Date: 02/04/09 05:20 pm Title: Chapter 10- Anniversary
I like it it's short but it's kind a prolouge of somethind exciting... which is coming next chapter ı feel like there's something will be happening in the next chapter (you know I have a strong sixth sense =)) So I'm waiting without breathe wright soon :D
Date: 02/04/09 04:53 pm Title: Chapter 10- Anniversary
waiting for the next one....
Date: 02/04/09 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 10- Anniversary
Oh my, what else can happen here its really good. Can't wait for more.
Date: 02/04/09 03:59 pm Title: Chapter 10- Anniversary
ahhh u left us with a sorta cliff
Date: 02/04/09 03:17 pm Title: Chapter 9- I Hate You
omg please update
Date: 02/04/09 03:04 pm Title: Chapter 4- Too Much To Handle
lol
Date: 02/04/09 02:58 pm Title: Chapter 1- Bonding Time
omg lol interesting
Date: 02/04/09 10:03 am Title: Chapter 9- I Hate You
i am checking if there is a new update every hour i am really addicted to this fic :D:D
i am thinking what s gonna happen before i sleep, when i wake up, while i m eating, watching tv
damn you are writing so good :D:D
Date: 02/04/09 08:59 am Title: Chapter 9- I Hate You
I'm reading it like maniac :D I love it. even I saw a dream about this story yesterday night :D Keep on writing :D
Date: 02/04/09 07:21 am Title: Chapter 9- I Hate You
*hopes Bill would just give in* damn, I say that every time don't I. *hits you ex*
Date: 02/04/09 07:16 am Title: Chapter 9- I Hate You
Crap, this does not look good. x_x
I guess Bill is trying to do the right thing, but still...what about Braden?! ;_;
Date: 02/04/09 03:23 am Title: Chapter 2- That's Sick
This is really kind of intersting. In a weird one-of-a-kind kind of thing. Still cool. One thing I would sugest is that in the summery it gives the impression that it is Bill who first feels something for the son. I would suggest changing it, well not changing it but maybe tweaking it a little. I hope you dont take offence because I am not trying to be mean. Just give some advice. So yeah. Great story so far.
Author's Response: ha no offence taken.
i know I am real bad at summeries.
I'll def take your advice. :]
Date: 02/03/09 11:39 pm Title: Chapter 9- I Hate You
very good!!
Date: 02/03/09 11:00 pm Title: Chapter 9- I Hate You
:) i'll be waiting for more :)
Date: 02/03/09 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 9- I Hate You
ill read it hehehehehehehe
again i will say
poor scott
Date: 02/03/09 09:28 pm Title: Chapter 9- I Hate You
I'll still read it. I like this story.
Date: 02/03/09 09:23 pm Title: Chapter 9- I Hate You
Oh, no, now you got me wondering whats going to happen next great story though keep it up.
Date: 02/03/09 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 9- I Hate You
*cries to self* what? this is sad. poor braden and bill. god i hate laws some times. *cries more* if they want to be together than they should be able to. loved the chapter and all and just so you know i'll keep reading.
Date: 02/03/09 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 8- Jealous?
i started to read this yesterday but i was at my friend's home she sent a review but i didnt now i want to say few things first, wow braden definitely knows how to flirt for a fifteen years old guy:D:D
second thank youuuuuuuu very much for updating really fast
Date: 02/03/09 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 8- Jealous?
omg.... lol...."jealous?" hahaha... dude i would tottally do that if i was braden. damn he knows how to get what he wants. how do you come up with your ideas? that is osme funny shit there..... so anyway i just wanted to say how much i loved the last two chapters, sorry for not reviewing the other one, my computer was being a bitch. and i'd also like to say that i'm glad you didn't stop the story for awhile. anyway lov ethe story and love you as a writer.