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Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/05/09 09:02 am Title: Prologue

Bill's gotta take over now and take care of Tom, because that boy needs some loving and care and just HUGS man. The poor boy hardly gets any that don't come from Nat!!

And he loves Tom, so it's all gonna come out even when he still wants to stay angry with Tom for doing what he did. He'll see the bigger picture and realize that there's no point in staying angry with the man he loves because in his own way, Tom is still a scared little boy that was forced to grow up too fast without his mother to guide his way.

:-(

Make it better, Billa. It hurts too much right now...



Author's Response: All you said is completely true, i guess u are the one that really gets Tomi, yes I always thought he was in fact a scared little boy that was forced to grow up way too fast, but sometimes people doesn't get to notice... bill will b able to notice and help him, yes he loves him, now bill can't deny it.

Reviewer: -SoLonely- Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/05/09 09:00 am Title: The Bath Of Your Life

so, what Was wrong w/ Tom!?
otherwice you had it really well explained.. so cute the goodbyes of Tom and Nat

Author's Response: I don't know the name of the illness but it's a mixture, my sis got it a few months ago with the same symptomes cuz she is really nervous n overworks herself. she ate few, slept few, got stomachache headaches n so on, so she went to the doc and got lots of medicine cuz she had migraine, gastritis,and a nervous herpes, so yeah lots of things he got cuz the way he lives n so its ture its not some drama stuff XD

Reviewer: cigimuz Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/05/09 08:36 am Title: The Bath Of Your Life

My my... Just how i expected Nathie to act... Oh how sad. And Tom.. I knew something would happy soon! YOU NEED TO EEEEAAAATTT!!!!!

And sure! Let's keep the friendship upppp! YAY!

Author's Response: Yup Nathie wants papa no mama! n Billa-boo will stay with Tomii-doo NOW he will eat buuahaha!

:D yay! Cigii haha i need to read your other stories! hohoho!

Reviewer: pattylake Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/05/09 08:29 am Title: The Bath Of Your Life

I am so totally addicted to your story. I don't know that I reviewed it yet, if I haven't I'm just awful. I do love it though! I look forward to seeing an update everytime I come on here. :D

Author's Response: XD don't worrieee! im glad u like this! ^^ :D thnx really!

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/05/09 05:42 am Title: The Bath Of Your Life

DIDN'T I SAY, OH SO LONG AGO, THAT TOM WOULD COLLAPSE IF HE KEPT THIS UP???

*cries*

God, are you SURE I can't take him home with me? The boy needs the most tender, loving care that money can't buy!

Bill...Billa, Billa, Billa. You really gotta let go of the past and take care of your man. He's falling apart at the seams and soon, he won't be able to get rightly fixed again! He needs YOU, because right now, he's a very lost child without guidance.

My god, that scene with Tom and Nathalie and the little kiss, damn nearly broke me. I feel so awful for them, almost sick to my stomach at what Sonja's doing.

I want Nathalie to make the biggest tantrum on this planet and give her mother a hard time. I dare Sonja to try and hurt that child, just to give us an excuse to take Nathie back from her. Dammit, that woman makes me spit nails and hatred. She's selfish bitch that shouldn't have been a mother!!!



Author's Response: yeah u said it! XD n there the boy was fainted in the bathroom XD

nope u can't take him home, since now Billa is staying with hiim hohoho anyway u can pay a visit every once in a while XP Yeah, Tom is now reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeally lost so Bill must b there to help him keep on going.

I knooow!!! that isn't originaly mine, u see i got a book for kids that talked about that with two cuttie racoons from there on i loved that idea sho i thought y not write it down? :P

Nathie will find a way to get to her father, but right now i cant concentrate a lot in her since Tomi-duu is like all down... but there will b more Nathie!!!

Reviewer: Princess2000204 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/05/09 04:11 am Title: The Bath Of Your Life

Of course I'm sticking around, you've drawn me in too deep for that to be an option!

Finally thinks are getting better, hopefully Bill will get over himself a little and Tom is letting go of his pride, not always an attractive feature when worn in spades such as he! Poor Geo, being continually dragged into this.

Now, for Sonja....a bitch of epic proportions!!!! Either she gives in on hands and knees or Tom snatches Natie back...I'm more for the 1st option, love to see her brought down a few pegs!



Author's Response: hohoho! let me tell u, both Sonja n Tom are really proud persons... D:

Yeah Geo is dragged but its his cousin who we are talking about! Tomi he will let go a little bit since he is sick n badly n Bill yup he will help n try to forget :D

Reviewer: faerylxjae89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/05/09 02:33 am Title: Prologue

I will dont worry =D

Author's Response: :D

Reviewer: faerylxjae89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/05/09 01:58 am Title: Prologue

I know I have plans Big ones too its just they dont wanna be written..  I have a hole backstory as well for Denny and For Snookums. =] youll be surprized.

Author's Response: hohohoho! *grins devily* u better tell me when its done!! YEY!

Reviewer: faerylxjae89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/05/09 01:55 am Title: Prologue

You were a reader? omg ok well I got the christmas part finished and there is actually One chapter for the next part up... I am still working the next chapter for that one. its so hard. I will be having more snookums Adventures after I get the second chapter done. 

Author's Response: yey!!!! ^^ don't worry u'll b able to get it written!

Reviewer: faerylxjae89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/05/09 01:47 am Title: The Bath Of Your Life

Ok come on make more

why do wanna know where Snookums is? I need to know that part? 



