Date: 01/27/09 04:42 pm Title: Awakened from Dormancy
okey, I didn't understand that, you have to explain; Tom will find him, even if he don't want to? So, if he's on a McDonalds, Tom will go to that McDonalds?
Author's Response: Tom will find him even if he isn't really looking....The magic that Tom has will lead him to where ever Bill happens to be at the time. So yes.
Date: 01/27/09 01:50 pm Title: Unexplainable Episodes
I hate that you aren't sure about this story, b/c I love it. I'm very intrigued as to where this is going. Poor Simone, LOL. I bet that was a shocker to see once that door got opened. Please keep going with this!
Date: 01/27/09 01:43 pm Title: Unexplainable Episodes
OoOoOoOoooooOOOO!!!!! This was good. It made me happy knowing that Tom felt unnormal. Ahahaha.
I liked it and you should be VERY SURE about this story. I loveeee it!!!
Date: 01/27/09 01:38 pm Title: Unexplainable Episodes
How does Bill know that Tom will go to a park? It's not like, every teenager does that...
Author's Response: Its not that Bill knows that Tom will go there, its that he knows that Tom will be able to track him down regardless of whether he is aware that he is doing it or not.
Date: 01/25/09 08:15 pm Title: Easy Find
well its nice that they meet. can't wait to see what you develop here. don't really think I'm going to like damien. so more please
Date: 01/25/09 05:25 pm Title: Easy Find
like it!!
cant wait for more!!
Date: 01/25/09 04:19 pm Title: Easy Find
Slow maybe, but I like it. It's important to give a strong base to a story like this so I think you are on the right track. Take your time and think it out. This is a good start and you want to make sure you have the details down in your head. Keep going. You'll get there.
Date: 01/25/09 03:51 pm Title: Awakened from Dormancy
Continue? Thats not a question, I want a update tomorrow! Knify want's one to, and he says, 'if thers no update tomorrow, I'll come cut you!' don't want that?
Author's Response: lol!! Alright then doll. I'll see what I can do. lol
Date: 01/25/09 03:11 pm Title: Easy Find
woow really interesting...
just wondering what tom able to do with his magic
please update soon :D:D
Date: 01/25/09 02:43 pm Title: Easy Find
OOOOO HE FOUND TOOOOM!!
I like like liiike it! I can't wait to read chapter 3! Maybe Bill and Tom will uh, be friends, eh? *wink wink nudge*
Date: 01/24/09 11:39 pm Title: Awakened from Dormancy
you should continue. i'd really like to see where this goes!! gosh this is a very unique and creative concept! kudos!!
Date: 01/24/09 11:35 pm Title: Awakened from Dormancy
well I'm a sucker for Fantasy, Paranormal, and Sci-Fi stories.
I like the story about the eyes very compelling. I think that its has potential I really like the stuff about bill being able to feel the power as well. love stories where character's have powers and there's a plan that none of the main character's know that their involved in. write more.
Date: 01/24/09 11:01 pm Title: Awakened from Dormancy
You absolutely should finish this. I'm already intrigued. :D
Date: 01/24/09 10:45 pm Title: Awakened from Dormancy
Nice. I'm interested and hope to read more soon. Bill's magic is stronger than the others I take it. Maybe that is why he is not trustworthy enough to be included in whatever David has planned.
Date: 01/24/09 08:55 pm Title: Awakened from Dormancy
ur rly should! i like it alot :)
Date: 01/24/09 08:00 pm Title: Awakened from Dormancy
AHH!! This is a GREAT start! I LOVE IT!!!!
You really have to keep this going! It's TOO GREAT!!!