Date: 02/25/09 10:47 pm Title: Chapter Five: Next Time Around, Think About What You Say Before You Run Your Mouth
Oh my gosh. I used to be obsessed with MCR too! Junior year of High school was all about MCR. Now it's all about Tokio Hotel.
Author's Response: haha, i know, right? MCR was where it was at ;) But now it's ALLLL TH :D
Date: 02/25/09 09:30 pm Title: Chapter Five: Next Time Around, Think About What You Say Before You Run Your Mouth
Amazing! Having Bill and Gerard fight over me is my dream! I love MCR! you handled the confrontation brilliantly, I could just imagine them being like that. I love this story and can't wait for more, I am soooooo favoriting this :)
Author's Response: =D I'm glad you liked it, babe. If I'm not mistaken, you're a new reader. I'm ecstatic that you like it enough to favorite it and am terribly happy that you imagine them as I do. Thanks for the review, sweetie! ♥
Date: 02/25/09 08:33 pm Title: Chapter Five: Next Time Around, Think About What You Say Before You Run Your Mouth
oh so good i thought they would get into a shouting match. not really thinking bill was a fighter. and then i thought he may pull her to him and kiss her in the hall.
Author's Response: =] i'm glad you liked it. haha, i actually thought about the whole kissing her in the hall. XD it was so close to being put in there, but i wanted them to take it slow. :D Thanks for the review, babe. ♥
Date: 02/25/09 08:18 pm Title: Chapter Five: Next Time Around, Think About What You Say Before You Run Your Mouth
DUDE!
My eyes are like glued to the screen.
I read over atleast 3 times!
- Gotta say, I LOVE jelouse Bill! -
Hehe. I love it!
The waiting...Killed. Its SERIOUSE TORTURE! It was worth it though...just painful.
So, PLEASE update soon soon soon!
With lots of more more more!
Author's Response: =D I'm glad you loved it babe. Sorry about the wait; writer's block is a slut. I promise I will try to get the next one out faster :D Thanks for the review! ♥
Date: 02/25/09 07:55 pm Title: Chapter Five: Next Time Around, Think About What You Say Before You Run Your Mouth
Oh my goodness! MCR was my LIFE before some things happened, and I eventually found Tokio Hotel. Cliche, but I can relate to Abby with this chapter. I really like how you made Bill not like Gerard, and I think you showed the hostility very well. I imagine Bill that way too. I'm also really glad Abby wasn't all fangirly with MCR. She handled the situation very well. lol :) Can't wait for more amazingness!
Author's Response: =D wheww. i'm very glad you liked it! i'm glad you can relate to abby; i try to make my chracters like that. it makes it so much more fun :) Thanks so much for the review, babe! ♥
Date: 02/25/09 06:49 pm Title: Chapter Five: Next Time Around, Think About What You Say Before You Run Your Mouth
it was defiantly worth the wait!!! great job!! :D
Author's Response: :D i'm glad you liked it; thanks for the review, babe! ♥
Date: 02/21/09 01:20 am Title: Chapter Four: She's Got This Journal Filled With All Her Black-Ink Guilt
After my short absence, I'm back and can't remember if I've reviewed lately or not D: I would be too lazy to go and check too, wouldn't I? Anyway, hope all is well and you need to update this, SAP.
Love
Author's Response: it's okay, babe! i'm always up for more reviews! XDD all is well, thank, and more should be up very soon! thanks for the review, love! ♥
Date: 02/10/09 03:17 pm Title: Chapter Four: She's Got This Journal Filled With All Her Black-Ink Guilt
Ah, every girl's greatest problem: what to wear. Sudenly everything looks awful when you know it wasn't. Still. What's a girl to do?
I love the chappy, especially Noah, and the intrigue! What did happen?? I'm assuming Kelly was part of, but still - I wanna know!!
Author's Response: Haa, I know? Poor Abby, right? =] I'm glad you loved it; and neveryoumind about the story--that comes later ;D Thanks for the review, babe! <33
Date: 02/09/09 04:56 pm Title: Chapter Four: She's Got This Journal Filled With All Her Black-Ink Guilt
I loved the chapter! Oh did Kelly make Noah think she was in love with him? Oh and fyi I have already posted up 2 chapter 21
Author's Response: =] i'm glad you loved it, babe. thanks for the review. and i'll be sure to hop over and update my reading status! XD <33
Date: 02/08/09 02:54 am Title: Chapter Two: I Want To; That's A Given
noah sounds like MY best friend noah. like..creepily identical lol except my noah died about a year ago and hopefully this noah wont die.
