Date: 08/14/09 10:08 am Title: A Chapter to Remember
It felt forced. It was kind of dry where it could have been haunting or scary or unsetteling it was just kind of route and words that didn't have power behind them.
Author's Response: Wow. Thanks.
Date: 01/22/09 01:22 pm Title: A Chapter to Remember
That was... philosophical. ^^
It wasn't a stinking pile of shit or whatever you decided to call it. XD
I really like it, it's amazing!
You totally rock. :D
Author's Response: hehehe, yeah, i just stuck that in there for the people that hated it, if they did, i don't think it is lol :P thank you!
Date: 01/20/09 03:05 pm Title: A Chapter to Remember
Wow, you wrote this well. Of course, I would have expected nothing less. This was certainly dark but I definitely liked it. It was intriguing in a twisted kind of way. Very very good.
Oh...and 'Aftermath' is coming along quite well, your imput has been really helpful in writing it. If the advice itself wasn't enough, from this I can definitely see that you were the right person to ask. This was awesome, odd but awesome. ~ Mysti x
Author's Response: thank you! i'm glad you enjoyed it. i'll be looking forward to your sequel :)
Date: 01/19/09 10:02 pm Title: A Chapter to Remember
You are really great with your images, you always have been. I remember that story you wrote ages and ages ago about the twins thinking they were aliens, and that was chock full of vivid images that still stay with me today.
I'm sorry if I don't review much of your stories, I think you have amazing potential as a writer. Personally, I have a difficult time reading the more heavy fics, and you can right some very dark things. This doesn't mean I don't enjoy your works, it's just more difficult to brace myself and read them, like I said your images are brutal, real, and sometimes upsetting.
You do it well, so keep it up and I'll try not to be such a stranger around your work.
I think it'd be really refreshing, too, to see you step out of the darker writing and explore the sort of stuff you did with the alien fic. It touched me more and was just as striking as this story.
Author's Response: yeah, the going home fic with baby alien twins. i haven't bothered to post it again for some reason.rnrni'm such a whiny bitch, i know, but it makes me giddy to know you like my shit, so thank you for reading this and reviewing it, made my night. :) rnrni have trouble writing anything BUT dark, heh. i never bother to try. can't really write porn, either, lol. it seems that i'm chock full of all things most people don't want to read.rnrnanyway, thanks ria <3
Date: 01/19/09 01:58 pm Title: A Chapter to Remember
This was kinda confusing. Can you briefly explain this too me? Tom was raping Bill, he got more and more out of control... but what happened after? Did he get better? Get worse? What happened to Bill?
Author's Response: Well, I don't really like to explain my stories, I want people to figure it out on their own, but I'll tell you as much as I can. What happened after, is not said; therefore, we do not know ;) we will assume he's out of the picture. Bill was raped and the rape traumatized him to his very core. He still sees the monster that Tom became. Hope that helped.
Date: 01/19/09 12:02 pm Title: A Chapter to Remember
Oh, I love it when you update. They're always amazing, so unique in their own way.
Author's Response: Thank you Made-Chan :) Glad you liked it!
Date: 01/19/09 08:56 am Title: A Chapter to Remember
Aww shit Jess, this is so twisted. So... you. ;) I really like it, even if it's not how I view Bill. I always knew that monster in the dark was real... ^_^
Author's Response: Thank you!!! I love your reviews; I always think, would Muse(or now Melancholia!) like this? Lol, I'm a little crazy, but anyone, I'm so glad you liked it!
Date: 01/19/09 04:10 am Title: A Chapter to Remember
Wow!! That was insanely kick-ass!! :D Great job!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I've never had anyone call my stuff kick-ass, that's so awesome! :D
Date: 01/19/09 12:20 am Title: A Chapter to Remember
I like it, it was interesting. I'm assuming 'The Monster' is some sort of drug? Of course, I could be totally wrong.
I usually am.
Anyways, this was certainly awesome and it was nice to see something from you! :)
Author's Response: The monster is actually a manifestation of everything dark that was inside of Tom. Tom became the Monster when he started raping and abusing Bill, and from then on, Tom faded away and let the Monster take over.
Date: 01/19/09 12:05 am Title: A Chapter to Remember
who/what/why and how
Author's Response: ohhhh tascha ;)
Date: 01/19/09 12:01 am Title: A Chapter to Remember
i wonder..
Author's Response: what do you wonder?