Date: 06/10/09 07:18 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Fix You
That was sooo unbelievably cute!
Jeez, I'm smiling so big right now :D
Cheese is good! Both in cliche form and food form, I highly recommend it :P
I can't wait to see how things turn out!
I want Ryan to die!! Have I said that already?
Hope you update soon!
DCB
Author's Response: Haha, I'm veryvery glad you liked it :) Thanks so much for the review (and your statement; I kind of want Ryan to die too ;D) More is coming soon! ♥
Date: 06/10/09 06:55 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Fix You
Aw, I loved the cheese <3. And thanks for the quick update!
Author's Response: =] i'm glad sweetiepie! thanks so much for all the reviews and support ♥♥
Date: 06/10/09 06:33 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Fix You
Aww, that was sweet, no matter how much cheese was packed into it.
Bill really is adorable, and it almost made me want to scream at first when she didn't wake up.
Cheese is good once in awhile. :D
Author's Response: Aww, thanks babe =] Glad you liked the sweet/cheese-ness ;]
Date: 06/10/09 06:31 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Fix You
I'M CRYING THANKS TO YOU D:
This was a great chapter.
Continue soon.
Author's Response: Aww, sorry XD Haha, thanks for the review though! More is coming soon :D
Date: 06/07/09 11:11 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen: You Just Want Her (Reprise)
Awww...this was so sad and heavy. It made me cry T-T. I hope everything turns out alright in the end! >.
Author's Response: Aww, I'm sorry I made you cry ): Haha, we'll have to wait and see how it turns out, yes? ;) Thanks for the review, babe! ♥
Author's Response: Aww, I'm sorry I made you cry ): Haha, we'll have to wait and see how it turns out, yes? ;) Thanks for the review, babe! ♥
Date: 06/07/09 08:43 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen: You Just Want Her (Reprise)
Wow, I didn't expect Abby's story to be that sad. Great chapter though, I hope Bill can save her.
Author's Response: Well... at least I kept you on your toes? xD Haha, thanks for the review, babe! I hope so too ;D ♥
Date: 06/07/09 06:21 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen: You Just Want Her (Reprise)
oh wow, that skin thing, pain in the ass, that's all I have to say, and undeniably scary. I don't think I could live with something like that. *shudders* Poor Abby :( Bill can save her!! Yes!! but first he has to get through Noah *roar* :)
“You’re so demanding and bossy I don’t think she ever had time to be scared of you. She didn’t even realize the connection between you and Ryan before it was too late.”
Mwahahaha, ouch. Coming from the best friend that is a big ouchie :) which is why I love Noah :) he isn't afraid to give 'em booboos :)
Author's Response: :) Haha, tru dat, tru dat. Thanks for the review, babe! ♥
Date: 06/07/09 05:38 pm Title: Chapter One: I Can’t Pretend I Wasn’t Terrified to Meet You
score :)
lol i doubt i'll be the last to follow anyway!!
Author's Response: Ahaha, I hope you're not the last xD Thanks again, sweetie! ♥
Date: 06/07/09 04:00 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen: You Just Want Her (Reprise)
:0 it's beautiful.
i've jumped on the band wagon quite late into the game but that doesn't mean i don't avidly await the next chapter!!!! :)
Author's Response: :) i'm glad you like it! and don't worry;; better late than never ;DD thanks so much for the review, sweetie! more is coming soon! ♥
Date: 06/07/09 01:28 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen: You Just Want Her (Reprise)
omg so great. this is ur best chatper yet. i love it.update soon
Author's Response: =D Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it! More soon ;D &heart;s
Date: 06/07/09 11:59 am Title: Chapter Fourteen: You Just Want Her (Reprise)
KC again, so happy that ur story is doing so well! Ill try an get ya featured soon! cant wait for mor
-KC
Author's Response: Thanks so much, babe! Good to hear from you again ;D Aww, and thank you so much. That's really sweet! Thanks for the review, babe! *mwah!*
Date: 06/07/09 02:01 am Title: Chapter Fourteen: You Just Want Her (Reprise)
CURSE THE CLIFFHANGER!!!!!
It's my nemisis.
