Date: 05/03/09 06:22 pm Title: Of Planning the Future
Aaahw, that's so sweet!
It took me about a week and a half
but I finally finished the story
and I loved it sooo much
It's a simple love story but that's the beauty of it
You describe everything exactly the right way
to make me feel like I'm there
It feels more like a movie than a story to me, because it's like I can see everything in my head
I really loved how they both open up and get attached to each other
One of the best stories I read in a long time!
Date: 05/03/09 05:31 pm Title: Of Car Sex and Triple Fudge
yay. kiss numba 2 :X
Date: 05/03/09 05:17 pm Title: Twin Jitters
ahhh
true love blossoming :D
Date: 05/03/09 05:00 pm Title: Of Being Bisexual and Wanting More
whats up with Tom thinking about Bill's hair and Bill thinking about Tom's hair when they fall asleep?
it be awesome tho :DDD
Date: 05/03/09 04:45 pm Title: Of Coffee Shops and Uncertainty
yay
Date: 04/27/09 08:20 am Title: Of Planning the Future
This was an amazing story, never got boring ,stuff just kept happening, but it didn't get to that totally unrealistic point. So awesome job, it's all super well written too. & again the story just seemed to fit somehow i dunno? Loved it!
Date: 04/25/09 04:52 pm Title: Of Planning the Future
oh, too too cute. wonderful!! i look forward to whatever comes next!!
Date: 04/23/09 09:55 pm Title: Of Planning the Future
Wow. The end of an adventure. Those boys were crazy, and I loved every minute of it! I laughed almost the whole time!
Date: 04/23/09 02:16 pm Title: Of Planning the Future
yay omg... wonderful ending dolls.. very very good... im looking forward to the next big read from ya'll ill keep an eye out. keep up the good work... luvs Goddess L`
Date: 04/23/09 10:03 am Title: Of Fantasies
Gerald's Game was one of the best books I have ever read, let alone one by Stephen King.
Date: 04/22/09 08:23 pm Title: Twin Jitters
open the door for Georg, cuss him out for showing up late – this is the funniest thing in the middle of the to do list ha ha,
“I’ll be with you in a moment.”
The male turned around and looked as if he was about to ask me a question but my hands let go of the bag in shock. Staring at me was none other then Tom mother fucking Kaulitz. – this was too be expected but done fairly well.
I glanced up and he was smirking. Oh god that’s sexy ass smirk. – weak knees lol!
Ah, Tom, if you’d come this way, I’d like to speak to you about business prospects. – does Tom want to work there or buy it?
I cannot believe I made a fool of myself in front of Tom. Wait. Yes I can. I tend to get nervous around extremely sexy men. – as Bill but not Kasimir?
Oh my god! Oh my god, my hooker is here! Noooo! Auurrgghh! - *cracks up* OMG!!! The parallel is good!
So Tom can pay for an escort but has to get a job at a coffee house? That logic’s a little fuzzy?!
"Look, why am I suddenly the bad guy? You're the..."He waved his hand in Bills direction while he searched for a fitting, though not insulting word. "...Hooker!" That probably wasn't the right one...
“Excuse me?" - *cringes*
Being pinned up against the wall having you chin squeezed by a stick figure didn't leave much room for that...- what? When did this happen? Woops left out some movement.
"Do you sleep with people for money?" He asked, almost smugly."Bet you would have slept with me."
"You rude asshole. No I don't get paid nor would I ever think of sleeping with you." Bill's eyes narrowed as he pulled back. "I don't see why I thought you were attractive last night. All I see now is a disgusting pig." – really girls? I love you…I hate you (with sexual tension)…we work it out…become friends, then fall in love again? *sigh* that’s kind of over played.
Date: 04/22/09 07:58 pm Title: Of Being Bisexual and Wanting More
If he wasn’t holding onto my lower back I probably would have collapsed, it was that instantaneous. I may have initiated it but damn, he was taking over fast. – nice!
The next thing I know, he’s pulling away and I’m whimpering for more contact. I never, ever whimper at the loss of a touch. That’s a big no-no. It’s like saying, ‘I’ll continue this without payment.’ – lol!!! No-no!
I had the urge to take him back to my place.
No. Bad Bill…Kasimir… Bad. - *giggles*
I smiled at Tom softly, playing coy. I was good at shy when I was this confused. “I had a good time too Tom. Will I see you again?” – I’d like more money want to see me again? lol
Tom mother fucking Kaulitz. – lol!
I couldn’t stop thinking about the kiss and every time I did I got butterflies. – lol!
But instead of thinking about my job and what I would have to do the next day, I thought of dreads sliding through my fingers and an adorably embarrassed man eating dinner. – awh that’s awfully cute!
I also think I might have been dribbling…Good thing he was walking away or he might have thought I was odd. Or mentally deprived…*sigh* - lol!
This smug “I’ve just pulled” daze didn’t ware off until I got back to a point halfway between my front door and my bedroom, where I sort of froze, and the fact that I’d not only been on a date with, but also made out with another guy, and I had to fight back a very immature “Ewwwww!” – lol you JUST realized this? *eye roll*
“Oh Hell Andi, would you put your fucking nipples away!?” – lol!!!
“None of your bussines, rapist.” - *snorts* very funny!
He smirked. “Can’t rape the willing, Tomi dear.” – *gasp!*
I’m still gonna have a chunk of brain that’ll always be bitter at knowing he’s technically the man who turned me bi, but hey. – lol!
