Date: 02/03/09 11:59 pm Title: Letting Go, Jumping In
Oh mai gawd yay! That was amazing!!! So sweet and sensual! Ooh I loved the hell out of it, keep up the fabulous work!
Date: 02/03/09 11:47 pm Title: Letting Go, Jumping In
uh oh. gordon heres them getting it on with the walkie doesnt he? that cant be good oh my gosh this is so not fair. i hate waiting. why is ittha life always makes the impatient wait? anyway love the story so far. its UBER EPIC!!!!
FIVE STARS
Date: 02/03/09 11:22 pm Title: Letting Go, Jumping In
This chapter was really good. I liked how you switched the POV to Bill's present. It was a nice break of things.
Date: 02/03/09 01:14 pm Title: Fire Rethought
Awww! That's beautiful!
Date: 02/03/09 04:25 am Title: Fire Rethought
Aww. Poor Billa in his thoughts. :(
Date: 02/03/09 12:40 am Title: Fire Rethought
ohmigod they slept together! yay but at the same time wah! next time you make them do a sex scene, could you please add a little more details to it just to make the people reading it read what Bill experiences? if u dont its cool but still xD i luved it no matta what!
Date: 02/03/09 12:34 am Title: Thunder and Lightning
the ending made my stomach turn in a good way, that was sweet but i have to say, FINALLY! sheesh i was wondering when that would happen xD well i gotta read the next chappie, anticipation growing every second!
Date: 02/03/09 12:34 am Title: Fire Rethought
Simone is a smart mother!! And Bill is stupied.
Love it so please give me more.
Date: 02/02/09 11:03 pm Title: Fire Rethought
this is really good and i like the way confusion and love are equally involved in bill's mind..as well as tom's. really great. you should deffinatly write and add more soon. =]
Date: 02/02/09 11:02 pm Title: Fire Rethought
awwww everyone knows :P bills in denial =P lets hope he figures it out soon!!!
Date: 02/02/09 08:54 pm Title: Fire Rethought
Yay cool momness! Ooh I didn't think they'd go so far in the first encounter but I love that they did... and during a storm.. how sexy! :P I love this and keep i up because... i love it XD
Date: 02/02/09 08:44 pm Title: Fire Rethought
Gotta love how moms can just pick up on things like that
Date: 02/02/09 08:39 pm Title: Fire Rethought
wow... way to go Simone? *cough*
Date: 02/02/09 08:05 pm Title: Thunder and Lightning
WOOOO!!!! A Georg cake! *dances happily* Thank you.
This was a great chapter. I'm glad they kissed, though I also hope they find Raine...
Date: 02/02/09 08:02 pm Title: Thunder and Lightning
plzplzplzlzpplzplz update soon..i luvz this=]=]=]
Date: 02/02/09 06:01 pm Title: Thunder and Lightning
AWE!!! and I pick... RONNIE for escape the fate! most definitly... haha! *love*
Date: 02/02/09 05:55 pm Title: Thunder and Lightning
Finally! A kiss! More please!
Date: 02/02/09 05:45 pm Title: Thunder and Lightning
Oh gawd... that was an intensely beautiful mental image! Ooh i can't wait for more, I was so excited to read that you've got most of it written out already XD Keep up the fabuous work!
Date: 02/02/09 05:40 pm Title: Thunder and Lightning
Awwww! =] That was cute!
Date: 02/02/09 05:14 pm Title: Thunder and Lightning
awe yay!