Date: 01/08/08 04:40 pm Title: Chapter 5
The fact you're trying to make this the most realistic possible makes me love it
Date: 01/08/08 03:29 pm Title: Chapter 5
yay, long chapter! I've really grown fond of this story.
"Also, wait for adult stuff later, two people that meet in real life and have known eachother for 2 days aren't going to makeout right away, esp. if they're same gender. " agreed! Please take your time~ it's so much better with a realistic build-up.
Date: 01/08/08 02:01 pm Title: Chapter 5
awww that was sweet, i love this fic!! update soon!! =] =]
Date: 01/08/08 06:28 am Title: Chapter 5
i think it was beautiful. the way they talked you know, it all made sense.
it's like a part of life that you can miss so easily. you mentioned all those small things and sometimes i felt like my heart skipped a beat, or jumped out of my chest. Actually the way Bill talked about his 16th birthday felt like reality, in most of fictions there are so full of everything written scenes like this but this one, it was so short and easy or lets just say that it was simple. I think no one is telling you the story like this some difficult way and it was exactly like it should be. And the other all parts of it was simply as good as everything.
I have to tell you that i loved that sentence : "Just like the way the wind was suppose to be when it was in your hair, or the stars in the sky; who would want it any other way?"
It was like perfect ending for this chapter.
And I must tell you that you are an amazing author. Keep goin'.
Date: 01/08/08 02:17 am Title: Chapter 5
oh my...that was breathtaking...It made me feel at peace and really happy.
You describe feelings so well and relationships between characters and it makes the whole story almost soft to read if you know what I mean. It's like you dont have to catch the words cus everything is just happening inside of you...I cant explane it, but it's wonderful.
Hope you update soon because I'm longing to read more !
Date: 01/08/08 02:01 am Title: Chapter 5
Actually, I love the pace of it. A lot of fics rush to throw a couple into bed together and that's terribly unlikely. It's a charming story.
(And I can't exactly judge you for not updating often, look at my track record!)
Date: 01/07/08 09:04 pm Title: Chapter 5
that was a sweet chapter!
Update soon... okay?
Date: 01/07/08 07:35 pm Title: Chapter 5
OMG this was amazing, beautifully written, the description was used to it's full extent. it was a lovely story, and i hope you update soon.
Date: 01/07/08 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 5
I LOVED IT!! MORE!
Date: 01/07/08 06:24 pm Title: Chapter 5
Another amazing chapter :D
Date: 01/07/08 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 5
Me likey! And I enjoy the slow way they're getting to know each other. Great job. Can't wait for the next part.
Date: 01/07/08 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 4
This chapter was definitely not too long. I liked it alot. Great job, and I'm excited about this fic.
Date: 01/06/08 06:32 pm Title: Chapter 4
this is really good. it wasn't rushed. i can't wait for more, this is a great fic!
Date: 12/23/07 09:44 am Title: Chapter 4
This was really great! It wasn't that long it was perfect! But sad, I hope Bill didn't mean what he said to Tom that was kind of hurtful. I acually felt the pain of what Tom was feeling at that moment cause I was so into it. Your writing once again brings me into the story! Keep going!!
Date: 12/21/07 01:20 pm Title: Chapter 4
AHHH BILLL!!
this is such a good story... i just wanna hug him and tell him how many people love him T-T!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 12/21/07 12:24 pm Title: Chapter 4
I don't think it's too long! But it's not long enough! I can't wait for more! Andreas is such a bastard! I hope he gets his ass beat even more!
Date: 12/21/07 01:13 am Title: Chapter 4
omg this is cool write MOAR.
Date: 12/20/07 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 4
omg! i love this story! although the last chapter was tear jerking... more PLZ!
Date: 12/20/07 04:56 pm Title: Chapter 4
NOOOOOOO!!!!! noooooooooooo!!!! *runs out in tears*
Date: 12/20/07 04:38 pm Title: Chapter 4
sorry to post again but I forgot to ask, will you update faster this time?