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Reviewer: IndigoKitti Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/06/09 03:51 am Title: Chapter 4

Aw, super cute. :DDDDDD
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Great Story. :D

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

Reviewer: icequeenqt170 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/06/09 12:57 am Title: Chapter 4

Awsome! cant wait for more! if there is?

Author's Response: There IS going to be another part. I just kinda sorta need to write it first. :D

Reviewer: himisoko Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/03/09 09:44 am Title: Chapter 3

Two chapters! How did I miss one!? Or did you post them together? At least it made for a nice long read ^^ and I especially liked the whole David connection thing -- very clever.
Here's a question -- does the Emperor ever get embarrassed? I think Tom needs to explain to him why tongue studs are so appealing, just so we can see a pretty blush on his face for once ;)

Author's Response: Chapter Two was posted the day after Chapter One, so it might have slunk in too soon to notice it. Bonus on getting two at once for you, though! :D

E does get embarrassed, but he's more or less trained himself out of really reacting to it. Showing embarrassment (or a whole freaking RANGE of other emotions) during negotiations and such tend to work against a person. Alone with Tom, however, he can let those guards down and could most definitely blush most prettily. <3

Reviewer: pattylake Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/03/09 08:48 am Title: Chapter 3

Oh this just turns me into goo. Total goo. I love it so much. I also like that tom keeps getting jealous of bill. That seems like it would be a problem seeing as how the emperor loved and lost his bill. But I am in total love with this world of yours, please bring me more soon. :D

Author's Response: The Emperor takes good care of his Prince. <3

E's definitely attracted to Bill, history and all, but he's not there for Bill, he's there for Tom. His affection for Tom is stronger than any residual lust he may have for Bill. That doesn't mean it's easy on him, though.

There will be more sooooooon.

Reviewer: lovemcr07 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/03/09 04:38 am Title: Chapter 3

aww..
so sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeet, man.




MORE MORE MORE PLEASE!!!

Author's Response: Why yes, there is more. :)

Reviewer: icequeenqt170 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/03/09 12:59 am Title: Chapter 3

naughty, naughty! lol keep it comin!

Author's Response: They's making up for lost time. ;)

Reviewer: lovemcr07 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/01/09 03:58 am Title: Chapter 2

goodness.
They fuck like rabbits.
xDDD


Please....DON'T GIVE THE EMPEROR STDs!!!

I BEG YOU!!!
THERE'S TOO MUCH STRESS IN MY BRAIN AND ANY MORE SADNESS[especially from this fic] WILL MAKE ME EXPLODE MY ENTRAILS OUT!!!


eww. that sounded gross.

I trust you.
Hope you update more soon, love!

Author's Response: They've only got a day to fill up on a month's worth of dry spell. MUST BONE MORE.

*shifts story away from potential entrail explosion* ...ew. Test results won't be back for like a week at LEAST, so E's gonna be long gone back to Basai before Tom even finds out what's going on. (aka - totally not finding out what sort of nether pox the Emperor may or may not have this time, wah ha!)

More updates impending!

Reviewer: billliebttom Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/31/09 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 2

lulz

Author's Response: ;)

Reviewer: fluke Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/31/09 09:46 am Title: Chapter 2

uhm, at least david's a bastard not in this dimension:) though he might have already started thinking how to make profit on kaulitz triplets - the more the merrier xd
tom's taking things seriously, good boy! well, it's time he should be - he's soon-to-be basai queen:)
thank you for your story once again!

Author's Response: Nope, no murdering Jost in our world. :)

Tom's totally taking the whole thing seriously. He's dedicated to the idea now, so he figures they might as well make the most of the whole thing.

Reviewer: pattylake Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/31/09 09:36 am Title: Chapter 2

Oh yay! Another chapter! And lmao at the emperor trying to make david squirm. Love it!

Author's Response: Making David squirm is the only way he's going to feel better about the car ride. As long as he's got Tom securely affixed to his face, it's going to be the best ride EVER.

