Date: 12/15/07 03:24 pm Title: Chapter 3
Why are you disappointed?! I love it! And you left it a cliff hanger! MAN I am dying for more now!
Date: 12/15/07 03:11 pm Title: Chapter 3
finally some action!!!! FIGHT!!!!!!!!!
yeah baby yeah!!!!!
Date: 12/15/07 07:11 am Title: Chapter 2
wow very interesting plot!!!
Date: 12/15/07 07:02 am Title: Chapter 1
please update new chapter asap!!:D
Date: 12/15/07 02:16 am Title: Chapter 2
omgh, thats tottaaalllly one good shit!
i luvit!
more pwetty please!
Date: 12/15/07 01:57 am Title: Chapter 2
omg i love it!! please update soon!! =D =D
Date: 12/15/07 01:33 am Title: Chapter 2
OMG please continue soon! I love it!
Date: 12/14/07 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 2
i really like this. it's very well written and really good. great job; keep it up =)
Date: 12/14/07 05:36 pm Title: Chapter 2
He sighed loudly in amusement, “Weird night…” he mumbled to himself, after a long silent moment, he left the contents on the kitchen counter and made his way upstairs.
ALL if this is weird!!
I think it's the first A.U. fic I read where Bill is bullied but in spite of that keeps a strong personality like I imagine in the real wrold. Your writing style is pretty simple but the realistic way you describe what happens it's amazing!! I love "your" Bill and how Tom's p.o.v and feelings are written.
Date: 12/14/07 05:02 pm Title: Chapter 2
aaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwww
you kidding me???? this story is amazing!!!!
Date: 12/14/07 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 2
Awwwwww more more.. so CUTE!!
Date: 12/14/07 04:40 pm Title: Chapter 2
Wow, i just... i'm in love with this fic... It's seriously beautifuly written. I actually screamed when i saw you updated :D great work hun :D
Date: 12/14/07 09:53 am Title: Chapter 1
love it please keep going on!!!!!
Date: 12/14/07 08:23 am Title: Chapter 1
OOoOOoOO update soooon!!! hehehee...hm this happened to me once something quite similar, we were playing hide and seek when i was like 8, and i ran into somebodys backyard and saw an apartment above the garage, so i thought it was the garage, and i went in, and some guy walked out of the shower in a towel. rolf i was really scared,... and my friend found me and she still makes fun of me....
Author's Response: lmfao! i know how you feel, the excat same thing happened to me, well, a little different, i went into the wrong apartment and thought it was mine, and the door was open! and some guy was like "GET OUT!" :(
Date: 12/13/07 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
oOo you evil little...!!
please update soon!! ^_^
Date: 12/13/07 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is really cool, the emotion and tone you put into your writing is wonderful. You make me think I'm actually there with them. Its awsome! Please keep going I want to read more and find out who's house/mansion Tom is in! Please!! lol
Date: 12/13/07 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
who is in the house with Tom? Is Bill? Oh God update soon please!
Date: 12/13/07 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aw, I like it! It's a really awesome idea. So suspenseful. Please continue =)