O________________________O;; I cant stop reading this story. xD
And yes its loved enough to be married.
And dont worry your comparison was coo' Cause i love cupcakes xD

Author's Response: Haha, Marriage is a big step xD I think I shall do something special for Valentine's day... o.o I need more ideas :)

There's a flilm called Freaks from the 1930's that this reminds me of your story.

In the film, the physically deformed "freaks" are inherently trusting and honorable people, while the real monsters are two of the "normal" members of the circus .

The central story is of a self-serving trapeze artist who seduces and eventually marries a sideshow midget. At their wedding reception, the other "freaks" resolve that they will accept her in spite of her being a "normal" outsider, and they chanting, "We accept her! We accept her! One of us! One of us! Gooble gobble, gooble gobble! One of us! One of us!" after she mocks the freaks. Shortly thereafter, One of the circus performers overhears her talking to Hercules about the murder plot, and tells the other freaks and the master of ceremonies
; in the film's climax, the freaks attack her and Hercules with guns, knives, and various edged weapons, hideously mutilating them. Hercules, the original ending of the film had the freaks castrating him - the audience sees him later singing in falsetto. The film concludes with a revelation of trapeze artist fate: her tongue cut out, one eye gouged and legs hacked off, she has been reduced to performing in a sideshow as the squawking "human chicken".

The creation that the freaks made would have been good additions to the kaulitz bro's traveling circus because it could be used as a more effective way to torcher the unwilling and also more unusual and crestive freaks.

Love the warning that bill give which is true about being an audience member.

Bill as a contortionist and tom as a firebreather is hot.

And some funny but true line are

“I wish I can bend like that. Sex would be so much more fun.”

“I don’t think he’s human.”

“Yeah, way too pretty to be real.”

“Oh, shut up guys. Look, the Aerial Silk performers and Trapeze artists are up.”

And last one probably a woman.

I also like when bill says this to tom which I can so see the real bill saying and also hilarious

Bill glared back and flipped him a perfectly manicured middle finger, “Dear, at that’s going to do is rot your pretty white teeth and shrivel your lungs. Besides, you’re damaging my skin with that nasty gray smoke.”

“I taste better than cigarettes anyway, let me be your addiction,” he grinned and nipped at Tom’s ear as an apology.

I can't believe that tom's such a softy to the two girls

I think tom's tattoo is creative and just perfect representation of billa especially since he personally made it he really is a pro with knifes. And he defintely not afraid of pain.

When Bill came out wearing the outfit of lime green band tee with black jeans hooked onto yellow suspenders, and shiny purple it's like a homage to the twenny bill and I could also see bill now days making that outfit fierce.

And bill so cute when he says that the tattoo that tom made is sweet and that he's strange and crazy but he still loves him no matter what eventhough he himself is twisted and strange himself.

Hannah and miley are great additions to their circus freaks because as children their more likely to want to join the circus and think its cool to be altered. Bill's good at picking because they won't run away and they seem happy to be their and they love bill.

I really enjoyed reading about the room with all the devices but I would of like to see the room used during one of their creations.

Oh I liked when you talked about the few creations. I loved that you included some of their procedure and the demise of the freaks as well.

I thought that hannah was creative with her choice but miley was kind of blah with hers at least she could have choose two.

When Bill was skipping and sucking on a candy cane happily while twirling his whip it so screamed your signature. You always have bill sucking on some sort of treat while looking like an innocent and naïve child.

Like how you discribed some of the freaks that bill inspects their up keep and that he treats them all different. And he loves the girls and he keep them together how nice.

Tom's drawing resembles one of a serial killers because of the childlikeness of it. But their contributions to it were so cute.

And you always end with a romantic line and having them together like a normal couple in totally devoted love.

and I like your banner kind of creepy aren't all circus's. so love your oneshots can't believe you updated your story plus this.

Author's Response: I just love it when you review, because you're so detailed and percise with everything. It truely makes me understand the strong points of what I've written, and it's amazing. I'm so lucky to have such a faithful reviewer like yourself, it's wonderful. I like that I have a "Signature" now, because it's just so damn COOL. The movie sounds very interesting, and you're right, the trapeze artist really should join the Kaulitz circus! From now on, I'm going to try to update the other story plus an oneshot- Because I love you all so much! I'm honestly supposed to be sleeping right now, because I'll be falling asleep in school if I stay up any later. But it's worth it to read your review. Thanks so much yet again! :)

I really liked this.
It was so interesting. =)
(oh my god, no clowns. THANK YOU!)XP

Author's Response: Haha, clowns freak me out too. I just don't see amusement in a strangely colored man in makeup, making balloon animals and touching little children. xD I'm glad you like it!

Oh mein gott, this was good... I had to wait all day to read it and it almost drove me mad! ooh it was sexy scary and interesting. Amazing job!

Author's Response: Why did you have to wait all day to read? :) I'm glad you like this!

omgggg i love it!!!

Author's Response: Thanks :)

I love how bizarre this is. It really makes the fic different which is sometimes hard to find on this site, lol. Either way I love it. And Tom is so cute x)

Author's Response: Tom and his crayons, don't you want to take a picture of that?! xD Bill's adorable too!

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i LOVE this story so much! (:
And Bill is so sweet to their circus people ;D

Author's Response: Do you love it enough to marry it? xD Bill's just one big, sweet, yummy cupcake! That was a weird comparasion...

You are so amazing I can't believe it, this was so well done and creepy and I loved it, and now this story won't go to my favorites... this time you'll go, 'cause you made me love all your bloody, creepy fics :D

Author's Response: Wow, I'm going to be on your favorites? o.o THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU! I feel so happy. Aww, I'm glad you enjoyed this story. I thought about doing something like this for a while, but I didn't know if anyone would enjoy it. :)

i've actually come to love when bill and tom are being all creepy and stuff - so great story :)

That was mental but i very much enjoyed it! =))

Author's Response: Haha, It IS quite mental, isn't it? I'm glad you enjoyed :)