Date: 01/19/09 07:02 pm Title: Little Play Thing
The last line....*SQUEE*
Lucy, you are amazing. =] That DEFINITELY made up for it xD Doubly bottoming...always a good thing.
Greeeeaattt, sweetie!
Author's Response: lol ^^ SO happy you liked it and that it made up for thew lack of bottomtomi in the other fic ,p so...it's coming to the time when I start poking you again *poke* ...you writing, girl? *pokepoke*
Date: 01/19/09 06:45 pm Title: Little Play Thing
*glomps you*
Author's Response: lol ^^ *won't let you go*
Date: 01/19/09 06:20 pm Title: Little Play Thing
*“You don’t want an older woman. You wouldn’t if you were sober.”
-> Of course he wouldn't, because then he'd realize she'd be much more experienced than he is, and she'll just make fun of his lack of skills. No? :P
*I'd like to confirm whether Bill smells good or not.
*“Yeah, yeah I’ll come…you know, after I’ve…come.” xD
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*That's going quite smoothly. :P
*Awww, only Bill is allowed to touch his dreads. :)
*I'm not used to that, Tom the one that isn't in charge, being led by the girl. I'm 3 months older than the twins,...*wonders*
*“Do you ever do things…with Bill?”
-> Risky thing to ask :P
*That girl has balls! Good thing Tom is still aroused. :P
*Does our little Tomi likes something up his ass? Oh yes he does. :P
*“I presumed it would be you, but now…I’m not so sure anymore.”
-> Oh my god, I so LOVE the Natascha character!
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*“What did she do?”
-> Yes, what did she do, Tom? *evil grin*
*“You’d rather go fuck yourself with my dildo than hang out with me?”
xD haha, that's pretty clear.
Horny twin, me likes
*Right now he just wanted Tom to leave the room so he could shove his hand down his pants.
-> as I said,...horny twin, me likes :P
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*That was to be expected, that Bill's dildo would be their size :P
*Are you trying to kill me? As if Tom toying in the shower wasn't hot enough already, you had to bring Bill in as well? :P
*Bill did buy that size on purpose:P
*Gawd, that twin sex was HOT ! *dies after all*
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*Yes, he was definitely sticking to people his own age from now on, preferably no more than ten minutes younger.
-> Awww, after all the hotness such a sweet end line. Lovely!
VERY good story!
Nice work girl!
I LOVE your writing
Author's Response: weeeeeeee *squeals* your reviews always make me so happy ^^ lol, yes, Tom wouldn't want an older woman cause she'll be better in bed than him (although I doubt that is possible) and Bill smells good, that's just a rule of the universe, Bill Kaulitz smells like heaven and sin! LOL yes the girl has balls, but what fun would it be if she didn't ,p SO happy you like Natasha, she's my first OFC and that's always scary! me likes horny twin, too, iz very hot ja ,) lol, and yeah, the dildo being their size was pretty clishe, but it worked out nicely ^^ lol, had to stick that sweet line in there, I'm a sucker for romantic endings ,p much much love for you girl, thank you so much for being the awsomness that you are !!!
Date: 01/19/09 05:57 pm Title: Little Play Thing
“Don’t tell me you’re gonna grow a cock and fuck me.” Tom chuckled, clenching his ass against the emptiness he felt.
XD LMFAO!!!
And anyway, it was just another thing he had in common with his little brother, the ’liking things up your ass’ thing
xD whahahahahahaahh gosh just love how you wrote this!
OMG THIS WAS SO EFFING HOTTTTT
gosh, I just LOVE older women with the twins!
heheehe, I can't believe she said all of that to him and that he just took it up like that0_o.
SOOOOOOOOO sexy!!! *grins*
Author's Response: lol, so happy you found it funny and sexy ^^ this review made me smile so much !!! Tom didn't have much of a choice really, he had to take it up like that (I really hope pun was intended with that because that was way too funny xD) and he secretly begged for it ^^ peach out <3
Date: 01/19/09 05:54 pm Title: Little Play Thing
HOLY FUCKING HELL!! That was definitely the HAWTEST smutty fiction I've read in FOREVER! The whole idea of Tomi, a groupie (or Billa) and a dildo is just so .. So OMG!!! *drool** LOVED THIS!!
Author's Response: LOL you really liked this, huh? that makes me SO happy! thank you so, so much for this, it made me laugh ,p
Date: 01/19/09 05:43 pm Title: Little Play Thing
That was...simply the hottest thing I've read in a long while *_*
I have a new-found love for bottom!Tom.
Author's Response: thank you so much <3 bottomtom is just the greatest, I love how he whimpers ,p hugs
Date: 01/19/09 05:34 pm Title: Little Play Thing
I want to be honest with you, luv; this was not my cup of tea.
You are one of the best writers here and this was very well written and I love the idea of Tom bottoming and the dildos. I just don't like het, even if he didn't fuck her.
