Date: 12/13/10 08:48 am Title: Chapter Five: Next Time Around, Think About What You Say Before You Run Your Mouth
Loved it!
Author's Response: I'm glad! Thanks for the review, sweetie! :D
Date: 12/13/10 08:28 am Title: Chapter Four: She's Got This Journal Filled With All Her Black-Ink Guilt
Loved it!
Author's Response: Thanks doll! :)
Date: 12/12/10 10:38 pm Title: Chapter Three: Singing Never Got Her Very Far
Loved it!
Author's Response: :) Glad you enjoyed, pumpkin!
Date: 12/12/10 09:55 pm Title: Chapter Two: I Want To; That's A Given
Loved it!
Author's Response: :) Thanks, doll! Glad you enjoyed!
Date: 12/12/10 09:30 pm Title: Chapter One: I Can’t Pretend I Wasn’t Terrified to Meet You
Loved it!
Author's Response: Thanks so much beautiful! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :]]
Date: 10/02/10 06:25 am Title: Chapter Twenty: I Wanna See Your Face and Know I Made It Home
Thank you so much for this awesome story! :D
It is beautifully written and very believable! :)
Although the German you used was mostly wrong and we do have the game Twister in Germany :P
I don't know if someone told you before and if you want to change it but it should be:
German:
"Tobi, sie bedrängen Abby!"
- Tobi, they're pressing (harassing) Abby!
"Tobi, vergessen Sie es; sie haben sie nicht gefunden.”
- Tobi, forget it; they've not found her
But nonetheless, the story was amazing! :) I enjoyed every second of it!
Greetings from Germany!
o0Penny0o
Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it! AHAH XD And I'm so sorry about the German XD I only used Babelfish. I will change it, though; thanks for the info ;]] I'm so glad you liked it, again, and thanks so much for the review! ♥
Date: 09/05/10 10:56 pm Title: Chapter Ten: My Secret is Bigger Than Victoria's
beautifully written.i`m floored.
Author's Response: Thank you so much :D
Date: 09/05/10 10:39 pm Title: Chapter Nine: Say What You Need to Say
clean cut and exciting
Author's Response: Thank youuuu :))
Date: 09/05/10 09:44 pm Title: Chapter Six: Get On Your Knees
baby jesus on holy crack i`m going to keep this comment short cuz i need to know what happens next like burning flaming asap, so:
very nice))
Author's Response: HAHA. :) Well, I'm glad you're burning for it, and I hope it doesn't disappoint! Thanks for the review!
Date: 09/05/10 09:23 pm Title: Chapter Five: Next Time Around, Think About What You Say Before You Run Your Mouth
oh my.. god. it just gets better and better.
Author's Response: Girl, you've not seen better yet! ;] Haha, thanks for the review!
Date: 09/05/10 08:30 pm Title: Chapter Three: Singing Never Got Her Very Far
.. and clever
Author's Response: :)
Date: 09/05/10 07:59 pm Title: Chapter Two: I Want To; That's A Given
lovely
Author's Response: Thanks, pumpkin! :]
Date: 09/05/10 07:30 pm Title: Chapter One: I Can’t Pretend I Wasn’t Terrified to Meet You
i really like the way you write abby. it`s very natural, unforced. believable. the way she thinks and reacts is endearing. i appreciate your work. really. and this all just after 1st chapter. you r good.
Author's Response: :) Thank you so much! Your compliments are much appreciated! I hope you enjoy the rest, and thanks so much for the review!
Date: 08/02/10 10:10 pm Title: Chapter Two: I Want To; That's A Given
hey great chappi
Author's Response: Thanks, doll :)
Date: 06/17/10 02:59 am Title: Chapter Twenty: I Wanna See Your Face and Know I Made It Home
Awe, this story was so freaking adorable. (: I loved it.
Author's Response: I'm glad! Thanks for the review, pumpkin! :D
Date: 05/30/10 03:01 am Title: Chapter Twenty: I Wanna See Your Face and Know I Made It Home
I read this story all in one day and the ending had me all teary eyed!! Its so cute! Most stories i read of bill have different personalities but i can actually see him like this! Fantastic story!
Author's Response: Wow o.o one whole day? That's dedication! Thank you so much, sweets! I'm very glad you liked it and thanks so much for the review!
Date: 05/09/10 07:14 pm Title: Chapter Twenty: I Wanna See Your Face and Know I Made It Home
Aw! I've been reading this for about a week and finally finished it! It was really good! You're a really talented writer!
Author's Response: Oh my God, thank you so much! :) I'm very glad you liked it and thanks for the sweet comment! ♥rn
Date: 04/14/10 02:49 pm Title: Chapter Twenty: I Wanna See Your Face and Know I Made It Home
Daawww! This is such a sweet love story, despite the psycho ex-boyfriend.
So glad Abby and Bill got their happy ice cream ending!
Author's Response: :D I'm very glad you liked it, dear! Thanks for the review ;]
Date: 04/04/10 01:04 am Title: Chapter Twenty: I Wanna See Your Face and Know I Made It Home
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Author's Response: you! :)
Date: 04/02/10 08:08 pm Title: Chapter Twenty: I Wanna See Your Face and Know I Made It Home
Oh, so cute, Abby must really trust Bill since she's letting him blindfold her.
I loved this story, though not as much humor as I had expected but it was very sweet and romantic.
Author's Response: You're the first person to say something about that :D I'm very glad you caught that little bit; I def wanted to solidify the trust and love they had for each other in lots of little gestures. And as for the humor, I had to throw it out the window to make room for all the sweetness ;] Thanks for the reviews, love! I am supii glad you enjoyed the story!! ♥