Date: 05/15/09 11:59 pm Title: The Father Of Your Life
plz update soon thx soso much=]
Author's Response: lolz i'll try
Date: 05/14/09 12:47 am Title: The Father Of Your Life
Yay! Is Nathalie gonna come back now?? Please update soon!
Author's Response: weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeell *grins evilly*
Date: 05/13/09 10:36 pm Title: The Father Of Your Life
Author's Response: YES! :D
Date: 05/13/09 10:36 pm Title: The Father Of Your Life
hohoho! i cried for like three chapters straight! now i need to see what they're planning on doing! i need to know how it ends; happy ending or sad ending? KEEP GOING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: D: is this storie that sad?!
lolz well soon ull see what is their plan! n bout the ending... well i cant say but i will say there is a pretty small sequel D:
Date: 05/13/09 08:14 pm Title: The Father Of Your Life
awwwe i love these two=D
WOW i can't beliebe jorg is ok with tom liking bill.i guess he's not as mean as i thought him to be?!but i'm glad he isn't=D
YES!bill is a genius the only thing i'm worried about is what if something goes wrong with bill's plan?and simce tom doesn't know about it?!is there like a reason, is something bad going to happen that involves tomi not knowing about the plan?!
your chapter short???what are you talking about, it was totally not short at all.It was rather lengthy, as always, but don't get me wrong, i love
your long-ass chapters*grins*
Author's Response: *grins*
lolz, well jorg isnt bad he just wasnt a good father when tomi was small cuz he got his reasons, but he loves his child n wants him to b happy :D
n yup my pretty billa is a genious! n the thingy of tomi not knowing ..hmmm... nope, just a big surprise ^^
n well, this chappie was 8 word pages when i tend to write 10 to 11 pages so there is a difference D:
Date: 05/13/09 06:41 pm Title: The Father Of Your Life
yeaaaaaa u updated!
Author's Response: yup sure i did!
Date: 05/13/09 04:13 pm Title: The Father Of Your Life
OMG!!!! I'm like crying, because I can see the happily ever after, its right there, all they have to do is reach out, and catch it!!!! :)
"Well, maybe… Bill-sexual?”
totally :) I loved that line, it has to be my favorite, Bill-sexual :) love it :) love them :) love this :)
Author's Response: xD yup Bill-sexual could b the best word for Tom's love! YAY!
Date: 05/13/09 12:01 pm Title: The Father Of Your Life
OH my GO Bill get that Child Back... But Where is TOM is he at work??
Author's Response: hoho yup he went to do sum stuff at the company ^^
Date: 05/13/09 11:52 am Title: The Father Of Your Life
This is one of the best stories I've ever read. You have a very special way to get your readers involved with all the emotions your characters are living.
Most of the time I can even imagine Tom and Bill really going through all this.
I can hardly wait to read the next chappie.
Please keep on going!
Author's Response: *grins* thnx 4 ur comment!
I really lyk to write the feelings ppl got, n to explain n share them with others, im really bad at words when speaking >///<
sure i'll keep on going with this storie! its almost over so im working hard on it! thnx 4 ur words really they made me trully happy ^^
Date: 05/13/09 11:49 am Title: The Father Of Your Life
No Internet!!!! That is complete torture!
Uh-oh....Tom is probably not goiing to be happy right away about Bill's idea. What happened to them meeting on Saturday and Bill's first date?
Author's Response: hoho it will come soon there are some days b2in monday n saturday that will b loaded with stuff! n well, tomi doesnt know a thing about it *grins evilly* lets see what happens next D:
Date: 05/13/09 11:44 am Title: The Father Of Your Life
YOU UPDATEEEED!!!XDXD *squeals and dances*
And Bill saves the end of this chapter..XD Super Bill saving Tomi and Nat!! HeeeeXD I love it.. LOVE IT!!
So glad you updated.. Haven't read anything decent around here lately.. Woot woot!! Sooo great!!XD
Author's Response: lolz! thnx 4 ur comment!!! :D
yeah Bill will save tomi n just cuz their silly project! XD who would have guessed? not even me! D:
Date: 05/13/09 10:40 am Title: Prologue
You're killing me with these two fics. IWANTTOHUGBOTHTOMISCAUSETHEYNEEDIT!
