This is really, really good. Perhaps not, as you said, well categorized, but it's very good nonetheless. As usual, I really like your writing style. They who had thought themselves inured to his presence fell into him as snow upon the sea. Melted. Drowned. Lost. Transcended. Just had to quote that because it's such a beautiful line. :)

Author's Response: Aw I love you! Thank you so much.