“Yay!” He grinned. “Ooooo, I forgot! That café music place you applied at called, they wanna see you down there on…Tuesday...yeah, Tuesday.” - *snorts* Bill’s screwed *snorts*
Date: 04/22/09 07:44 pm Title: First Date
There was a small silver hoop on the bottom lip, to the left and his pink tongue kept flickering out to lick it. I presume it was a nervous habit because he certainly looked like he would bolt at any moment. – first thanks for not spending a lifetime describing Tom. Second Tom ha ha!!!
Oh fuck. Shit, he’s beautiful. What then Hell do I do now?! – um didn’t you want an attractive one?
I’ll run off to …Denmark, yeah, Denmark sounds good. – Denmark is close but Danish sucks to speak!
I’ll tell them I did a Stephen Fry, and that everyone has to be kind to me, that I’m on the edge. Then I’ll come back in a few years, maybe marry sad Janie, she’s always had a pathetic crush on me. Then we’ll have a couple of years of passionless sex, she’ll squeeze out a few kids and then I’ll grow old and bitter, wishing I hadn’t bolted at this exact moment… - *snorts* this is soooo funny!
“Tom…” I grunted like a troll and sat down, looking determinedly at my napkin. Nice white napkin. Nothing confusing about the napkin… - *giggles*
“Aww, is this your first time with this honey?” Kasmir asked, stirring g his drink with his straw and looking at me like I was…well, kinda like I was a really old, really confused virgin. I suffered another crushing wave of “Oh God what am I doing?!” – I love his panic!
looking up at the waiter then smiling across at me. Maybe in a flirtatious way, I can’t tell when a guy’s flirting, but I did blush so he might have been…- lol you do awkward sooooo well!
“I don’t believe for a second that a handsome guy like you needs to pay for this kinda thing,” he said, looking at me through his lashes. Okay, getting definite flirt vibes now. I felt a bit funny. Oh, there we go. Yep. I’m attracted to him. Wow. I’m either gay or bi, and somehow the last person to know. – ha ha poor Tom all confused!
“Aww, poor baby. You didn’t look too convinced when you got here though, looked ready to run. I was worried you didn’t like me…” He pouted slightly, and I nearly choked on my water. – lol a slightly slutty Bill I like it!
He looked at me thoughtfully. “Secret is it?”
“Kinda.” I answered. “I nearly came here in fucking shades and a trench coat.” – very cute
He laughed. He had a pretty laugh. Yeah, definitely gay. – ha ha!
It was about eleven, and dark. “Umm…you got a way to get home okay?” I asked, pathetically searching for the appropriate way to end this kinda thing.
“Yeah…” He answered, a small smile playing on his lips. – lol he’s trying to be subtle with a guy he’s paid for? *cracks up*
“I should proba…”
He grabbed me, quite forcefully, and pulled my lips to his, and proceeded to eat my face.
Yes, he really is very good at his job… - nice!!!
Date: 04/22/09 07:17 pm Title: Of Coffee Shops and Uncertainty
And you know, that’s all true. I’m a pretty much all round nice guy, and I do work at the coffee shop.
What these people don’t know is I’m pretty high maintenance. Not insanely so or anything, but working there doesn’t really fund my lifestyle. – what could he possibly need to have that’s so expensive? lol
“Kasimir” - *snorts* you named him after his cat? Lol!!!!
When the sun disappears out comes the daring escort that many males are more than willing to pay for. Yes, I said pay. – um yeah you have to pay for an escort. *smirks*
I love my job at the café. – plus gives you respectability
Maybe I was unlucky some times. I tended to have to sit with older men and pretend to find them interesting. And I hated when I had to have sex with the wrinkly men, but it came with the deal. – ewww but the money’s probably worth it.
It’s all Andreas’s fault. He got me drunk, okay? And I don’t just mean drunk, I mean blind, staggering, off my head. I would have fucked anything that looked at me. And, fully well aware of this, Andreas did more than look. - *snorts*
Because, even though I tell everyone that Andreas felt the need to share our little…incident with, that I can’t remember it, I really can…
…It was really good. – HOT!!!
So now I’m getting ready for a date. With a guy. I have paid for a date; I’ve reached an all time low. His names Kasimir apparently. Yeah, whatever. Oh well, at least it’s not as bad as Jasmine or Precious.
He better be pretty, I am not paying to go out with an ugly person…- *snorts*
Date: 04/21/09 11:01 pm Title: Of Planning the Future
:O its over...but it was amazing :D
Date: 04/21/09 10:40 pm Title: Of Planning the Future
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww cute-sy ending YAY YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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OH MAH FROG!!!!!!!!!!!!! IT'S OVER!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOES!!!!
*sob*
i can't wait for the new series! i'll just be sitting here waiting (notso)paitently....
*looks round the room* ... i should get some more coffee...
Date: 04/21/09 10:35 pm Title: Of the Wedding
awwwww ToT they made it!
Date: 04/21/09 09:43 pm Title: Of Shopping For Tuxs
LMAO just when i got to the last part where they arrived reden came on XD
Date: 04/21/09 07:54 am Title: Of Planning the Future
I loved it!!!!!!! :( It's the end :'( *holding a parade for the story* *lota crying going on* *cough* Okay ^^' I loved the whole story!! I can't tell which part the most!! And now I do want a sequel xD Would you mind if I made a one-shot-sequel-thingy for this :P I wanna know what they do with the kiddos (if they ever get them ;)) And my mind always surprises me xP Lolz xD Anyway, If I got the time I'll read the other story you're planning too, but I doubt it :( It'll probably in the holiday...and even then if I haven internet :( Well, byebye to the funniest story ever (noooooo) and cu l8r ;)
xx Chi ^^
Date: 04/21/09 02:49 am Title: Of Planning the Future
This was an amazing story, I know at least 3 people who were addicted to reading it. I personally would have liked it so much better if you had written about them adopting, and how they were as fathers. But other than that it was awesome