Author's Response: hohoho n cuz i love tomi im in charge of his pain BUUAHAHAH!
Date: 05/13/09 10:09 am Title: The Father Of Your Life
OMG! This was amazing! It can't be described! ARGH! It's so amazing! Tom's getting his baby back *happy dance*
Author's Response: ^^ thnx cigii :B
yeah now we are workin on getting nathie back YAY!
Date: 05/13/09 10:09 am Title: Prologue
IS THAT JUST UPDATED NOW? *WAVES, GOES TO READ*
Author's Response: :D
Date: 05/13/09 09:59 am Title: The Father Of Your Life
BIIIIIIIIIIIIIILL!! I LOVE YOUR MIND! Fighting for your man, I love it!!!
Author's Response: ^^ yup he gonna fight 4 tomii n well now im sure u wanna go read got a call rosiee D:
Date: 05/05/09 04:47 pm Title: The Breakfast Of Your Life
yay they made up!!
*makes goofy smile*
eh eh
Author's Response: ^^ yup, Tomi will always try to make Billa happy and making up is the best way
Date: 05/04/09 06:04 pm Title: The Breakfast Of Your Life
awwe that was SOOO sweet=D
i liked how billa overreacted when tom was about to ask him to move in with himXDpoor bill he thought tomi was gonna break up with him!LOL
Simone and jorg seem so cool,i wish all parents were like that man!!i bet he loves them a lot=DD
awwe poor tomi, acting all shy around simone.i feel bad 'cause he doesn't have a mom anymore so i bet he must feel really uncomtarble around simone=(
*pouts* so it's almost over huh??but like they say "all good things must come to an end."
are you doing a sequel???coz if you are then i promise i will read it as soon as it comes out!!XDand i also wonder what the name would be???*thinks*
tom is acting as adorable that i think imma melt if i read more. i'm so not used to your tomi being all sweet, i bet bill is having the time of his lifeXD
Thanks for the update and i hope we get another one soon=D*kisses*
Author's Response: have i told u i love ur reviews?
yeah i really wanted bill to overeact! n well now we know they will live together YAY!!!
also yup, simone n jorg are really awesome! lyk not parents but siblings idk, i mean there is ppl who doesnt talk at all with them but well i every now n then talk with them bout that stuff n they DO help! ^^ we just gotta give them a chance u know?
...n yeah this is almost over... n yup a sequel will b written YAY! hohoho u ppl WILL ask me for one, but well more thn a sequel will b lyk season 2 XD name, igot one, ppl dont hate me for it but the song fits, now frm nathalie's point of view "butterfly fly away" (singer got nothing to do with me i swear!)
also tomis attitude... well billa is changing him, rmmb he was dull n cold n everything around ppl but he is gettin better at it, still with ppl he doesnt know he acts lyk b4 so sometimes ull see meanie tomi D:
Date: 05/03/09 09:31 pm Title: The Breakfast Of Your Life
aww ashlee no want it 2 end yet=[
plz update soon thx soso much luv ya=]
Author's Response: lolz just season one is ending D:
Author's Response: lolz just season one is ending D:
Date: 05/03/09 07:33 pm Title: The Breakfast Of Your Life
omg it cant end wahhh
Author's Response: lolz u will b surpriseeed D: i stil got lots of things to write XD
Date: 05/03/09 01:06 pm Title: The Breakfast Of Your Life
great chapter but it seems like your conversations are getting really wordy and unrealistic- people dont talk that formal. and just so you know for the last line "where did andreas took you to for first date?" it should actually be "where did andreas take you on your first date?" you need to really check your grammar because there are a lot of mistakes like this that make it hard to read
Author's Response: i know thnx 4 telling me that. well i know its kinda too formal their talk but at the same time it was a bit emotional so i thought it would b the best and well, it isn't beta'ed so yup. but still i wanted to post it cuz its been long