Date: 03/24/09 06:33 pm Title: Prologue
:O
great!
Author's Response: :O thanks!
Date: 03/24/09 06:29 pm Title: Plaything
gosh can you stop writing amazing stuff already!
you make everyone else look bad!
Author's Response: lol, why thank you. :)
Date: 03/24/09 06:19 pm Title: Plaything
whoops, sorry about the caps. :S
Author's Response: nah, it's fine. it was run to read LIKE THIS. :P
Date: 03/24/09 06:19 pm Title: Plaything
AMAZING QUOTE!
IT WAS REALLY NEEDED FOR THE STORY.
NOW I JUST HAVE ONE QUESTION: IS THE THING TRUE? THE ONE ABOUT COLOR AND ABOUT HOW BLACK MEANS SUBMISSION?
Author's Response: awe, thanks. and yeah, i'm like... totally into psychology, and i thought i'd put some of my knowledge into her brain. :P
Date: 03/24/09 06:18 pm Title: Inconveniences
bahahahaha! i love how annoying Carly is.
and i feel like Bill, too. i hate it when people ask stupid questions. it's annoying. '-___-
Author's Response: lol, i love that about her, too. i don't really mind the annoying questions because i think that people are just trying to be nice.
Date: 03/24/09 06:17 pm Title: Volunteer
OHHHH!
and the chapter name goes with the chapter. i lik eit when authors do that. ;]
Author's Response: thanks. :)
Date: 03/24/09 06:16 pm Title: Volunteer
that was really disgusting, but realy good at the same time.
Author's Response: thank you...
Date: 03/24/09 06:13 pm Title: Prologue
that was a very well writeen first chapter.
i'm interested now, and i'll keep you posted on how i feel about all the other chapters. because thiss eems like it's going to go haywire sometime soon.
Author's Response: oh, why thank you! i'm looking forward to it. :)
Date: 03/24/09 06:11 pm Title: Plaything
wow!!! that was really good.
i can't wait to read more of this amazing story.
please post more soon.
Author's Response: thanks, i'm glad you like it.
Date: 03/24/09 06:11 pm Title: Inconveniences
lol. how do you not know where it comes from? i mean, the inspiration has to come from SOMEHWERE!?
Author's Response: lol. well, i'm into psychos... so, i guess it comes from their minds, and just about EVERYTHING i read on them. and that's ALOT. and, erm, ja.
Date: 03/24/09 04:29 pm Title: Plaything
omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg. omg.
:O
that was amazing. :)
Author's Response: wow. that was a lot of "omg's." thanks :)
Date: 03/23/09 10:09 am Title: Prologue
I just realized there is an insane amount of spelling errors in my below comment. Teach me not to proofread. (Especially whilst running off no sleep) Well, great job, once again!
Author's Response: lol. No, that's fine. I made an unbelievable amount of spelling mistakes whenever i write, too. So, it's no big deal. And thank you, again. :)
Date: 03/23/09 10:08 am Title: Prologue
You're quite welcome! I am very excited to see how his personality will match up with Albert Fish's. He was a very interesting man, even going to far as to write to the parents of the little girl he killed and ate. I won't get into detail on what he said was the best part of her body to eat, but it wasn't pleasant. Yes, the mentallity of serial killers surely is something of interest to me, which may seen very weird, and that may be why I am very excited to see how this goes despite the fact I am not a het fan. I, oddly, am very into the idea of getting into the heads of serial killers, which you have replied to saying you wanted the readers to get into the mind of Albert through the portrayal of Bill. It's very interesting idea! Having a wide variety of 'In The Life of So and So the Serial Killer' books that range from Manson to Gacy to Dahmer, I read a lot of the subject and find it very interesting that I found this story, and can't wait to see how you go with it and how Bill developes. I personally have been hammering the idea of a serial killer fic back and forth in my mind, wondering if I should or shouldn't, questiong whether it would even be ready or not, but now I feel as if I couldn't even compare to what you've got going on so far! I bow down to you, dear author whose own love serial killer stories matches to mine. Great job so far, and I hope you don't make me like het. I think that would take the most amazing het story to change my mind, so stop making this so very good! Ah, I'm kidding. It's fantastic, though. I'm glad I stumbled across it.
Author's Response: You have no idea how much I love you right now. I have never found anyone who also has an obsession with the mind of serial killers. I probably spend more time with books, video tapes, and research on them, then I do with my parents and friends. Albert Fish, Charles Manson, and Jeffrey Dahmer have got to be my Top 3 favorites. They're really inspirational to me when writing this story. And honestly, thank you for all your lovely comments. I also had this idea running in my head for a long period of time, and when I told my English professor about it, he told me that if I was thinking about it THAT much, that I should just go ahead and write it. So I did. :) And this is where it got me. Thank you, again, I'm glad that you happened to stumble across this too.
Date: 03/23/09 02:24 am Title: Prologue
I've laughed and cringed at many things in this story so far. It's interesting, to say the least. Hope you continue, I'm definitely tracking
Author's Response: thank you. ^_________^ i really wanted to give mixed emotions with this story. :)
Date: 03/22/09 08:37 pm Title: Prologue
I didn't read this entire story, I probably will once I get my ass in gear. I am far too lazy at the present time, however there is a reason I am commenting. Albert Fish. What a messed up man. I think he is one of the only very famous serial killers I don't have a book on. I enjoy how you used his quote. I will read this soon, and comment again. The first chapter was already quite well done, and I look forward to the rest despite the fact I hate het. stories and Bushido. Well, very well done thus far and I am sure the next three chapters will be worth the read.
Author's Response: Thank you! You have no idea how much your comment means to me. I get very few Slash readers, but when I do, I get ultra happy. So once again, thank you. And about your comment on Albert Fish: I found Albert Fish to be the best example of Bill's personality which will appear later on in the story. He will also have the same pleasurable needs as him, and I wanted to show people who didn't know who Albert was, a look inside the mind of a REAL serial killer.
Date: 03/10/09 07:57 pm Title: Inconveniences
wow. this stuff, is amazing.
btw, i liked bill's reactions to carly.
it was funny.
well done. :)
Author's Response: thank you. :D
Date: 03/10/09 07:57 pm Title: Volunteer
wow.
that was uhm... strange?
Author's Response: ... is that good or bad?
Date: 03/08/09 06:49 pm Title: Inconveniences
Oh, LOL. I was just laughing at Bill the entire time Carly was annoying him xD
Author's Response: lmfaooo! yeah, i wanted to show how much Bill hates socializing.
Date: 03/08/09 05:38 pm Title: Inconveniences
where do you come up with this stuff?
actually, i don't want to know. i think i'm better off not knowing.
:) post more soon.
Author's Response: hahahaha. honestly, i don't know where from. it just comes to me. and i'll post asap. :)
Date: 03/08/09 05:37 pm Title: Volunteer
jeez. thats really creepy.
but i like it.
it's good.
Author's Response: OH! thanks.