Date: 02/15/09 06:24 pm Title: The Friends Of Your Life
keep it comin!
Author's Response: yes I will!!!
Date: 02/15/09 06:09 pm Title: Prologue
Ohhh, sweeet! I shall leave you to that then, not interrupt such an important chapter! *nods*
Author's Response: hahaha thnx! no prob!
Date: 02/15/09 05:47 pm Title: Prologue
You're very very welcome! Can't wait to read the next part.
Author's Response: I'm writting it right now! hoho!
Date: 02/15/09 05:06 pm Title: Prologue
Well, I absolutely love this story for that message alone and funny enough, it now forced me to listen to that Eminem song and it's very heartfelt and tug at your heartstrings in its sincerity.
Love this very much. <3333 Thank you for writing this. It's beautiful.
Author's Response: thanks you very much. I know, that song is beautiful isn't it? everytime I listen it i feel the same. He inspired me to write it, and yeah, for Eminem Hailie is his world so i though Nathalie was going to be Tom's. I wanted to write a beautiful storie about a different love, about a familiar love, Im a person that loves her family and is happy to have it. Wish people could love theirs too no matter what. thanks for reading!
Date: 02/15/09 04:12 pm Title: Prologue
I admire him actually, for how much shit he's gone through and still come up better than was expected.
Can't wait to see Bill's final observations for the project!
Author's Response: Yes, he is a fighter, some people tend to leave it like that and give up but there are others that just give their best, somehow that's why im writting this, to show myself that I somehow can be better, if I fight and give my all, yet sometimes that peple need to learn they need from the others, since no one is superman.
Date: 02/15/09 03:56 pm Title: Prologue
Then I'm happy and even more so that Tom finally opened up a bit with Bill, project or not.
*huggles them*
Author's Response: Yeah somehow he was going to open! he is a good guy with a hard life ^^
Date: 02/15/09 12:34 pm Title: The Friends Of Your Life
Ohkey, ready to be confused? Good.
This was the most funny/sweetest/gayest/cutest/lovable chapter Ever! This was so funny because of Andi(BTW, I LOVE HIM!!!!!) Sweet and cutest because of Bill/Tom and the gayest... again because of Andi;D
Okay, so maybe not so confused... but I think you know how i feel about this! MY HEART IS SOON GOING TO BURST OUT OF MY CHEST!!!!
Author's Response: Hohoho!!! n I love ur review!!!! ^^
I do love andi a lot in here! he is like a friend of mine xD n yeah! Bill n Tom are gettin more and more cute! ^^ im typing as fast as i can! so wait plz!
Date: 02/15/09 12:13 pm Title: The Friends Of Your Life
I love it so much, I hope you update it soon
:-)
-Lindsey
Author's Response: I'll lindsey! thnx for reading my storie really! ^^
Date: 02/15/09 08:34 am Title: The Friends Of Your Life
i hate sonja and i love andi
Author's Response: hahaha! everyone loves andi!! YEY!
Date: 02/15/09 06:58 am Title: The Friends Of Your Life
OMG Andi's soooo gay!!! WahahahahaXDXD Sorry, I'm not a HSM fan, but I love Andi's craziness here...
An poor Tomi...T____T And that Sonja woman! aaaarrgghhh!! Arsehole! Sheeesh... And BILL!! LOL... Bill's in love with Tomiiiiiiiii... HeeeeeeeXDXD
Hoping to read the next update soon!:D:D
Author's Response: hahaha! Yey! love andii!!! love love love him n he will be as cute as ever! haha n im not a HSM fan yet my sister was bothering n i wondered should andi love HSM too??? XD
Date: 02/15/09 05:41 am Title: The Friends Of Your Life
Omg...I'm a mom and can't fathom NOT wanting my boys, but holyy fuck....better not say anything about THAT.
I am falling in love with Tom.
Bill's gonna kill me.
Andi was the right person that needed to be there.
The family is now complete.
