Date: 01/28/09 06:41 pm Title: Can Boys Keep Secrets?
Dun dun duunn! Wow, wife huh? I bet that makes for an interesting next chapter! can't wait :)
Author's Response: oh yeah... but it doesn't get too interesting until chapter nine...
Date: 01/28/09 06:30 pm Title: The Beginning
this is interesting !
i like it xP
Author's Response: thank you!
Date: 01/28/09 04:15 pm Title: When You Wake Up
Love it! I was so happy when you updated! keep it up sweetie!
Author's Response: thank you!
Date: 01/27/09 05:27 am Title: Don't Let Him Act Like a Diva
Keep up the good work! I'm hooked :)
Author's Response: thank you!
Date: 01/27/09 12:32 am Title: Don't Let Him Act Like a Diva
...you are really good at writing sex scenes xD that has to be a talent or something cause i so cant and i envy u for that :] but yay! now we get to travel with the boys and get to go where the craziness goes! and the thing where Tom was supposed to sound like "you got mail" made me giggle :)
Author's Response: thank you, it's not a talent really i just read a lot of romance novels
Date: 01/26/09 03:55 pm Title: The Beginning
i've read the reviews and i've decided to read your story. I LOVE THE BANNER!
Author's Response: thank you, i made it myself! at first i was thinking it was too dark but then that's how i see Bill a dark, sexual being with limitless potential...
Date: 01/26/09 01:30 am Title: The Beginning
awww this was sooo sweet! little perv Tomi and the super cute Bill being super cute xD now i am off to read ur next chapter!
Author's Response: thanks! i think you'll like th enext one!
Date: 01/25/09 04:36 pm Title: The Beginning
:D I like thisss, I like the fact it's in second person too; makes it more real :)
That last part, with Bill's hair, actually made me LOL; I would LOVE to do that... I can imagine his face right now.... rofl.
And, just a tip, maybe put the lyrics into italics so it's easier to tell them apart from the other words ;) Other than that this is good. *favourites*
Author's Response: thank you, and i think second person does that too, you don't see much of it around here. i'm glad it's funny, thanks again!