Date: 05/22/10 08:34 am Title: Chapter 13: Expected Reations
I've been really addicted to this story
I don't know why but it just draws me in
great writing
Date: 02/06/09 03:07 am Title: Chapter 5: In the Shadows
That bitch dude! How can she cheat on T-O-M K-A-U-L-I-T-Z?? Seriously man its fucking Tom kaulitz!! I love this story by the way!!
Date: 02/06/09 03:07 am Title: Chapter 8: The Dark Truth
Dude! That stupid Bitch!! I love this story by the way hahahaha!!
Date: 02/06/09 02:32 am Title: Chapter 13: Expected Reations
Dude! seriously! you better update soon!
Or bad things will happen!! JK!
It's a good story so don't keep us waiting!!
Date: 02/06/09 02:26 am Title: Chapter 12: Long-awaited Explanations
Omg! I'm putting this story as my favorite...So awesome!!
Date: 02/06/09 02:19 am Title: Chapter 11: Bittersweet Memories
Ohlalala! Bill has that dangerous aura around him!! (sorry I think I misspelled on word!)
Date: 02/06/09 02:12 am Title: Chapter 10: Hospital
The ending was pretty tight dude!
I love this story!!
Date: 02/06/09 02:02 am Title: Chapter 8: The Dark Truth
Dude! That stupid Bitch!! I love this story by the way hahahaha!!
Date: 02/06/09 01:58 am Title: Chapter 7: Reunion
Omg! Dude...Bill was freaking... wow...
Harsh...As in B-U-R-N BURN!!!!
Date: 02/06/09 01:49 am Title: Chapter 6: A Familiar Face in a Crowd of Thousands
Omg!! The reunion!!
Date: 02/06/09 01:42 am Title: Chapter 5: In the Shadows
That bitch dude! How can she cheat on T-O-M K-A-U-L-I-T-Z?? Seriously man its fucking Tom kaulitz!! I love this story by the way!!
Date: 02/06/09 01:35 am Title: Chapter 4: Germany's Resolution
Dude! This story is so sad!!
Date: 02/06/09 01:29 am Title: Chapter 3: Spiraling Down In A Black Vortex
Wow...
Date: 02/06/09 01:24 am Title: Chapter 2: Harsh Realities
Dude...That was so fucked up what
Tom did.
Date: 02/06/09 01:21 am Title: Chapter 1: Fated Night
Awww.... Dude, that's so sad!
The song fits perfectly with the story by
the way!!
Date: 08/24/08 05:40 am Title: Chapter 13: Expected Reations
are you planning to finish this story??? it's been quite a while since your update... well.. just to mention that someone is waiting... )
Author's Response: Yes I am! :] I make it a policy to finish all my stories. However it was because I started this story after I had started one already (it was only meant to be a one-shot but didn't turn out that way lol). So I'm finishing my original story (Darkness Doesn't Hide Everything which can be read on Buzznet under the same username) and then I'll finish this. Sorry bout it but please don't give up on the story I'll definately finish it!
Date: 06/12/08 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 13: Expected Reations
this is REALLY good! Please add more?!
Date: 06/11/08 01:22 am Title: Chapter 13: Expected Reations
aw, no more??? I need more... desperately!!! Great story!
Wake up Tom... Bill, hes like snow white, give him a kiss and he'll wake up... NOW DAMMIT!
Author's Response: Hey thank you for reviewing and I'm glad you enjoyed it. I won't be updating for a while because I have decided to finish off my other story "Darkness Doesn't Hide Everything" (I began this story first and then Bittersweet afterwards) and then once that's done I'll come back to this. lol I knew it was gonna be hard writing two stories at the same time. Sorry bout the inconvenience. But just so you know, Darkness Doesn't Hide Everything is almost finished so I'm hoping it won't be too long before I can come back to this.
Date: 03/29/08 04:59 am Title: Chapter 13: Expected Reations
Well, when I first read Gustav's 'speech', I felt that it was a bit too informative and long for a dialogue. Perhaps you could have broken down the ideas a bit more? It seemed a bit sudden as well. It might be okay if they were his thoughts, but not as a dialogue.
I love Bill's schizophrenic moment though. He's so conflicted and has no idea how to act. The next chapter would be one with him and Cian? Or would he be brooding alone? heh. Update soon.
Author's Response: I won't be updating for a while because I have decided to finish off my other story "Darkness Doesn't Hide Everything" (I began this story first and then Bittersweet afterwards) and then once that's done I'll come back to this. lol I knew it was gonna be hard writing two stories at the same time. Sorry bout the inconvenience. But just so you know, Darkness Doesn't Hide Everything is almost finished so I'm hoping it won't be too long before I can come back to this. I was going to post a note on the story by THF rejected it unfortunatly.
Date: 03/29/08 03:26 am Title: Chapter 13: Expected Reations
incredible great!!!
Author's Response: I won't be updating for a while because I have decided to finish off my other story "Darkness Doesn't Hide Everything" (I began this story first and then Bittersweet afterwards) and then once that's done I'll come back to this. lol I knew it was gonna be hard writing two stories at the same time. Sorry bout the inconvenience. But just so you know, Darkness Doesn't Hide Everything is almost finished so I'm hoping it won't be too long before I can come back to this. I was going to post a note on the story by THF rejected it unfortunatly.