Date: 02/02/09 07:45 pm Title: Chapter 6- Never Again
awww poor branon.
and bill must feel soooo confused.
great update!!
pleeeeeeease more soon??
Date: 02/02/09 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 6- Never Again
very good
Bill is being pulled in and thats sad
poor scott
Date: 02/02/09 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 6- Never Again
*loves it*
Date: 02/02/09 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 6- Never Again
I really like this story so far! It's really different from anything that i've read thus far on the site. It's really good! Don't let one person let you get discouraged. There are far more people that like this story than those that don't. Continue the good job!
Date: 02/02/09 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 6- Never Again
more pls:)
Date: 02/02/09 06:32 pm Title: Chapter 6- Never Again
Who ever gave you a bad review in an idiot. =)
Please keep writing!
I'm really interested in how this story plays out.
Date: 02/02/09 06:32 pm Title: Chapter 6- Never Again
psh, don't listen to nasty reviews. i think this story is great! i can't wait for more. as long as you like the story, it shouldn't matter what jerks think. hugs!
Date: 02/02/09 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 6- Never Again
OH MY GOSH. I AM SO SORRY ABOUT THE BAD REVIEW YOU GOT. I DONT KNOW HOW ANYONE COULD EVER TALK BADLY AOBUT THIS STORY. ITS AMAZING AND IT PUSHES THE LIMITS. IF THE DONT LIKE IT THEY CAN GO SUCK COCK. THIS STORY IS UBER WONDERFUL. OH AND BY THE WAY........ I FEEL BAD FOR BRADEN. HES JUST BEING FORGOTTEN AS BILL TRIES TO GO BACK TO LIFE. POOR DUDE. OH WELL IM SURE IT WILL ALL WORK OUT FOR THE BETTER IN THE END.
Date: 02/02/09 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 6- Never Again
Awwww, so sad, I wonder if Bill will tell Tom.
Date: 02/02/09 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 1- Bonding Time
lol I wasn't complaining about the age though I just really don't see 14 year old with a kid. Yeah I know a couple of girls who had babies when they were like 15, 16 and I know 14 year olds have sex too but it just seams more likely to me that the younger you are the more tempting it is to take an abortion i mean being you're barely a teen when your that age. But all togheter I wasn't complaining just so you know. And I do love your story and I really like Braden!
Date: 02/02/09 05:00 pm Title: Chapter 5- Saturday
oh my gosh. that is uber wrong bill. its a good thing in most of our eyes you can do no wrong..... even if that wrong is 15..... oh well. anyway i love this story and this chapter was uber amazing. why do i keep saying uber? oh well must be my new word. i must say that uber is better than rockin. anyway great story love how its going. and i dont think there is anything wrong with scott's age. i think that he was a dumb teen and that its actually normal. so whats with the cliff hanger? do they get caught? does bill make him stop after realizing that its wrong?
!!!!!!!!
WHAT HAPPENS?!?!?!?!?!?!
Date: 02/02/09 04:46 pm Title: Chapter 5- Saturday
psht. i know what you mean.
heck, my mom was MARRIED by the time she was 15.
some people are so simple minded.
but oh my gosh. i just fall in love with this story as every chapter comes along.
Author's Response: You're my new favorite!!!! :D hehe. thank you for being on my side. you're one of few
Date: 02/02/09 04:38 pm Title: Chapter 5- Saturday
Uh-oh, I guess Bill was tempted beyond what he could bare. Why do I get the feeling that this is not going to end well. No matter how you think of it, Braden is still a minor, he may think that he wants Bill, but he may not want it in the end.
Date: 02/02/09 04:19 pm Title: Chapter 5- Saturday
I feel kinda bad now because it seems you totally took my last review the wrong way. A 29 year-old man with a 15 year-old son is fine, if you put it in the terms of a one night stand or something. But from the way Braden talks about his mum, she and his dad were really in love, and that just seems unlikely for people who had a child so young. I'm not critisizing, I mean, it's completely plausible. I'm finding it really hard to word my opinion on the situation right now so I'll shut up about that....but anyway, great chapter. I love it that Bill was surrendering a little bit more, I wonder what the outcome will be. I hope you will update soon, this is the first real Bill/OMC story that I have actually enjoyed. :)
Date: 02/02/09 04:02 pm Title: Chapter 5- Saturday
Don't care about Scott. He's meaningless BUT BILL NEEDS TO SERENDER MORE! *rocks back and forth* INSANE I tell you INSANE!!
Date: 02/02/09 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 4- Too Much To Handle
Wow a 29 year old with a fifteen year old son. That's like....really weird. But I like the story for the rest though. Call me insane but I would love for Braden and Bill to get, ahum, 'things' going haha. lol update soon plz!
Date: 02/02/09 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 4- Too Much To Handle
I like the idea behind this story, in fact I love it. But can I just point out something? Braden would have been born when Scott was 14. A 29 year-old man with a 15 year-old son is a little far-fetched if you don't explain why. Other than that I love this, it's kinda twisted, but also brilliant. I shall definitely be continuing to read this. I hope you update soon. :)
Date: 02/02/09 01:20 pm Title: Chapter 4- Too Much To Handle
XDDDD
Well, it was funny. Ps. Bill? you can use my bathroom *wiggleeyebrows*
Love this ^ Hope you update soon!
Date: 02/02/09 01:18 pm Title: Chapter 4- Too Much To Handle
haha very good ty x
Date: 02/02/09 10:30 am Title: Chapter 1- Bonding Time
Interesting concept, but math doesn't compute in my mind: 29-15?
Unless you throw in how the son was conceived somewhere in the story.