Author's Response: xD Sorry! Thanks for the review, though ;D ♥
Date: 06/07/09 01:37 am Title: Chapter Fourteen: You Just Want Her (Reprise)
The story just got sooooo amazingly awesome! Really intense hun! O.O I really can't wait 'till the next one!
Author's Response: =D Thanks! I'm super glad you like it! Thanks for the review, lovely! ♥
Date: 06/07/09 01:13 am Title: Chapter Fourteen: You Just Want Her (Reprise)
WOAH
Wait...skin shirt? Is that real or just an idea? Very disturbing, god I can't believe she was so badly mutilated she needs another layer of skin. She has to take it off and on every day? Shit...
I'm not quite getting how Bill and Ryan are similiar...but I'm slow, so...
Anyways, I loved this chapter! Yes it was very sad, but very necessary. Now we all know what we need to about Abby's past.
I hope Ryan dies! Haha while I was typing that I was smiling, just a little too cheerful for such terrible, but justified hope. :P
Hope you update soon, I can't wait to see where this goes!
Awesome job!
DCB
Author's Response: :) Hmm, it's sort of kind of real. Think prosthetics ;D You know, it's the fake skin that goes over prosthetics? That's kind of what I was going for. I'm not entirely sure if it comes in shirt form XDD But yeah :P And in the context of Bill and Ryan, I only mean that Ryan put up a front that was similar to Bill's personality ;D Anyway, thanks so much for the review! I really appreciate it! ♥
Date: 06/04/09 03:58 am Title: Chapter Thirteen: Why Does Love Always Feel Like...?
ok so I,ve been reading and I been addicted for like some hours.And i have a few questions cos i've just caught up.Oh hell no Ryan is back.What happened to "Paradice avec Billa".Oh and isn't it every girl's dream to have not one but two international rockstars interested in her...My My My!Oh and as I was reading I came across a word I have no idea what a Tweet or whatever it was.I was seriously lost.So could you be as of the kindest to reply6 back and please teel me what that word means and/or is...
Avec Amour.
MzBillKaulitz251
Author's Response: =] I'm glad to hear you like it, love. As for your question(s), paradise wiff Bill (I'm only guessing that's what "paradice avec Bill" is; if it's not, feel free to correct me :D) is frought with troubles, like any relationship. However, things get better. I promise ;D And as for your next question, "twink" (Once again, I'm assuming that's the word you're questioning; feel free to correct me again ;D) basically means a young or young-looking gay man. I hope this covered everything! =D Thanks for the review, lovely! ♥
Date: 05/29/09 10:49 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen: Why Does Love Always Feel Like...?
I loved this chapter so much, Bill sounded so adorable. I can't wait to see what happens with Ryan, please, please update soon.
Author's Response: Aww, i'm glad you loved it, sweetheart! The next chapter should be up soon ;D Thanks for the review!
Date: 05/29/09 04:24 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen: Why Does Love Always Feel Like...?
I loved the realness in this chapter- the whole situation with being a couple or not was very grounded and was pleasantly absent of fairytale solutions, and made it much more enjoyable. Noah's reaction to getting Abby was very well done and I can't wait to read what's next! Great chappie sweets!
Author's Response: =D thank you so much! that's exactly what i was going for and i'm super happy that you saw it in the chapter! thanks for the review, love! ♥
Date: 05/29/09 04:38 am Title: Chapter Thirteen: Why Does Love Always Feel Like...?
oh GOD i love this story. let me in the story im going to kick ryans ass. B&A DESERV happyness
Author's Response: =D I'm glad you liked it. Haa, oh girl, you just wait until the story gets good. We've got some intense chapters coming up ;D Thanks for the review, babe!
Date: 05/29/09 03:17 am Title: Chapter Seven: Take Your Pants Off!
“Tom had a late-night affair with a lamp. Cheated on it with a TV.”
I couldn't stop laughing!
Author's Response: XD Thanks!
Date: 05/29/09 01:53 am Title: Chapter Thirteen: Why Does Love Always Feel Like...?
:OOOOOO
Author's Response: DANI! YOU'RE ALIVE! -glomp- ...thankssssss:D