cute.
I hope you update soon and have a nice day!
Date: 02/02/09 01:54 am Title: Of Coffee Shops and Uncertainty
What a great start. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 02/01/09 10:53 pm Title: Of Coffee Shops and Uncertainty
Tom's embarassment at his "all time low" was funny and genuine.
Date: 02/01/09 10:43 pm Title: Of Coffee Shops and Uncertainty
Oh wow, I love how this was written :D the concept is good, I cant wait to read more ^.^