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Reviewer: han Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/01/09 11:21 am Title: Epilogue

so what i loved?
hmm lets see: the plot! bill's perseverance in the beginning! little Nathalie and her extended vocabulary! tom and Nathalie's father daughter's relationship! tomīs stubbornness! bill's strong will to help tom! THEIR RELATIONSHIP!(that it's still blossoming..and they are just so sweet!!i love them!) bill's idea to help tom...it was just awesome. and tom's new resolve! oh and of course i love georg that was tom's help before bill came..and funny uncle!

hm i was like well i don't hate anything but then i remembered SONJA!the witch i hate her!

there is just one request i wanted to make...if you just showed i little more of tom and bill's relationship..when are they taking it to the next level? (if you know what i mean eh eh)

so thank you!!!! (off to read first chapter of season 2)

Author's Response: oh god! u did loved lots han! XD n i luv u loved all that! trust me, i WILL show an advance in their cute relationship n well, yeah, sonja is hated... what can we do bout it? *sighs* lol n thank YOU for reading this n leaving those awesome reviews! really! THNX!! :D

Reviewer: han Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/01/09 10:59 am Title: The Airport Of Your Life

*grins between a few tears*
this goodbye was pretty emotional..i really don't have words left that make justice to this fiction...all i can say is thank you for this beautiful story...

i'm so glad that there is a season 2...cause i need this feeling that it's like: OMG when is the next chapter of mockingbird going to be updated...please let it be today please!!
so yeah mocking bird and got a call are currently 2 of my favs fics..keep up with the good work..now i'm off to read the epilogue and the first chapter of season 2 *squeals in true delight*

Author's Response: aww.. i know i was all excited writting it while listening to mockingbird and other songs...

im really happy to know u are lyk that always waiting for a mbchappie XD! also the one of got a call! OH GOD! that one takes me lots of time so sometimes i couldnt post or write this one D: but yeah i luv both stories lots too ^^ thnx for ur comments han! :D

Reviewer: emraud Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/01/09 10:24 am Title: Epilogue

SEASON 2!! SEASON 2!!! Yay yay yay!!XD Ahahahahaha..XD It was a very lovely ride with Mockingbird^^ Now we embark on a new journey!! Weeeeeeeeee!!!!

Author's Response: LOL im glad ur excited about season 2 XD lets goo to our new journeey!! :D

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/01/09 06:37 am Title: The Airport Of Your Life

Oh god, I'm crying like an idiot at that final scene. This was just so beautiful and I can't even find the right words I'm crying so bad, but I see there's already a sequel and I'll calm down. I don't regret faving this fic, because I've loved it from its start to its end, loved, laughed and cried over the chapters, got angry when I needed to and awwww and melted at the rest. I'm glad Tom got to say his proper goodbye for now but see you later to Nathie, whom he will never ever let go in his heart. She's so much a part of him, there isn't anywhere as far that she could go that he wouldn't follow or wait for her to come back.

Wonderful end to THIS story, my lovey. <3333333



Author's Response: awww rosie! thnx 4 the beautiful comment! esta historia me costo un poco de trabajo terminarla... temia mucho por el final, pero creo q todos lo aceptaron bien ^^ gracias x hacerlo uno d tus favoritos! no lo sabia! D: y si, la vdd cada capitulo mendigo nos hacia llorar reir gritar haha fue interesante escribir esto! gracias x tu apoyo n todo momento! y bueno, la segunda temporada ya salioo! :D

Reviewer: winkybelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/01/09 04:02 am Title: Epilogue

This was a fun story, and I highly enjoyed it. It was really sweet: Tom was adorable, and Natalie was an cute character. I'm glad to read you're doing a sequel.

The only pointers I can make about the piece is that you need to beta your work, because there are grammar mistakes. Also, sometimes the story felt like it went a bit long-winded without adding much to the story. I wasn't a huge fan of the side characters Andreas and Gabriella. But maybe that's just me.

Over all though, it was a GREAT read, and I cant wait for the next installment.

And I love the way you added the song lyrics into the beginning!!