Reviewer: shadow Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/31/09 04:23 am Title: Chapter 1

P.S. damn, u're da only author dat has got me 2 read chapterz twice consecutively! I do tend 2 go over my fav stories later on, after some time, but nooo, wit dis series I just feel dis urge&need 2 reread it immediately!
Separately from everythang else, I hav a question!! u postd anotha infamous cookie yestaday wit T&Emp. vampires, turnin' innocent Bill as well! Xceptional, but is there perhaps a plan 2 develop dat course???!!! aside from 'da next step', of course!!!! just, it was allurin', enticin', lascivously arousin'... eh, just a thought! u know ya schedule&intentions! funky fresh, keep da juices flowin' :):):)

Author's Response: *purrs*

The Tom/E/Bill vampire cookie was just a one shot for fun, not something that's going to go on in the story its self. This story's already nice and scripted out, it just needs the writing done on it. The vampires get to play somewhere else. :)

Reviewer: shadow Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/31/09 04:11 am Title: Chapter 2

u will... u will ROCK us!!!! I soooooo luv dis beautiful series, I'm utterly mesmerizd, it's my favourite ever, no xaggeration!! I don't mean 2 b tacky wit da praise, but I'm hookd, I gotta admit dat&xpress my admiration! I'd been checkin' 4 a post of dis new installment every single day since 'a lil' visit' was concluded, so 2 chapterz in such a brief span of time, wow, u're spoilin' us! no 2 mention, u warnd bout da 'decliciously long' intro, but u ain't given ya reader fanz a preview of da content, da xplosively raunchy, delicious, fantastic beginnin' of dis 'next step' of their relationship, after all dat foreplay&dat tangible, electric tension between those 2, the fallin' in love&wooin' process, remarkably seductive, slow&sweet! all very 'natural'&genuine! word up 4 da title choice, pure genius! talk bout da epitome of narcissism, which u totally justify as a positive feature&a worthy quality, best connection/(inter)action u can hav is wit yaself! u'r wickdly good, it's bafflin'!!!! update just as soon, I know what's 2 come's gonna b a riot, entertainin' humour&those 2 makin' up 4 all dat coy fumblin', da Emp. dserves laurels 4 his patience, romance, understandin', tenderness&a whole lot of hot cumin' 2getha wit T... there's soooo much they still can&hav 2 get up 2... I can't wait!!! literally, all wound up, jittery, gigglin', vibratin' anticipatingly!!!
On a different note, seriously, thanx 4 enrichin' us wit ya amazing fiction&allowin' everybody a glimpse of ya xquisite talent!

Author's Response: *most favourited!*

Considering the content of the story (alternate realities and Tom being royalty and all), I thought that the romance between the pair should be at least halfway believable. It needed build up, time to take root in Tom's head first, get him adjusted to the idea instead of just going 'hi there, let's bang!' AND I wanted the readers to like E and want him and Tom to be together. <3

You all are very welcome for my talent. :D

Reviewer: icequeenqt170 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/31/09 12:34 am Title: Chapter 2

lol I like alot! keep it comin!

Author's Response: Tis the plan. :)

Reviewer: Steinsgrrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/30/09 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 1

Gaja...

I had to read it again.

*_*

I heart you

Author's Response: <33333's my dear. :D

Reviewer: icequeenqt170 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/30/09 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 1

Its about BLOODY time time those to did it! lol keep it comin!

Author's Response: ikr? Tom, being all sorts of a hold out like that. ;)

Reviewer: Tamara Kaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/30/09 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ohhh HAWT DAAAAAAAAYYYYYUMMMM!!!!! :P

Author's Response: *winks*

Reviewer: pattylake Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/30/09 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh my dear. First of all you have thrilled me to death by posting this. I can't wait for more. And more. This is my favorite series. I'm in love with your emperor and his never ending tenderness. And I'm in love with your Tom and how he melts into it. They both fill me with tenderness and bless you for bringing them back again and not breaking my heart. Love it so much!

Author's Response: You're in luck if you want more, cause there's nothing BUT more coming with this story. :)

Favourite series? Omg, flattered!

The Emperor is a lovable thing, isn't he? How could Tom not melt for him? <33

Reviewer: Lrigrl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/30/09 08:46 pm Title: Chapter 1

Aw, that's so sweet! That's not it, is it? Will there be more chapters?

Author's Response: There are more chapters coming. :D

Reviewer: judith182 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/30/09 07:00 pm Title: Chapter 1

you should really makes this fic and mpreg it would totally spice it up.

Author's Response: O_O

Reviewer: Militheach Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/30/09 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 1

"but you did just willingly sample my release, which I find staggeringly erotic." This line made me laugh. I just love the Emperor's dialogue. It's easy to understand but not the same as what I hear everyday. Warm fuzzy feelings for this story. Can't wait for more updates. ^_^

Author's Response: The Emperor is just a little more upscale in his speech than you're average Joe. He's ~*flowery*~. :D

*wraps up in the warm fuzzies* Mmmm.

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