i have to pause reading for now but i'll restart in the morning =]
Author's Response: D= awww. i'm sorry about your loss, dear. <33 i'll look forward to you in the morning :)
Date: 02/08/09 02:16 am Title: Chapter One: I Can’t Pretend I Wasn’t Terrified to Meet You
good god its a good thing i just read this!!! D= i am formerly kelsLIVES lol and if you've contacted me by now, i'm sorry i forgot: today seems to be a massive brainfart day for me. BUT, my old account was taken off because i have copyrights on remember when and circle games now cuz i'm publishing remember when (not as a fanfic though, obviously) but finishing it as an ff first. *deep inhale* sooo if you'd still like to read it, i'd be happy to email you the chapters as they're done =D
ANYWAYS...this is very cute. on to the next chapters =]
Author's Response: :) I have contactecd you before. But it's okay. I'm glad to hear conformation from you personally. -le gasp- And in a review?! -blushes- it kind of honors me that someone like you would even read my story. =^^= I'm glad you think it's cute, and thanks SO MUCH for the review <333
Date: 02/08/09 12:15 am Title: Chapter Four: She's Got This Journal Filled With All Her Black-Ink Guilt
What a great end to a day! I got new painting supplies, and you updated! *Does happy dance* I really enjoyed this chapter because I like how unexpected it was. I love her reactions to the evil fangirls and how she feels like she's intruding. It makes her seem more 3D, if that makes any sense. I hope she goes and hangs out with Bill tomorrow! Great update, hun! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: :) Thank you so much. I'm glad you feel that way, because that's what I'm really trying to get across. I want her to seem normal, but not plain... if you understand that XD But thank you so much for the review. More should be up soon! <333
Date: 02/08/09 12:07 am Title: Chapter Four: She's Got This Journal Filled With All Her Black-Ink Guilt
Wonderful as Usual, I love it!
I cannot wait for more!
Its addicting! I am SO Hooked!
xDD - Please Dont torture me!
Update Soon! Hehe.
Author's Response: =D Thank you, dear. I'm so glad to hear you loved it :) Thanks for the review, and hopefully, more is coming soon XD <33
Date: 02/07/09 09:47 pm Title: Chapter Four: She's Got This Journal Filled With All Her Black-Ink Guilt
im confused but about to read it again. im sure to get it second round
Author's Response: :( I'm very sorry I confused you, sweetheart. Thank you for the review, though. If you have any questions, just let me know and I'll do my best to clear them up for you :D
Date: 02/07/09 09:30 pm Title: Chapter Four: She's Got This Journal Filled With All Her Black-Ink Guilt
new reader here!! i love your story! absolutley amazing!! what happened to "Remember when" and kelslives? i can't wait to read your next update and see what happens next!
Author's Response: :) Thank you so much for the review, babe. I'm glad you like the story. As for Miss kelsLIVES, she's taken down "Remember When", as it's credited for publishing. She's made a new username (Adi-Adi), and you can contact her if you'd like to recieve the remainder of the story through e-mail. =]
Date: 01/29/09 03:21 pm Title: Chapter Three: Singing Never Got Her Very Far
Again, I lovelovelove Bill in this! Too cute! And it's sweet how mortified she is while Bill is roflhfao. I can't believe I just wrote that, but it gets the point across.
Pleeeeaassseeeeeee update!
Author's Response: =] I'm supersuper glad you like it, babe! Thanks so much for the review; more should be coming soon! <33
Date: 01/27/09 09:07 am Title: Chapter Three: Singing Never Got Her Very Far
I am so excited for the next one. You have no idea.
Author's Response: =D i'm glad. the next one should be out soon! thanks for the review! <3
Date: 01/26/09 11:04 pm Title: Chapter Three: Singing Never Got Her Very Far
Excellent chapter!
I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you! More is coming soon! :)
Date: 01/26/09 10:14 pm Title: Chapter Three: Singing Never Got Her Very Far
I didn't see any mistakes, but then again, I sometimes don't catch any of my mistakes either!
I felt so embarrassed for Abby when she said that. Yipes! I hate when that happens!
My friend sometimes does that, and she said that she needed to learn to turn her filter on. XD
Author's Response: Haa, I know. Poor little Abby. She desperately needed a filter. <33 Thanks for the review, babe! <33
Date: 01/26/09 09:39 pm Title: Chapter Three: Singing Never Got Her Very Far
I LOVE IT!
Its funny...Im actually aiming to be a CPA {Celebrity Personal Assistant}.
If I dont make my dream in musik, atleast I'll be somewhat close to it...and I wont end up as a hobo!
That or Nurse...but I dont like hospitals - I keep thinking on how many people have dies in there...and how many dead people and sad things Im gonna SEE...Scary, BUT its 'good money' && somewhat easy job.
My dream is to be a musician - but gotta have a secured future first, no?
...I dont want to relie on other people later on - Im very independent.
...Omg! Man, did I get Off Topic!
Well - THE STORY is DA SHIT!
I love it!
Please Continue your awesome skillz - I...am IN LOVE.
Update Soon!
Author's Response: XD hakuna matata, sweetheart. It's all good. I love me some spontaneous reviews! And I'm glad you like the story; thanks so much for the review! More is coming soon <33