Date: 02/26/09 04:32 am Title: Chapter three
is it his mami?
Date: 02/26/09 04:27 am Title: The View
earthquake? were do ya live?! O.o
this is good!
Author's Response: yeah... Washington... it was a 4.3 i think vary mellow but still i could have been crushed XD
Date: 02/19/09 07:30 pm Title: Hidden Pictures.
this chapter made me question things more. tom is defintely hiding something and he's stalking bill. he's like obsessive with everything about him. he already knew about things. and then he noticed that bill was watching him run. if I didn't know better I'd say he was a vampire or somethings like that. but I don't know he's a total mystery. I like that you reveal more about him but it just makes him more mysterious.
wow this story is defintely getting better. you surpise me everytime. more soon I really am hooked.
Author's Response:
Good... :] I love Tom in this story I really hate that this Charactered Tom hunts my dreams though But I love it at the same time. you will find all this out in due time. I am glad that i can do that.
THAT IS A GOOD THING!:'D
Dont worry More soon... I hope that is if I can find the muse .
Date: 02/19/09 06:33 pm Title: Hidden Pictures.
wow..wats going on?...plz update soon thx=]
Author's Response: Not telling... :D and I will hopefully sooner this time.
Date: 02/11/09 08:55 pm Title: Mom.
wow I didn't see bill just coming out with the truth thought he would deny being her son. so you totally throw me for a loop.
tom taking bill's place is making bill a little jealous and angry. can't wait to see what bill want to say to tom.
and I assume that layla's going to warn bill about telling humans that their vampire's. so can't wait to see where you go from here and more about their conversations.
Author's Response:
He loves his mom though he couldnt lie to her. yeah the green monster got Bill big time.
>=D I am going to through you for another loop just watch out!
Date: 02/11/09 06:50 pm Title: Mom.
plz update soon..and dont make it b stupid where he has 2 hide hees a vampire from tom thatz retarded plz dont..thx=] i luvz u and this=]
Author's Response:
He wont hide it... But there is a twist. =D
Date: 02/07/09 02:56 pm Title: Chapter three
its very good but please write the next chapter soon
i cant wait
xDDD
Author's Response:
Mmk...
I shall try... >.< to get working on it sooon :D
Date: 02/07/09 12:37 am Title: Chapter three
yeah it was good.
I knew once tom was talking about simone that bill's mom would remember him.
I wonder why the kids don't like tom?
leaving us with a suspenseful cliffhanger what's simone going to say or do about bill.
Author's Response:
YAY!!
Really? oh pooopie...
That is a SURPRIZE >D It will ROCK YOU!!!
and about Simone, Oh she is going to ___________________________ BILL_______________!!!! =O
Date: 02/02/09 06:07 pm Title: The Prologe
okay hope you write it soon
xDD
Author's Response: I am writing it now. :]
Date: 02/02/09 01:38 pm Title: The View
how does layla look like?
tom is always smirking... lol
xD
Author's Response:
hehe yeh he is.
You will find out soon :D next chappie.
Date: 02/02/09 03:37 am Title: The View
its getting better but I'm confused it's like 18 years after bill got turned and he's going back to school right and layla is a vampire too now right and she's around like 16 or something and that's all I can't wait to see what happens at school for them. and bill seems happy with his new life and family.
Author's Response: I know ... Yes it is, Hes going back because it was before his final year of school he was turned. Layla is vampire because she was born from the womb of Vironnie. Yes that is basicly her age. Bill is happy with them he like them alot.