...im surprised that Bill could hold Tom...that's kinda funny to picture xD and yeah, it is his fault...kinda...but still i dont think Bill should totally blame himself xP you used a lot of commas i noticed in some of the paragraphs but like you said it wasnt beta-d so i wont go and say something like "Wtf you have so many damn commas everywhere?" xD thats mean i would never do that! aww thats a BIG step for Tom to kiss Bill :) that was pretty sweet! and wow, you had told me Georg didnt really like Bill but crapdamn he was so unfair! and yeah you should let Tom open up a little more just so we get a little backstory but all in all i liked this chappie a lot! :)

Author's Response: Yeah, just today I realized that I have used a lot of commas, and I was afraid of people being all mean to me, but, whatever! Thanks for being so supportive! And yeah, Georg is just a little unfair to Bill, but next chapter Tom will explain a lot of things to Bill, because, it's about time, don't u think? Thanks for reviewing!

oh i know what ya mean, its a miracle i didnt bomb Chemistry last semester x.x i hate that class so much...its practically another math class wah!

Author's Response: Yeah! That's exactly what I think! I mean, I know I'm never gonna be a scientist, so...why should I be taking that class? Plus, I totally make a fool outa myself! Honestly...

yeah, and Georg shouldnt like Tom too much...unless you want him to like him in that way but that is totally up to you xD it would be completely unexpected later on if you did after we get used to Georg for a few chapters but i am totally just throwing ideas out there! *gasp* those are my fave subjects too! Go English and History haha :) i seriously hate

Author's Response: (I wrote "It's a miracle I didn't flunked science" when it should be "it's a miracle I didn't flunk science" ... sorry, I hate myself when I commit those kind of stupid mistakes, duh!)rnGeorg is a good fellow, actually, I think I won't make him like Tom in that way, y'know? I think that would be a little awkward for the guys and all, besides, there gonna more characters in this fic who are gonna be bullying Tomi all the time, I think that's when Georg will understand that Bill is actually a good thing for Tom, but I don't wanna spoil it for you (more than I've already done)

There we go. It had that older feeling again - or maybe it was just that you literally wrote dust into it XD But I'm serious, this seemed more in the right time frame.

I'm a little comfused about Tom and Georg. I can't figure out if Georg is really a person, or if Tom's had such a rough life, that he's retreated to a place in his head where there is a Georg, I don't quite know what to think.

Can't wait for the next chapter. Great stuff!

Author's Response: Humm, Georg is an actual person, and he's been for Tom when times were rough, but he's not a saint, not exactly!rnThanks! Another reader also told me this chapter seemed more accurate when it comes to time and all that. I'll try to casually mention things from that time in the following chapters. Next chapter is gonna be all about Tom, Georg, and Bill (of course) and then Tom will get to talk about his past. rnThanks for all the support! (I so want to hug someone right now!)

Cuteeeeee!
I totally LOVE the story. ^^
You rock. :]

Author's Response: Ain't Tom pretty?rnI was worried about this thing I've got for making Tom look as a total wuss, but to hell with it! I'm really enjoying writting this story and I'm happy that other people find it worth reading!

that was a really sweet ending :) now i have to wonder about Georg, more than likely he will end up being one of the only people who like Tom (besides Bill) or something like that. and yay for using more dates and historical things, it really gives the story realism! especially with the movies and how people dress! wasnt swing music big in Germany also or was that during the war? awww! (hugs ya) you are so welcome! i should be thanking you for writing the story and i am glad to help in anyway! and if you want u can call me by my name, hello i am Amber :]

Author's Response: I dunno about Georg's part in this story. The only thing I've got clear is that he's been there for Tom when he needed someone, and I'm not sure if he's gonna like Bill, at all! (He'll deal with it, eventually!) Yeah, I think swing music was popular everywhere, but during the war, swing and jazz were verboten, y'know? There were still people who bought and owned jazz records, but they were probably risking their lives by doing so. Such people were really fond of Americans' sense of style and (very much like Bill) refused to have their hairs cut. Thanks for reviewing, Amber!

your welcome and dont worry about making them too harsh, a lot of other stories are more harsh in bullying and stuff! and yes you did achieve making this chapter cute! at least i thought you did!

Author's Response: Awww! Thank u!!rnYou people are way too nice to me! (and that makes me happy!)

its ok.. but deff continue!

Author's Response: It will continue ;)

And, I just add, not all jew's was killed, some actually got out, if they survived the death camps, or just, didn't get caught...

Author's Response: I know! I think Anne Frank's father was the only member of her family that actually survived the death camps. I still haven't decided whether Tom should be a jew or not. I want him to be sort of mysterious for now, so that Bill would take interest in him. Thank u for reviewing, I love good feedback!

keep it comin!

Author's Response: I will! thanks for taking your time to review! (you people are awesome!)