Date: 02/18/14 05:12 am Title: Chapter 1
Can't lie, I loved this. I found it thanks to the "Random Story" thingy and I must say that for once it gave me something interesting to read :P
I feel a bit sorry for Tom though, but yeah, I still liked it haha! And botTom is always interesting ;)
Date: 10/06/09 09:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
umm, me gusta?
*hopes fervently she said that right*
:)
It was nice, really, but I think it should have been longer,and more angst, as well, and maybe a little more coaxing, and also some scenes of after, it has real potential to be just *perfect*. (irony, I know)
But, it was really good, so YAY you! :D
Author's Response: lol you said it perfectly.rnrnthanks. yeahhh i think i have a "sequel" or whatever to this that i should post up soon.. hopefully it's more coaxing for you. :)
Date: 10/02/09 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
me gustaa muchooo! tomi casi nunca es bottom lol i but its kinda weird the way bill thinks... lyk they dont c united at all... *sighs* but well apart from that it was fun! :D
Author's Response: ya lo se!! :) haha thanks.
Date: 04/09/09 03:53 am Title: Chapter 1
sorry, practicing spanish... (google translate helps) I liked it a lot, despite Bill being a whack-job, it's nice to see a top Bill once in a while.
Date: 04/09/09 03:51 am Title: Chapter 1
pero claro que si, es muy bueno. Bill es... una fuck-up mayor en pero me parece Intresting ver un proyecto de ley superior.
Author's Response: haha spanglish! que mono, mi amor. me encanta top!Bill tambien. mil gracias!!
Date: 04/01/09 04:22 am Title: Chapter 1
I loved it xD I love Bill here -grin- AND TOP!BILL!!!!! I love Top!Bill xD
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: I LOVE TOPBILL TOO!!!!rnrnEversince I started this whole twincest thing, I was always on the mission to find fics/pics with top!Bill :D
Date: 03/04/09 11:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
me gusta
haha
sabes espaņol?
d donde eres?
Author's Response: yayyy!rnsi...un poquito. :Prnsoy de HAWAII. y tu?
Date: 02/02/09 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
i love it, really. this is fab but i cant help but want more of this little relationship... very kinky. and i love how you have managed to steer clear of the cliche goody two shoes bill. yep ... very impressed.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It means a lot to this crappy-trying-too-hard little girl haha.
rnthat's my goal with everything-- to steer clear of the cliche. Oh that's a hot quote haha.
Date: 01/26/09 06:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
It has ptential, I like the idea, but it's just... I don't know, it's like SOMETHING is missing, though I'm not sure what.
Author's Response: I agree with you....rnI think it might be a happy ending....rnor a better sex scene(i suck at those)...rnORRRR MAYBE some sort of reassurance. Even though Idk what kind of reassurance.
Date: 01/25/09 04:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
me gusta muchooooo!!!! me liky!!!! lovyyyy moreeeee
Author's Response: Estoy muy alegre! Haha Umm thank you for liking it. rn
Date: 01/25/09 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
I was hoping for a happier ending... oh well good job anyway.
Author's Response: Yeah. I'm not a big fan of happy endings, to be honest. Sorry.
Date: 01/25/09 03:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
So interesting to see Toppy!Bill.
Author's Response: Haha isn't it?rnI love top!Bill.
Date: 01/25/09 12:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
Imma guess that Te gusta is good, so TE GUSTA! heehee, I love it... and I have a problem too, so don't woory!
Author's Response: Haha YAY I'm glad you like!rnYeahhh... I gotta stop being so cynical and write something fluffy for once.
Date: 01/25/09 10:31 am Title: Chapter 1
Me gusta mucho.
=p
Author's Response: BienrnMuchas gracias, amiga!!
Date: 01/25/09 07:59 am Title: Chapter 1
oh god. I've never read such a thing before :) It was awesome! :D
Author's Response: Aww that just made my day!
Date: 01/25/09 01:25 am Title: Chapter 1
*Looks like Bill and Tom are complete opposites.
*“I’m trying to ruin you,” -> You're a bad boy, Bill, a bad boy!
*“What the fuck, Bill?” -> What the fuck indeed, making a picture xD
*It's completely fucked-up but I liked the story and I think it's kinda hot too. I love that Bill wasn't really rough with Tom and prepared him.
Nice work.
Author's Response: Haha thanks!!
rnI'm a completely fucked up person. So this is the result. lol
rnI guess Bill didn't exactly want to rape him cuz he wanted to use the fact that Tom liked it against him.
Date: 01/25/09 12:59 am Title: Chapter 1
im only disapointed that this story doesn't have more than one chapter. it's so good. bill is so sneaky and smooth. my fav bill.
Author's Response: My favorite Bill too!! Haha I love when he's in control--obviously.rnSorry to disappoint. I might just write a sequel. :D
Date: 01/25/09 12:36 am Title: Chapter 1
i actually enjoyed reading about Bill being dominant, i have no clue why but it just seems so...sexy. xD normally i am not a fan of lemons but this was different in a good way! it was entertaining and i loved it! it shows how people are never perfect...mwaha
Author's Response: Aww thank you so much! Haha. I love dominant!Bill too! rnI'm really glad you liked it.