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Reviewer: cynical_terror Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/22/09 04:16 am Title: Chapter 1

I don't think it was generic, but what do I know? I don't read much Biorg. It was smokin' to me. :)

Author's Response:

Thanks. I always worry that anything I write is too run of the mill and readers won't want to read it because really, how many ways can you make man-sex new and exciting?

I'm glad you enjoyed it ^_____^ 

Reviewer: Tamara Kaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/22/09 03:57 am Title: Chapter 1

OH HAWT DAAAYYYYYYUMMMM!!

In smut-whore speak that translates to: HOLY FUCK THAT WAS HAWT!!

(^^ I lurv Biorh nearly as much as I do Billshido and Torg. But any pairing is good if Bill's in it isn't it. :P)

Author's Response:

I do not get enough Torg. It makes me sad. 

But thanks for the translation, and I'm really glad it was hot. I tried to be tender, and I think I was mostly successful, but man-sex just begs to be rough and unemotional to me sometimes.

ANYWAY.

Thanks. 

Reviewer: Steinsgrrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/22/09 02:27 am Title: Chapter 1

Marhea, I didn't think you were actually adding on to this! I just thought you got busy...you know, with calculus and economics. XD

It's funny how you time these things. When the first version of this landed in my inbox on LJ, it came on bad night for me. Then I read it, and it was very sweet, and just knowing that you'd actually written it for me was so wonderful.

Tonight was one of those rough nights. I went to validate fic and this was there, and I think my jaw dropped. lol I had no idea it was coming, no idea you were adding on, and I ran to come read it.

Again, you made my night. I loved how tentative Bill and Georg were with each other, all the eye contact and just wanting to be SURE that this is what the other one wanted. I'm kind of a sucker for hesitant dialogue, too, so my heart squee'd just a little bit then. And even amongst that tenderness, you made sure to make them guys and threw some one-liners in there.

Lovely job, girl. Thank you so much! :D

Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it! Twice!

I definitely felt better after writing something :)

And about me making them guys? That put a big smile on my face :)  

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