Date: 02/06/09 02:08 am Title: Chapter 4: Giving in to somthing seductive.
nothing you ever write could ever be horrible. dont even think that.
i loved it!!! omg...i love you!!!
Author's Response: Miss 50th reviewer! haha, thank you so much and NO I love you more! *cuddles*
Date: 02/04/09 10:56 am Title: Prolouge
I would've liked this to last slightly longer...but woah that was hot. Billshido FTW! :P Speaking of which, I think I love you...Bushido-vision was awesome. This was just hot hot hot hot hot...*phew* :)
Author's Response: awee... maybe I'll make a sequal, ja? haha! I LOVE BUSHIDO *melts* YAY! I love you too! heehee, thank you so so so so so so so much! *fans you* x].
Date: 02/03/09 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 4: Giving in to somthing seductive.
the Bushido vision was an interesting twist, and i liked how Tom was watching them too, you couldnt have done that if it wasnt in Bushido vision, it wouldnt have been as awesome like xD
Author's Response: Thank you... I love Bushido vision, I just can't get all... gansta. haha, I KNOW, GAH! but I love my pervi little Tomi watching, THANK YOU SO MUCH!
Date: 02/03/09 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 4: Giving in to somthing seductive.
eww.....i thought it was gonna end with billt....thatz nasty..bushido....im gonna throw up eww
Author's Response: Sorry... I'll write a one-shot for you becuase I made you throw up! I'm so sorry!
Date: 02/03/09 04:02 pm Title: Chapter 4: Giving in to somthing seductive.
"Bushido Vision" lol, it was definitely up to standard.
Author's Response: haha, yeah, I'm crazy like that! haha, tahnk you! <3
Date: 02/03/09 06:37 am Title: Chapter 3: You can't rape the willing.
Well, i think he should give in, but that's basically so i can read some smut. XD.
I really have enjoyed reading this, the only thing i want you to do is make the chp. longer and add a bit more detail about the emotions of the characters involved, and not necessarily in just the sex scenes.
Thankyou for writing this!!!! :')
Author's Response: HaHa, most people would say taht, but Ithink i'll let you have it your way, hahahahah.. I hope it was up to your standards.
Date: 02/02/09 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 3: You can't rape the willing.
haha that was so funny, just imagine if you were in that class and Tom and Bill ended up doin that xD wouldnt it be an interesting class xD this was so cool, i personally like Tom and Bill but thats just me and you didnt have that many spelling mistakes like last time :P
Author's Response: thank you! I would video tape it, most def. THANK YOU!!! *huggles*
Date: 02/02/09 08:33 pm Title: Chapter 3: You can't rape the willing.
SOON! Then consequence later...
Author's Response: YES MAM!
Date: 02/02/09 04:52 pm Title: Chapter 3: You can't rape the willing.
Hmmm...such a hard choice...let him torture him one more chapter, do more things to Tom, but right at the end of it let him cave. Then they can do it on the desk! ;D
The rest is up to you, I know you'll make it good X3
Author's Response: iight, or maybe not. I havent made up my mind yet! haha, but now I have an idea.
Date: 02/02/09 07:37 am Title: Prolouge
Well don't, your awesome at this! ;D
You're welcome!
Author's Response: hah! thank You so MUCH!
Date: 02/01/09 06:43 pm Title: Chapter 2: Dread Head gangsta.
Please get a beta. PLEASE.
Author's Response: fine.rn
Date: 02/01/09 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 2: Dread Head gangsta.
you did GREAT on the sex scene!!! XD your writing is always AWESOME! loves you babe! update soon!
Author's Response: YAY!! thank you so so so so much! haha, love you moree!
Date: 02/01/09 10:01 am Title: Chapter 2: Dread Head gangsta.
XD OMG I truly loved this chapter number three... I love it when Tom likes Bill even if he already knows he's a boy. And that was hot! XD
Both funny and hot, actually, I really enjoyed the reading, lol. Update soon?
And obviously I can't wait for the Billshido stuff to come! I want Anis to give up soon! :D
Author's Response: *giggles* haha, sily goose, me too. I mean who wouldn't like Bill penis or Vagina??!?!?!? I think you dearly for reviewing.
Date: 01/31/09 06:57 pm Title: Chapter 2: Dread Head gangsta.
YES! Sex scene well done! Future girl looks forward to more!
Author's Response: THANK YOU SO MUCH! yes, my FAVORITE Future girl! haaahaaa
Date: 01/31/09 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 2: Dread Head gangsta.
yes you did amazing on the sex scene, just make it a little more descriptive and longer! plus u have some spelling mistakes but its okay! i just hope that Bill stays with Tom for more than a few affairs, just so that they can be closer and less Bushido xD but its whatever u want, itll be fine!
Author's Response: YAY! *score* dammit, I was sleepy and crap, but oh well. haha, I figured im not a genius with speelling or grammer but I try my hardest! haha. thank you hun-eh!
Date: 01/31/09 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 2: Dread Head gangsta.
Oh gah. -drool-
I WILL FOREVER LOVE SLUTTY BILLLLL!!! Haha
Author's Response: *giggles* I'M FOREVER GREATFUL!
Date: 01/31/09 03:41 pm Title: Chapter 2: Dread Head gangsta.
>>"Call me...Billa." Bill said like he would say any other time, his head lolling from side to side.
omg LOLLING XDDD your mistakes are hilarious)))
Author's Response: dammit... I don't get what's wrong with it... *tear*
Date: 01/31/09 02:57 pm Title: Chapter 2: Dread Head gangsta.
More, now D:
Author's Response: yes'm
Date: 01/31/09 02:26 pm Title: Chapter 2: Dread Head gangsta.
oh oh, wow.
Really like this, :D Bill!Slut is so hot... geez.
Author's Response: *giggles* thank you so much! and good! that's what I was playing at!
Date: 01/31/09 01:33 pm Title: Chapter 2: Dread Head gangsta.
The sex was fine, but the whole chapter had a lot of typos in it.
Author's Response: thank you... dammit *killes herself* I know... I'm horrible at that kinda thing...