Author's Response: thnx for u comment, n well, i do have a beta, but she got lots of work n smtimes she cant beta it 4 me, still i try my best to get the grammar right since this isnt my mother language, so yeah, i'll work on that for season 2. its okay if u arent great fan of them, i understand since not everyone lykes the same thing n im glad u told me.

thnx for ur review n hope to see you in the next season!

Reviewer: Schwarzendawn Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/01/09 03:47 am Title: Epilogue

God, this ended....*sobs* I am really about to cry. LOVED it, with caps on because it deserves it.

Author's Response: wow! thnx! dont cry n better look for season 2!! LOL

Reviewer: aia157_TH Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/01/09 03:27 am Title: Epilogue

I cried the last 2 chapters, especially last chapter when tom was saying the lyrics of mockingbird.
:)

Author's Response: aww, u dont know how i was breaking my head addin those lyrics! haha!

Reviewer: Princess2000204 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/24/09 08:14 pm Title: The Date Of Your Life

Sonja is still an uber-btich who needs to do a long walk on a short pier!

It's almost over! I love this story!!!!



Author's Response: lol poor sonjaa! but yeah, this is almos over :S

Reviewer: IndigoKitti Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/09 02:58 pm Title: The Date Of Your Life

*speechless* O:
(In a very good way)

Author's Response: :D thnx! ^^

Reviewer: faerylxjae89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/21/09 01:25 am Title: Prologue

I wont... Totally

Author's Response: LOL

Reviewer: tokio_hotel_luver Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/09 08:02 pm Title: The Date Of Your Life

DONT SIGN IT TOM DONT SIGN IT!

Author's Response: hum... teehee... tomi says sorrie

Reviewer: faerylxjae89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/09 01:24 pm Title: The Date Of Your Life

Awe. This hurts. Poor nathalie getting uprooted so much.. and YAY the sentance is going down this was cute chapter as well. Please update sooner please

Author's Response: aww don't worrie! yeah thnx to bill it went down! :D

Reviewer: killingallthatisreal Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/09 03:43 am Title: The Date Of Your Life

noooo! there has to be some way! stupid sonja...... NEW CHAPPIE NOOOOW!!!!!

Author's Response: hahaha! there will... idk XD but things will go well dont worrie!

Reviewer: killingallthatisreal Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/09 03:20 am Title: The Best Man Of Your Life

aww!!!! i was gonna suggest naming the baby Billybob or Chuck Norris or.....never mind! lol ^_^

Author's Response: CHUCK NORRIS!!! OMGOMG!!! hahahaaha! OH GOD! that made me laugh! XD LOL

Reviewer: killingallthatisreal Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/09 03:10 am Title: The Meeting Of Your Life

umm...i thought her name was Gabrielle not Danielle. And as for calebs brother- is it Elia or Ella?

Author's Response: ni thought too it was gabrielle, let me go check that since i'm writting 2 stories with a gabrielle n another with a danielle in it so yeah i get confused... and Caleb's nickname is: Nathi and his brother, Elijah's nickname is: Ella. better? :D

Reviewer: killingallthatisreal Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/09 02:47 am Title: The Father Of Your Life

yay?

Author's Response: LOL!

Reviewer: killingallthatisreal Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/09 02:37 am Title: The Breakfast Of Your Life

umm...more grammar errors. missing words, words in the wrong order “When you haven’t?”, and just some regular grammar errors "Where did Andreas took you to your first date?" should be take.

but other then that, love it! so are they getting Nathalie back?

Author's Response: i knooow, but i got a beta but she is way too into this she sometimes forget, but im thinkin bout re editing it so there wont b mistakes so yeah :P

Reviewer: killingallthatisreal Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/09 02:22 am Title: The Priorities Of Your Life

omg saturday? thats wen he supposed to be with billa!!!!

Author's Response: Yup indeed hoho

Reviewer: killingallthatisreal Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/09 02:11 am Title: The Stud Of Your Life

wooooo!!!! great! love it! still some typos though... d:)

Author's Response: i knooow *cries n hides*

Reviewer: killingallthatisreal Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/09 02:00 am Title: The News Of Your Life

o_o but andi will be alright wont he?

Author's Response: se-cret D:

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