Date: 01/27/09 12:15 am Title: How a clumsy person meets a canny dog
aww...i thought it was sweet how you ended up making this chapter all about falling over each other xP its kinda like falling head over heels, but in the whole literal sense haha xD considering the fact that many people did have a distaste for Jewish people they used to treat them badly so comments made towards Tom should be a little worse...i suppose.. anyway, your doing an awesome job! :]
Author's Response: You're right, they should have been a little worse, I just didn't want to be mean! (I know I'm a wuss, thank u...!) I wanted this chapter to be kinda cute, did I achieve that goal? HaharnThanks for reviewing!!
Date: 01/26/09 11:46 pm Title: How a clumsy person meets a canny dog
This was a good chapter, if a little short. Can't wait for the next ones. Keep up the great work. I'd really love to see it real historical like. This chapter felt a little more modern than the last one.
Author's Response: Yeah, maybe because I didn't mention lots of historical things, huh? I promise to make it not look so up-to-date next chapter, I don't want it to lose the magic! (or something?) Thanks for reviewing!!
Date: 01/26/09 06:28 pm Title: Introduction or the reasons that brought us together
I'd be happy to be your beta hun, add me on msn :) Daydreamer1992[at]hotmail[dot]com
lol You should vbelieve it hun, it's great and you need to hurry up and update :P
Author's Response: Thanks!!rnI'll add you on msn right awayrnI was just about to start the second chapter, btw!
Date: 01/26/09 11:29 am Title: Introduction or the reasons that brought us together
Update soon!
Author's Response: I will update soon!
Date: 01/26/09 11:29 am Title: Introduction or the reasons that brought us together
Update soon!
Author's Response: Belive mernI will!rn
Date: 01/26/09 07:56 am Title: Introduction or the reasons that brought us together
intrigued))
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! rn(I left you hanging, huh?)
Date: 01/26/09 07:10 am Title: Introduction or the reasons that brought us together
More, more, more! :D
I totally like it already. ^^
*adds to favorites*
Author's Response: Awww!rnThank you!!rnI'll try to update as fast as I can, I promise!
Date: 01/26/09 02:06 am Title: Introduction or the reasons that brought us together
I love how this started! Poor Tomi got beat up. ;_; Hopefully Bill can be a good friend cuz Tom really needs one.
Author's Response: He'll be a good friend, and he'll stand up for him, too!rnThanks for taking the time to read this! (I still can't believe u people like this so much! I'm so happy for that!)
Date: 01/26/09 12:09 am Title: Introduction or the reasons that brought us together
hmm, i think Bill should figure out for himself what Tom really is...maybe he isnt a Jew but since he looks different people call him that...i felt sorry for him reading this chapter :( but thats whats supposed to happen i suppose xD i liked this chapter and you should add just a little more historic details to the story to make it more immersive, but not a lot because no one wants your story to be changed and become a history textbook! i cant wait until the next chappie, i luved this one!
Author's Response: Thanks!!!!!rnI don't want this to gradually become a textbook! But I did want to add some historic details, just to make it seem more immersive, like you said (thank u!) And Tom...Tom is complicated... Again, thanks for reviewing!
Date: 01/25/09 10:48 pm Title: Introduction or the reasons that brought us together
I'm a huge history geek, so I love the idea you have going on here. If you still need a beta, I'm more than open. If you want to add in any facts or anything and want help, feel free to contact me. Between myself and my best friend (a history major), we should be able to help. *hugs* keep up the great stuff!
Date: 01/25/09 10:48 pm Title: Introduction or the reasons that brought us together
I'm a huge history geek, so I love the idea you have going on here. If you still need a beta, I'm more than open. If you want to add in any facts or anything and want help, feel free to contact me. Between myself and my best friend (a history major), we should be able to help. *huge* keep up the great stuff!
Author's Response: Sure! You can help with that! I'll surely contact you whenever I need some help with this! You're a history geek? So am I! My classmates used to make fun of me because of that when I was in junior high! You people are being so nice to me, I've never have guessed this fic was gonna be received with so much love!
Date: 01/25/09 10:35 pm Title: Introduction or the reasons that brought us together
I would leave some of Magdaburgs facts out of your story..I know a TON about WW2 and its kinda bloody. And if ya need help w/the WW2 history email me at icequeenqt170@yahoo.com. And have u seen definace? its a true WW2 story bout jews who lived in the woods until WW2 was over..its AMAZING. Maybe Tom could one of them or not...it was just a thought.
I love the idea of your story and lookin forward to reading more! keep it comin! BITTE
Author's Response: I've got lots of books in my house about WW2 and history in general, but I think I may ask you about some things as well! Would you really help me with that? That's so nice of u!
Date: 01/25/09 10:30 pm Title: Introduction or the reasons that brought us together
This sounds really interesting and original!
I love it; please continue.
Author's Response: Thank you!rnI'll try and update fastrnI'm shocked that so many people liked this!rn
Date: 01/25/09 10:24 pm Title: Introduction or the reasons that brought us together
I love it, I love I_is_anon and I love story without the historical crap. Not to knock you, but it's fiction, it doesn't matter right? :}
Author's Response: Yeah! I was just asking because some people like those things in fanfics like this, but I've decided to focus on the characters, instead. Thanks for the feedback! (seriously, I've never have guessed such a good feedback!)
Date: 01/25/09 10:22 pm Title: Introduction or the reasons that brought us together
I really like this hun, very well written. If you need a beta, I'd be happy to help, though I'm sure you'll get a lot of other people offering. :)
Please update soon, I'll look forward to it :)
Author's Response: really? will u be my beta?rnI'll update soon, don't u worry about that!rn*I'm sooooo happy right now! u people actually believe this is good!*