Date: 03/29/08 02:47 am Title: Chapter 13: Expected Reations
Poor Bill!!! *hugs him*
Go on!!!
Author's Response: I won't be updating for a while because I have decided to finish off my other story "Darkness Doesn't Hide Everything" (I began this story first and then Bittersweet afterwards) and then once that's done I'll come back to this. lol I knew it was gonna be hard writing two stories at the same time. Sorry bout the inconvenience. But just so you know, Darkness Doesn't Hide Everything is almost finished so I'm hoping it won't be too long before I can come back to this. I was going to post a note on the story by THF rejected it unfortunatly.
Date: 03/27/08 02:40 pm Title: Chapter 12: Long-awaited Explanations
Tell them, tell them, TELL THEM!!!! I'm dying here, for f*ck's sake, tell them!
Go on!
Date: 03/27/08 03:45 am Title: Chapter 12: Long-awaited Explanations
What.A.Cliffhanger.
I love how you subtly dragged this whole chapter out so that it would end this way. lol. In the middle of the punches, I really wanted Bill to retaliate just so the G's can see how powerful he is now. I would love to see Bill in a show down. haha. Update soon!
Author's Response: Ah yes I think I may have an idea... I'll see how it turns out... Thanks so much for your review!
Date: 03/26/08 08:58 pm Title: Chapter 12: Long-awaited Explanations
yes i enjoyed it very much, it's just sad how the rest was affected when they are not involved.
looking forward to read bill's side :)
Date: 03/26/08 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 12: Long-awaited Explanations
you can't leave me like this! You can't! please update soon
Date: 03/25/08 04:40 pm Title: Chapter 11: Bittersweet Memories
wauw! please continue soon!!!
Date: 03/25/08 12:20 pm Title: Chapter 11: Bittersweet Memories
The tension was so tangible. And I'm glad you've shown the G's pov. They haven't really been in this story much even though they were no doubt also heavily affected by Bill's departure. Their reactions were quite realistic.
And I like how you used the adjective 'lazily' to described Bill's posture. He's really changed.
Now, update soon! =P
Date: 03/25/08 10:26 am Title: Chapter 11: Bittersweet Memories
CONTINUE PLEASE!!!! this is really good!!!
Date: 03/25/08 04:50 am Title: Chapter 11: Bittersweet Memories
holy crap!!!!!! that was sooo sad!!! poor Gus and Georg.....i feel bad for them. but who couldnt?? thankx for the update!!!!
xoxox
Date: 03/25/08 02:39 am Title: Chapter 11: Bittersweet Memories
wow!!! i was waiting for that update...
good that you included Gustav ANd Gearg in that.. at least smth.. because they never had a say in the story..
and they even managed to catch BIll while he was in the hospital.. wow...
wonder what the conversation gonna be like.. wil hm1; scare them with his new cold personality???
Author's Response: The story is of Bill and his journey through the pain. But I think it was about time G&G had their say, like you said, it was long over-due. I hope this chapter explained what they were going through.
Date: 03/25/08 01:15 am Title: Chapter 11: Bittersweet Memories
more more more more!!!
Author's Response: haha I'm working on it lol My updates have been long overdue
Date: 03/24/08 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 11: Bittersweet Memories
aacckk anticipation is killing me. /hahahah
Date: 03/24/08 09:45 pm Title: Chapter 11: Bittersweet Memories
Oh no! Not another cliff-hanger? Please stop teasing me!
Date: 03/17/08 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 9: 'Till Death Do Us Part
That chapter was fuckin awsome man!!!!!!!!!I loved it and can't wait for more. Hey I gotta ask u a question,if I post my story on here would u read them?
Author's Response: I sure would!
Date: 03/17/08 01:35 pm Title: Chapter 8: The Dark Truth
that is soooooooo cute man I loved it that was beautiful! the song I mean.But that whore needs to DIE! I can't believe she didn't even regret hurting Tom & Bill like that! that's just evil! I hate her and this story isn't even true!But it's still great can't wait for more!
Author's Response: I'm glad your enjoying the story hun! I've posted a new chapter for you!
Date: 03/13/08 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 7: Reunion
I knew what song it was before I read it at the bottom!I atomatically turned on my ipod to that song and started to sing those lyrics with it then another song came on called "Rooftops-The Lostprophetes." If u've never heard of it it's cool. But I loved the chapter. I was frikin awsome.!=) loved it lots. Can't wait for more.
Date: 02/29/08 08:33 am Title: Chapter 10: Hospital
Hey, sorry for the late review! I just read it last night and it was too late to give a proper review. =)
Anyway, I thought the conversation between Bill and the nurse was a pretty good way of leading the readers to That night, even if it is pretty much the basis of this story. It's weird that she would tell a stranger so much about her infatuation, but I guess there are people like that. =P
I also liked how Bill was still stoic and cold, because it would be quite unrealistic if he suddenly broke down in tears after hating his brother for so long, even under circumstances like this.
Also, the frightened posture was a good inclusion. Another step to breaking down his wall!
I can't wait for the next chapter, update soon!
Date: 02/26/08 10:02 am Title: Chapter 10: Hospital
amazing more plz x)
Date: 02/26/08 04:50 am Title: Chapter 10: Hospital
ahhh what happens?!?!?!?! come on leave it at a clif hanger much?!?!?! gawd!!! lol please update soon!!!
Date: 02/26/08 03:44 am Title: Chapter 10: Hospital
hm.... this is so difficult for Bill... I'm sure.. why is it twice as diffiucult for him all the time in this fic? Now he will do all the talking and he will try to re-visit the events on the part of them both...
i also kinda hoped that the talk with the fan would make Bill think about coming back to stage.. not that the fans were discussing twincest...
also, both G and G are so passive (absent) here... like they were asked by Tom to leave when he had the talk at the bus and since then they are kinda not interested, passive ?? not in hospital even??
the doctor also should have told that it was "a brother" who called the ambulance... in the report to David... it should ring the bells for the manager.. no??
I wonder if those two (the girl and the replacing singer) are still around or left? I hope the guy doesn't expect he will still be a star there just replacing Tom??? G's should have a say in that... for sure...
so many questions...
luck with uni, hope you will update sooner... I am alwasy waiting for the continuation of this story...
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review and your questions. I enjoy your feedback! Okay yes there are a lot of questions. I hope to clear everything up in the following chapters. And about G&G, I haven't included in the story on purpose, although I know where you are coming from. In real life there is no way they'd be this passive and absent, however, this story I've wanted to focus only on Bill and Tom and their broken relationship. I will see how the next chapter goes...