Author's Response: hahaha i will!!

well i was just remembering ur doggie well the kaulitz doggie n his crazy adventures XD

Reviewer: icequeenqt170 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/05/09 01:18 am Title: The Bath Of Your Life

well I keep getting sucked into ur story the more I read it and im Loving it! looking forward to the next chapter! like i wrote B4 I hope Bill kicks Sonjas ass! =)

Author's Response: XD yey! Bill vs. Sonja! who will win? D: get to know that next chappies! hohoho ;P

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/03/09 11:33 pm Title: Prologue

I think Tomi has earned his happy ending fair and square. Don't you?

Author's Response: after all his sturggle? yup, but first the storm must pass!

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/03/09 11:14 pm Title: Prologue

Thank you! That is all I ask. <3

Author's Response: ^^ i love happy endings!

Reviewer: icequeenqt170 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/03/09 11:11 pm Title: The Day Of Your Life

oh i could just kick sonjas ass....I hope bill does =)

Author's Response: XD love ur comments!

Reviewer: IndigoKitti Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/03/09 10:11 pm Title: The Day Of Your Life

;_______________________________________;
I am heartbroken...D;
I hate Sonja!!!!
Why does she only care about publicity???
I don't want Nathalie to leave Tom!!!
She can't! DDD;
It's like immoral!
It breaks sooo many laws of nature!!! DDDx
Great Update!!!!
Please please pleeeeeeeeeeeeeease more soon!!! D;
(and yeah I am new! I just started reading this story and I'm so glad I found it too)

Author's Response: ^^ well thnx for giving this storie an oportunitie! haha immoral XD don't worry! everything will b fixed since... hey I love happy endings! D:

Reviewer: Lindseyx45 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/03/09 10:02 pm Title: The Day Of Your Life

well this time i wasn't in school when i was reading this so i could express my emotions aloud and not get weird looks haha.

anyways, this chapter was so intense, it was very well written :) i seriously have no idea what to feel, i'm like mad and sad and anxious urgh. haha

anyways, i can't wait for an update, i am dying now ;) im excited now.

-Lindsey

Author's Response: aww lindsay u know I love n listen to everything u say right? it means a lot u say that! havent i been working hard in my writting? ^^

thanks god u could express ur self! hoho! im trying to end next chappie n well i just dont want to add another chappie soo soon u are all getting spolied bah meh!

Reviewer: sadangel10 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/03/09 05:45 pm Title: The Day Of Your Life

oh god you don't know how fucking mad and sad i am right now!!!!!i know its your story and you have the right to do as you pleased, but this????*screams angrily*

glen calm down....*takes a deep deep deep breath*

*cries* how could you????*sobs*

i'm sorry i'm being a bitch but come on what you did was mean=((((

but i also understand that there's always have to be a problem in a story OR what would the point of it be????????

but what i don't like is that bill is gonna go back to his old self now, since tomi is gonna be all depressed, i wanted tom to beg to bill!!!!*stomps feet*

but then again this is your story right????

anyway forgive me for being a bitch, I DO LOVE YOUR STORY, VERY VERY VERY VERY MUCH!!!!!!

and i love you too=D*huggles you*

Author's Response: ROFLMAO! *literally*


an hour later...


okay, i knew someone was going to scream at me (other cried n hard =_=') im a kind of mean person, right? ^^' but well I HAD to write it that way, that was my plan!!!!DX It was necesary for this to get better n well yeah i wanted Tom to beg Bill, so yeah, Billa will be back but much more insecure n prepared for anything Tomidoo tries to doo! D:

...n hey u r no bitch im the bitch here remeber?! ;P (my beta called me that way T^T)

i'll hope next chappie will make u happy or maybe the next of the next or the next of the next of the next... XD

thnx 4 loving this storie! really! *hugs back*


...btw, i loved this part --->"*cries* how could you????*sobs*" <--- joo just killed me dere! XD

Reviewer: cigimuz Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/03/09 09:11 am Title: The Day Of Your Life

I'm willing my self not to send a killer's note right now!!!!! But what you wrote; shit happens for a reason, made me a little more calm... Then I know that things will hopefully be okay!

I'm so crying right now! ou don't know how much I cry because of this chappie!

Oh and Tom bought her a mockingbird and a diamond ring, like the song says! YAY!

Author's Response: mmm... im seriously thinking to change this chappie cuz everyone is crying cuz of it... *sighs* but hey what grimada always tells you?! SHIT HAPPENS 4 A REASON! D: *my mockingbird version just so u know hohoho*

n yupiii tomi bough nathile luts of things ^^ n her ring n her birdie hoho *note: my daddy does that, we get to a mall n from each store we enter he buy us two things (with mommas help we sometimes get more XD)n we go all around the malls yey! ...so i based myself in that ^^'*

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/03/09 09:00 am Title: Prologue

Please let Bill be that bright light that Tom needs, because I am so worried for him right now! When they started to talk about his health, I knew then they had lost. :-(

Dame una razon para no llorar mas, porque me has rompido el corazon!



Author's Response: aww... pues t puedo decir lo siguiente, mi summary tiene la respuesta a todas tus preguntas ^^ no t preocupues q ahora Bill ya ira a ayudar a Tom! so smilee my dear friend! there will be a rainbow after the storm! :D

Reviewer: tokio_hotel_luver Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/03/09 08:15 am Title: The Day Of Your Life

bawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww i hate sonja grrrrrrrr

poor nathalie



Author's Response: hohoho should i add u to the list of Sonja's haters *starting Georg*

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