But the part with Bill was very hot! I agree with Remy, you write the best porn!
xx
Author's Response: aw, don't like het do you, Kat? well, at least I didn't mention her boobs xD I don't read het either, actually I don't read anything where the twins don't end up together, which is silly because it means I'm missing out on a lot of nice fanfiction, but I just can't *pout* so happy you liked the bill/tom action then ,) much love (and you do realize you're making me blush here right?)
Date: 01/19/09 05:15 pm Title: Little Play Thing
*guh* You kill me, Lucy, you really do. Omg, where to even start, haha. I'm still trying to calm down...
Um, the older woman--I want to be her and teach Tom a few things. ;) I love him being all submissive--I don't see that very often, and it is oh-so-hot!
As soon as I saw where you were going with the dildo thing, I was so excited for Tom to get back to Bill. The descriptions during that whole part were so, so hot though, that I enjoyed it even though it was an OFC. It's like you read my mind with the bottom!Tom--I really love that so much. *drools*
I really liked the way that you handled the OFC--it wasn't that you tried to make us like her or make there be anything special between the two of them, but it was more that the reader could put themselves in her place, seeing Tom that way. *blushes* I'm sure you did it intentionally, but I thought it was interesting that when Natasha calls him Tommy it's "Tommy" and with Bill it's "Tomi", since we all know that's his special way of writing it. I thought that was a neat way of differentiating them again.
And THEN, the twincest! I was giggling right along with Bill when Tom told his story, trying to play it off like it wasn't a big deal, lol. And the idea of them sharing a dildo kind of killed me, in a good way. ;)
And thanks so much for your sweet words in the dedication--I loved the story too, too much! You write the best porn! :) *hugs*
Author's Response: OO I'm sort of half whimpering half squealing right now...and blushing, blushing REALLY bad! SO happy you liked the OFC, she was my first and I was very nervous about her! I realized later, when I was reading it through, that I didn't even mention her boobs and that's when I remembered that oh yes, this is het, I don't write het...ah what the hell ,p aw, and you noticed the Tommy thing ^^ I do that in all my fics, no one but Bill calls him Tomi ^^ I recal that when I wrote about them using the same dildo, right at the mentioning of Bill having asked Tom in the past if he wanted to borrow it sometime, that I sort of had to pause for a moment and wonder if I was the only one who would find that hot and if it actually was a little disturbing. But then I reminded myself that this is twincest I'm writing, it doesn't get much more disturbing ,) lots of love for you, darling, know that I am waiting anxiously for your next fic, I need my Remydrug !
Date: 01/19/09 05:08 pm Title: Little Play Thing
Hey chica! Loved it! Though the het totally threw me for a loop. I mean, I knew it was there, but I was just so shocked and not used to it.
Admittedly it wasn't total het (hence the dildo) but still.
When the story first began I thought the twins had an established relationship b/c of the way they were acting but I guess not. They were cute at first. Then they got kinky as hell!
Totally fabulous!
The shower scene was fantastic as well. I wasn't expecting Tom to be bottoming at all. That was a shock. It was still great though. And it was a nice change (though just for the record I prefer Bill on the bottom).
I can't believe Natasha had the nerve to ask him about his relationship w/ Bill during sex. Talk about confidence.
Actually while I'm thinking of it I should say how cool I though she was. You did a really good job developing her as a character in a very short period of time. Plus Tom's choosing her was very telling as well. You're really good at that.
No wonder you're the best writer on the site!
Anywho great job.
Sorry I havent' emailed in a while. I'm getting so lazy it's not even funny. I'll email eventually I promise. I do want to talk, there's always fun stuff to tell you.
Again AMAZING job on this, I hope writing het was at least a little fun for you, maybe a lot (though hopefully not too much, lol).
Can't wait for everything else!
~Your Queen
Author's Response: lol, the het was scary ^^ I couldn't even mention her boobs xD and girl, when do I ever write normal het? not gonna happen ,p aw, you thought they were cute at the beggining? well, that was what I was going for! brotherly love over the top, gotta love them like that ^^ hihi, Tom bottoming is one of my big kinks, I LOVE him like that, but Bill is a mighty hot bottom, too ,) you have no idea how much it means to me that you liked Natasha! she was my first OFC ever and I was very nervous about her, it's always hard introducing someone new in a one-shot, but it makes me smile so goddamn much that it worked this time! and it's really not fair that you're making me blush you know! you should write something soon so that I can get you back and make you blush ,) and, girl, I haven't e-mailed you either, so sorry, school's taking it's toll and I'm writing like crazy (poor beta of mine ^^) but I'm gonna answer yours this week, promise! lol, writing het was...interresting. Kinda like writing Andy/Simone; disturbing, but fun, and not something I'm gonna do again way too soon ,) love you so Queen, yours luce
Date: 01/19/09 04:49 pm Title: Little Play Thing
Holy moly, that was hot!
jeez ... (:
Author's Response: hihi, thank you so much ^^