Date: 07/28/10 08:28 am Title: Side Of A Bullet
Gosh, this was so sad :'( thank god this hasnt actually happened :O im sitting her crying my eyes out just reading it bout it, if it actually happened...i think i would have amental break down :O. this was amazing :) i love how its like a journal entry :D
Author's Response: Thank you =] I think angst is probably my strong point. I'm glad you liked it!
Date: 04/07/09 01:48 pm Title: Side Of A Bullet
arg rough, so sad. It's a wonderful fic and a real tear jerker. I love angst and bill death always has a tonne of it. I just with there could be a happy ending after it all. But i have to say your ending was exquisite. =)
Author's Response: Thanks for the wonderful review =] I'm glad it was a tear jerker cause that the direction I was going ;)
Date: 02/02/09 02:49 am Title: Side Of A Bullet
I definitely do NOT love death fic and I try to skip them but... I could not stop reading this one and I liked it a lot! It deals with the matter on an original pov (some sicko who kills the singer) and, above all, it does not concentrate on death itself but on how people usually take everything for granted.
QUOTE: "Everything's so surreal. I keep thinking that I'll wake up and it would've all just been a bad dream but it's not and I'm reminded of that every morning I wake up and he's not here..."
I love the way you expressed the exact feeling that keeps creeping back after waking up... Oh, gosh, I experienced it myself and it's right this way!
QUOTE: "The thing that kills me the most is that I didn't get to say good-bye. Before we went on he said he loved me. He told me that a lot. We were brothers, and I loved him too. But I never got a chance to say it back. I always just assumed that he knew, and it wasn't until afterward that I really started to dwell on the fact that maybe I should have said something to tell him I really did care. I wish I would of, God how I'd do anything to just have one more minute with him. One more chance to tell him how much he meant to me..."
And this too. It's awful when you ran out of time and it's impossible to rewind everything and say all the unsaid...
In the end, I appreciated a lot that Tom does not give in to desperation but learns the importance of making sure the loved ones do know how much he loves them. **sees sweet Bill smiling at him from heaven**
Author's Response: Awww I love these types of comments and I'm really glad you took the time to read it. Death fics are not my favorite either but I think they are my strongest points when it comes to writing. Thanks for the review!
Date: 02/01/09 09:07 pm Title: Side Of A Bullet
nice to meet ya Marissa, so are you gonna be making any more stories like this one? or like ones that are longer? xP
Author's Response: Of course! Maybe not right away but more will come XD
Date: 02/01/09 02:20 pm Title: Side Of A Bullet
zommgs!
this was so sweeey.
i reaally liked loved this (:
bravo :D
Author's Response: Awww Thanks =]
Date: 02/01/09 10:18 am Title: Side Of A Bullet
T_T you made me cry...such a beautifully sad story. i love it.
Author's Response: Aww thanks I'm glad you liked it =]
Date: 02/01/09 05:23 am Title: Side Of A Bullet
Omg... that's so sad & sooo beautiful.
Wow, really, you should be very proud of yourself.
It was totally worth reading, so thank you for writing it!
I really like, no... LOVE it. ^^
Author's Response: Awww Yay! I'm glad you loved it =] Thanks for the review!
Date: 02/01/09 02:50 am Title: Side Of A Bullet
*hugs back* well im just happy i could read and review your story! und yay for future stories! :] p.s., hiya my names Amber :]
Author's Response: Haha I'm Marissa =]
Date: 02/01/09 02:35 am Title: Side Of A Bullet
-tears-so sad.
... The Death part reminded me of Silena. (spelling?)
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Spelling correction: Selena.
Date: 02/01/09 02:21 am Title: Side Of A Bullet
omg! awesome story! though i hate character deaths... but it was well-written! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: 02/01/09 01:52 am Title: Side Of A Bullet
yeah i have to say that angst and character death are your strong points, damn that made me cry! it was emotional and i hate reading character deaths because of that reason but this one was better than the others by far. i hope none of the boys die like that, and i hope you write more stories that rock like this one did! :]
Author's Response: You're my first comment for this story *hugs*. Thank you for the review! More stories are in the future!