Date: 10/10/09 12:50 pm Title: In The Heat Of The Night
this story is amazing, i love it. the attention to detail is so good!! i can't wait for the final chapter
Author's Response: Aww thank you, so much (= I think you are right, when I think about it, I really include a lot. It's probably because I want to be able to imagine everything as realistic as possible.
Date: 10/10/09 12:46 pm Title: In The Heat Of The Night
So guess what?... I woke up and this was posted =P Just as I had hoped! Anyway, I know I said I would leave you a 10 000 word review but that's a little unrealistic isn't it? Hopefully you won't be disappointed by less.
Okay, where to begin? Well, obviously I loved the top Bill. You described the scene just how I would have imagined it. Very loving, filled with passion and romantic with just the right amount of lust and horniness. You know I like it when the twins take it slow =) Oh and I have to say that one of the twins sexing up the other with one completely lying over the other is one of my fantasies... so thank you *bows down to Andy*
The food play was of course scrumptious. Explain to me why I can't lick off chocolate sauce from Bill's star =P No but really, the sorbet and the chocolate was very sensual. 0_O oh and Tom licking Bill's fingers... can I say HOT?
Th dialogue brought spice and some of them were really funny. The whole roman thing, with the slave girls. Expect Tom to mention them. They usually wore sparse clothing, didn't they? =P
And I just had to mention that they way you described Bill at the beginning made him seem so innocent and just lovable in general. This feeling was totally reinforced when he says, "You mean you don't usually taste this good?" rofl
So all in all, beautiful job! You have talent!
Author's Response: Yeah, like I promised that it would be ready for you =P Thanks for being such a loyal fan and good friend :D Of course I'm hugely disappointed that it's not going to be 10,000 words; after all this story has 14,436 words .__. Nah, I'm just kidding. I love to get feedback from you, not matter how many words it is! You like the top!Bill scene of chapter 3? *blush* Aww thanks, I'm glad that I could include all that what you said it has got. I wanted this scene to be at least as intense as the shower scene from before >__> And after all, your idea was simply too good not to extend it to a whole twin-thing. Great to gradually find out about your (twin-) fantasies too *winks* I can picture that very well actually, so yeah, I'm sure it's nice for them =P Isn't it unfair that you don't get to lick off that sauce from Bill's star? >__< I wished I could help you with that. I'd even offer to help holding him if he squirms too much. Coz you know that he'd so totally do that. And pant. He's so very sensitive there, I just can tell. And he just wants a little love and caring, and craves to be touched (= Yeah, I actually didn't notice until people told me that this finger licking stuff is actually quite hot indeed, lol. You are right about the sparse clothing *blush* In this case, the twins were beating them. I've never mentioned it specifically, but after the undressing right in the beginning, there are no more clothes of any kind :O I think that it was really warm in there, but IRL they would have probably just slipped into a hoodie in the breaks in between, when sitting on the couch and eating, for example. Yes, just a hoodie, nothing else ;) I'm always really happy to hear that people like my Bill characterization – of course I'm curious to know what you think about some parts of chapter 4, especially the very beginning, or the way he reacts when Tom is a bit down. There is the danger to end up too corny and cheesy, you know? Thanks again, Charlotte! *hugs*
Date: 06/13/09 01:38 am Title: Replenishment
The hedgehog part made me laugh. I guess they would have to do it very, very carefully. ...Come to think of it, how would that work? Poor hedgehogs. Getting stuck with needles everytime they want to fuck. -sigh- what a sad existence. Anyway, I loved this so much, I wish you could have more for me (no one else counts XD) soon. You're wonderful, an amazing writer!!! exes and ohs.
Author's Response: Thank you! Ugh, this studying is getting on my nerves, and I hate to leave this one unfinished for probably another 2 months :( (sorry for that as well as for my super late response to your review) Can't help you with the hedgehogs' love life; you might wanna check Discovery Channel for that ^__^ Wow, thanks for your kind words! *xo right back*
Date: 02/28/09 01:12 pm Title: Replenishment
Wow, this one is a killer...
Author's Response: Thanks a lot :) Uhm, and I think that Tom would agree...he's lucky bastard! :P
Date: 02/26/09 12:29 pm Title: Replenishment
No, I wouldn't mind a top!Bill scene. Actually I would love it! ;)
Normally I like to read stories where is top!Tom but nowdays I have to read every now and then a story with top!Bill ;)
Can't wait to see what will happen.
Kat
xx
Author's Response: I was only teasing, of course I know you'd love it. (= Aaaaand what can I say - this would be a lousy story IMHO if they wouldn't take turns, and if I have them doing it like bunnies all over the place, we might as well take advantage of the situation...so I'm pretty sure that the fans of Bill to top will get their share :P
Date: 02/26/09 09:42 am Title: Replenishment
Greetings Andy,
Very good and very hot too ;)
“Whatever, next time it's my turn to fuck your brains out in the shower.”
I would so love to read about that! ;)
Kat
xx
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Kat! I'm happy that you liked it so far. Oh, I didn't realize that this small thought of Bill would cause such an commotion! I see that you wouldn't mind a top!Bill scene, ja? Since I have the opinion that it's only fair between twins to share things, chances are quite good. Just maybe not in the shower :P & xxx
Date: 02/26/09 09:17 am Title: Replenishment
You already know I love this update. What I like about the way you write the twins is that you can always see how much they deeply care for each other. And the sex in this was also very hot, of course!
Oh, and do I detect a little foreshadowing about some top!Bill coming up? I hope so!