I
LOVE
THIS
NEED
MORE
Author's Response: I know I really hate the fact that woman kill their own child or hate them! is like they don't deserve to be mothers....
n well the family is in fact complete, nathalie got people that love her and they don't really need to be united by blood. Tom is the father, Georg is like the grandma that takes care of everything and everyone, Andreas is like the little brother that makes everyone enjoy, Gustav is the calm uncle that Nathalie can take advice from and Bill will be like the mother that will take care of her pretty husband and child hoho!
Date: 02/14/09 05:52 pm Title: The Project Of Your Life
Aww, I love this story so much :)
-Lindsey
Author's Response: ^^ thnx a lot lindsey!!! im so happy u are reading my storiee!
Date: 02/14/09 01:26 pm Title: Prologue
I've just started reading this story and I have to admit - it's freakin' awesome. I love the plot and I like the fact, that you are letting the story evolve in a natural way(not rushing things) continue the great work and you have a devoted reader.
Author's Response: thanks for ur review! really! I'm happy about ur sincere comment. I do hate rushed fanfics yet i feel this is going fast, but well I really love this storie so im giving it my all. I'll keep on working hard! ^^
Date: 02/11/09 03:58 pm Title: Prologue
this story looks promising but i would like the point one thing out. You named the first chapter 'Epilogue.' I think you mean prologue. A prologue happens before the story and an epilogue happens after the story. So yeah, you might wanna change that.
So yeah, know i'm gonna read the rest of the chapters =D
Author's Response: XD LOL
haha I was soo excited writting this that I didn't even noticed that!!!!
i'll change it now! thnx a lot! ^^
Date: 02/11/09 07:52 am Title: The Shopping Of Your Life
Oh my freaking god!!!! I love this so much! You aren't going to fast for my opinion;D ARGH! CAN'T WAIT TO NEXT CHAPPIE! WANT IT NOOOOOW!
Author's Response: LOL XD I love ur comment! ^^ patiencee is a virtueee!!! ^^
Date: 02/11/09 04:17 am Title: The Shopping Of Your Life
LOL!! He's gonna open up!! Waaaaaaaahh!!
Please post the next chapter sooooon!! WahahahaXDXD
And Bill's falling... LOL!!XDXD In denial though ahahaXD
Author's Response: hohoho Tomii IS gonna open ^^
yeah now i only need my beta to chek it! DX
...an bill, bill, bill, bill... you can deny it all you want but there is no going back BWAHAHA!
Date: 02/11/09 12:13 am Title: The Shopping Of Your Life
I like the speed of this, although I would be intrigued to know more of Tom's feelings...maybe Georg will need to speak up again?
You seem to be having issues with your past and present tensing when it comes to your endings mostly.
Author's Response: Hohoho soon u'll know how Tom feels, or why he doesn't feel at all *I never said that DX*
Geo will help a lot, and so their friends. mot of it the big cousin! I love him! I would love to have a cousin like Geo! really!!!
n well about my grammar, I got a canadian beta! so i hope this can get fixed^^ anyway thnx 4 telling me about my mistakes really! spanish makes me think in a different order! hehe >o<
Date: 02/10/09 11:55 pm Title: Prologue
xD Tom's eight wonder!! ^o^ prety cute =D
for me Tomi is the eight wonder yijiji xD
Author's Response: xD yeah! for may of us he is the eight wonder!!!! XD so his child is the ninth! hohoho!
Date: 02/10/09 11:33 pm Title: The Shopping Of Your Life
keep it comin! i wanna know what happened!?
Author's Response: hohoho! surprisee surpriiiseee!!! i'll just tell u Tom got a hard past! n Sonja is bad!!! bad mommy bad mommy!!!
Date: 02/10/09 10:42 pm Title: The Shopping Of Your Life
no its good=] i luv thia pl update soon thx=]
Author's Response: sure I'll as soon as I can! still my beta works on them hard so you can understand them! DX