Date: 01/31/09 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 5
that was so sweet. tom not putting his thing in bill, but just rubbing against him is hot. i mean tom in bill so hot but still this wass more of making love not just a hot fuck. get what im saying of am i just crazy
Date: 01/31/09 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 5
hot hot everything from bill's party look to the car scene.
they are so passionate. I thought tom's actions after there orgasms was so loving. I can't get over his final words before they sleep.
I love this story. I want to see what's going to happen after they wake up.
Date: 01/31/09 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 5
OH MEIN GOTT That was INSANELY cute! Wow o wow... that was hott too, i'm' so happy about the end... ten out of ten ponts for you *thumbs up*
Date: 01/31/09 04:37 pm Title: Chapter 5
That was perfect! the ending made my heart melt
Date: 01/31/09 04:32 pm Title: Chapter 5
Oh Mi, Big words for just making cum go every where. >.>
I like where this is going, Keep it sweet an happy. :D
Date: 01/31/09 04:07 pm Title: Chapter 5
Goood or bad... U want to know what i think...... I don't like it and i don't hate it! IM IN LOVE!!!!! This is so cute and so I don't know what to say..... maby "GIVE MEW MORE!" Is a good line rihgt now!
I hope you understands my bad english :/ Love it give me more soon. :D
Date: 01/28/09 07:09 am Title: Chapter 4
:D ahhh! good good.
Date: 01/28/09 06:34 am Title: Chapter 4
aww...Tom is so sweet:D
they're so cute together!
Tom's like the ideal boyfriend in this.
:DDDDD
hope there's more soon!
Date: 01/28/09 12:06 am Title: Chapter 4
oh I read prayer and I'm glad the sequel is about their wedding.
I've been reading this from the start but hadn't reviewed but I will know.
tom is too cute but isn't he in all your stories.
I feel sorry for bill he already was an outcast and now he's getting picked on because of his relationship. you always have bill the outcast as well.
I think there going to do something bad to bill. it might be georg being a homophobe.
I think your story is cute and I like them together especially since tom's not a shame of bill. he might not be so popular after the party though.
more because I like your fluff stories.
Date: 01/27/09 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 4
=D yay Toms so sweet! I hope the party goes okay...Cant wait for it!!
Date: 01/27/09 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 4
it's really good, keep them coming
Date: 01/27/09 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 4
Awwwe. That was so sweet. Tomi pulling him back for a kiss before he went into class. *squee* ^^
Date: 01/27/09 07:38 pm Title: Chapter 4
I love it! Why people all in Bill and Tom's bizness? lol And I hope this party goes smoothly for Bill. :)
Date: 01/27/09 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 4
whens the party?
Author's Response: party is the next chapter which will be up saturday so stay tuned <3
Date: 01/27/09 07:22 pm Title: Chapter 4
Hmm... i wonder what's going to happen next. Update soon.
Date: 01/27/09 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 4
yepppe u updated
me luff this story hehehe
im like the part where tomi's says u kno u like it
Date: 01/27/09 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 4
this is really good. this story is really turning out nicely.
Date: 01/27/09 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 4
Aww this chapter was cute, it's nice to not see tom trying to play bill and the popularity off... that always leaves bill sad... So i love you for this and cant wait for the party chapter :D
Date: 01/24/09 05:02 pm Title: Chapter 3
lmfao
that weapon of mast destruction gag was hilarious :D
Date: 01/23/09 04:14 am Title: Chapter 3
i loved it, as always. soo more please?