Author's Response: First of all, thank you again for getting the beta reading done on such short notice – your suggestions were so valuable! And it's truly an honor, to say the least! Yeah, I agree, I have a weak spot for their deep affection, but it's probably a tad too mushy sometimes. Glad that you liked the shower sex, it was a challenge, especially finally writing about them doing “the real thing”. You would like to read top!Bill? Well of course I won't give away any details, but you can always hope, right? ;-) And after all, you know me...
Date: 02/26/09 08:47 am Title: Replenishment
My brain has melted into a puddle of goo! This fic is so sensual and sexy, and I love how it's in several parts. It drags everything out longer (which is always a good thing) and allows for more *ahem* "developments" to occur! ;) Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Awww thanks, really! Yeah, I wanted to have the twins doing it hot and very sensual, and I'm so glad it didn't turn out to be too smutty (or at least not exclusively). And it seems that we'll have to restore your brain! I don't wanna leave a teaser, but indeed, we have more “developments to occur”, for example eating strawberries, lol! rn
Date: 02/26/09 01:50 am Title: Replenishment
Holy hell, really.
This is such an amazing fic - with all the cuteness, the affection, and all the hot sex.
The thought that they want each other so much that they just do it all night long.. yummy.
I really really want a Hawaii now, though.
Author's Response: Thank you – especially for noticing the other parts; I think I could never really settle for pure smut, so I absolutely appreciate it! Yeah, somehow this seemed reasonable to me, if they can only have such a quality time every second month or so, that they'll just make the most of it, concerning every aspect of their relationship. LOL you know what – Pizza Hawaii is actually among my very favorites too :P
Date: 02/26/09 12:56 am Title: Replenishment
I loved it! That shower scene is just WIN. I love the playfulness, everything is so realistic. This is really great! Love love love!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Ronda! I really should have given you more credits for the small part where the colors of Bill's eyes change, I love it so so much! And yayyy, what can I say – “my” twins lost their innocence! I'm happy that you liked the second scene as well, when they're just boys, messing around & being the lazy lads that they are! xoxo
Date: 02/25/09 10:22 pm Title: Replenishment
GAH.
Hot sex.
& yummy food :(
Author's Response: Oh, thanks! But the twins only need a very small break (= I'm glad that you found the shower sex hot; it was my “first time” for the twins to make love...
Date: 02/17/09 08:58 am Title: Blowing Off The Steam
I will check-in again to see more! This was so hot!
Can't wait to see what's coming ;)
xx
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I remember you from MTT of course :)
Date: 02/10/09 04:21 pm Title: Blowing Off The Steam
I'm speechless ._.
you know you made my day
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Shady! I'm glad that you liked it so far, really. And I still can't believe that your biggest wish finally came true -- from the bottom of my heart, congratulations!! You deserved it! (=
Date: 01/31/09 03:30 am Title: Blowing Off The Steam
u've put nasty thoughts in my mind
and it'll hunt me all day
u can't be a girl and write so good *wink*
i hope to read more soon
Author's Response: Haha, well, I won't apologize for it :P Probably you had a great weekend then. I'm not sure if it depends on the gender how good you write, but I probably have another perspective, agreed.
Date: 01/30/09 11:21 pm Title: Blowing Off The Steam
Dude, how much more of this can you write without your brain exploding??? I'm seriously impressed, beucase mine just did.
Author's Response: LOOL! Brain overload? Ah, dang! But seriously, it's a lot of fun writing this. So no worries, I'm up to it :P But I'm afraid that the continuation will kinda finally 'blow your mind', or what's left of it, to use Bill's words... (=
Date: 01/30/09 08:50 pm Title: Blowing Off The Steam
I think this is the best thing I have ever read. Seriously. I can't even put into words. I'll write a better review after my heart stops racing and my hands stop shaking and I take care of some, um, personal business...
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so so much! Maybe it was the heat of the twins' night that was a bit too much ;) And yeah, come back later when you're...errr...done, lol. Good old shower, cold as ice, always helps to come down! XD
Date: 01/30/09 06:39 pm Title: Blowing Off The Steam
O_O
Nais. VERY nais ;)
Author's Response: Haha, thanks! I'm still blushing a bit coz I never really wrote hardcore before (you can't I'll Make It Up To You call that), so to imagine that my smut is out there... Happy that you liked it! xD
Date: 01/30/09 04:27 pm Title: Blowing Off The Steam
Well, first of all, you're welcome, though I believe I've said that enough times already. ;) I... well, I really love it. How could I not? I like the whole idea behind it, the twins perfecting an escape plan of sorts so not completely lose their sanity; not actually having time for fucking on the road. Love the smut as well, of course. I did like the it better in your first story (sorry, completely forget what it was called), don't really know why. [...] pulled by his dick as if it was a leash - LOVE that line because god, it's so true. ;) Dunno what else to say... Can't wait for you to update!! (:
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Yes you said it many times, but I'm still grateful for your patience with me :) There are significant differences to "I'll Make It Up To You" of course, and I'd like to think that it was no real smut there. I like it how you describe it, “not to lose their sanity”, like if they would actually lose it one day if they had no such opportunities. Uh okay your quotation made me blush a bit, I actually can't believe that I wrote this. Again, thanks for your support (=
Date: 01/30/09 04:03 pm Title: Blowing Off The Steam
O_O Killed me.
...In a good way of course. :)
Author's Response: Haha yeah, the twins have that effect, don't they? Glad you're still alive though; imagine all the fun you'd miss :P
Date: 01/30/09 03:59 pm Title: Blowing Off The Steam
oh. em. jee.
that was SOOO hot and just...wow. wow wow wow. i CANNOT wait until you have the next chapter up!!!
Author's Response: I think every author likes it when his/her work is "affecting" people, to make them cry or bite their nails, laugh, or in this case....whatever! XD Thanks so much! I think Tom would agree with you for the "wow" part. He's one lucky bastard, isn't he?