Date: 07/22/09 05:31 pm Title: Suspicion
ooh thiz is so good=] plz update sooon thx soso much=]=]
Date: 07/22/09 12:15 pm Title: Suspicion
Yay!!!! You're back and I really love it. It's getting so good and you are doing well as usual. In the time it took you to update the flow of the story is still where it should be. I would totally make you a banner, but I am so not that cool. I suck at photo shop. Anyway... Update soon :)
Date: 07/22/09 11:21 am Title: Suspicion
It never fails that when I think of your stories randomly, you appear again. Strange! But I'm glad to see this one and you back. :D I adore this story and In Du Zen Flammen.
Date: 07/22/09 01:55 am Title: Suspicion
Oh, wow, this is so much fun! Although there are many things I wish I knew - why is David so into Tom? What's this weird affinity between Tom and Bill? Etc, etc.
But I guess I shall just have to wait to find out. Update soon, please? =)
Date: 04/29/09 06:04 pm Title: Not For The Faint of Heart
YAY!
sorry i didnt review b4 but u well know that ur stories are so great i cant stop to put a silly comment! D:
so here we goo:
...I loved the idea, from the begining when you were talking about TOm's eyes, i was so into it, i could imagine his bright eyes shinin when the car was about to crash! how he feels about his eyes, its just so interesting! I mean all this happensa just cuz of the colour of his eyes.
i love the idea of him holding all that power! the way u descrive the magic is amazing! not even in HP u can sense it lyk that! D:
billa on the other side, poor dude >o< there must b a reazon why ppl killed his parents! there must!!! n i love how he is helping tom, but he is just doing that cuz is his work so later on tom will know n mayb that will bother him, wont it?
so yeah, plz keep all ur stories up! they are good! u really get good ideas n know how to develop them! n thnx to this storie i havent started my next chappie of mockingbird XD well ill start now D:
thnx 4 sharing this storie! again keep it up plz!
-grimada
Date: 04/28/09 10:42 pm Title: Not For The Faint of Heart
Jesus! That's gruesome! Oh god! I still love it though. It's CAAAARNAAAGE!!!!!
Date: 04/28/09 10:39 pm Title: Anger and Learning
AHHH CLIFFHANGER!!!! WTF!? lol No worries, next chapter, AWAAAY!
Date: 04/28/09 12:03 am Title: Not For The Faint of Heart
Yeah, that was a little much, but will Bill be ok? I do really like this story and I hope to read more soon. Thanks again for bringing this story back.
Author's Response: Uhm...lol. Yeah. Sorry about that. I get like that sometimes and I don't always have an outlet for all the crazy stuff that roams around in my head. But yeah. All will be well. I really am sorry about the crazyness. lol.
Date: 04/27/09 08:59 pm Title: Not For The Faint of Heart
How did I miss 2 chapters of this?? I'm so glad to see you back that I forgive all carnage above. Lol!
I wish I could make banners, but I suck completely or I would make you one. :(
Author's Response: Aw. Thanks doll. lol. I really suck at making banners too, which is why I tend to ask other people to make them. lol.
Date: 04/27/09 01:41 pm Title: Anger and Learning
love that there is going to be more information about Bill's past and more about the powers. this was very interesting I can see that he would be angry after finding out that his more stranger than he thought but hopefully Bill will help him learn to appreciate thier gifts. but great cliffhanger making us want to know more soon. And the friends interaction parts we funny and love how he trying to control his powers but can't really with Bill around.
Date: 04/27/09 12:49 pm Title: Anger and Learning
Yay!!! You're back I was worried that you would not finnish this story. I like it and can't wait to hear the story of how Bill found his power. Thanks for posting again:)
Date: 02/14/09 07:45 pm Title: Seeking Answers
interesting story...
cant wait to see where this is going
Date: 01/31/09 01:12 am Title: Seeking Answers
To be honest, your writing is not that bad... A few mistakes here and there, but that's to be expected. All in all, I think you're doing a great job. I'm enjoying the story, and the images of Bill and Tom with those liquid gold eyes... MmMmMm...Good
Date: 01/29/09 04:58 pm Title: Seeking Answers
Well, I haven't read this chapter yet, but I was happy to see it!! If you want a beta reader, I'd be glad to do it. Since I adore your stories and all, lol. Ok going back to read, yay!
Date: 01/29/09 02:28 pm Title: Awakened from Dormancy
Nice job you're getting there. You are taking the time to develop the characters and that is very important to a story like this one. The plot will come while you are putting in these details. Tom and Bill seem to be your main focus so it is only fair to dwell on them a little right now. Keep going and stop doubting yourself. You're doing well.
Date: 01/29/09 06:09 am Title: Seeking Answers
*raises hand* DO I COUNT?! I dunnoooo. I know you don't use one, but...I tell you it's good and it makes you think, "Hmm. I should post it to shut Cassy up." hahaha.
lmao at Simone! She's so blunt and it makes me laugh evey time. And RAWRWHYISBILLSOMYSTERIOUSANDBLARGH?! I am waiting impatiently for chapter 5. hehe.
Date: 01/29/09 02:58 am Title: Seeking Answers
ALLIE!!!
I READ IT!!
It doesn't suck.
I rather like it, actually.
It's interesting. I want to read more of it.
So don't you dare stop writing/take it down, hoe.
*raises hand* I know you don't use a beta... you told me! lol.
Date: 01/29/09 02:55 am Title: Seeking Answers
you have least amount of errors than other author's on this sight without a beta reader. so answering your homework question you do good without one because I didn't really see any real need for them.
well it nice to see some information about the magic. and hopefully you can explain other important facts about the powers and how david started collecting people with magic and how damien and bill are legally binded. so many questions I need answered it seems but its just because you sparked my interest with your concept. more please I wish you would finish this story please before you give up because of frustration. I know you can complete this idea.
Author's Response: AHHH! I WANNA HUG YOU!! lol. But yes...I haven't used a beta reader for ANY of my stories...And I'm not a validated author yet. lol. So apparently I'm not trustworthy yet. But...Thank you SOOO much for the reviews. I always look forward to seeing yours because you actually give me REAL FEEDBACK! Thank you!
Date: 01/27/09 11:17 pm Title: Unexplainable Episodes
I think you are doing well with this story. Don't doubt yourself yet. I'm excited to read what happens next.
Date: 01/27/09 09:28 pm Title: Unexplainable Episodes
I want to know more about bill's past, how he got involved with those people. when bill talks to tom they should discuss bill's past and its cute how protective bill is of tom. more