Date: 03/12/09 08:51 pm Title: He Had the Guts..
i like where this is going, and the other chapters are good too. stories where bill is a major asshole are always really interesting to me.
Author's Response: Yeah, asshole Bill is always interesting. People always portray him as this innocent kid with the sweetest personality. Haha. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 03/12/09 04:05 pm Title: Introduction
I am I think I've got a kind of sick mind... dunno (it's not my fault my parents they make me fall on my head few times when I was a baby) (PS:Don't tell this anybody)
Date: 03/12/09 03:58 pm Title: Introduction
I can understand English Turkish and a little bit french and german :D soo If you know any one of them u can use it :P :D umm dunno if you need any crimes just gimme a call :D I'll be waitin :D Bill can umm... buy their shop :D
Author's Response: I can only understand English, Vietnamese, some Spanish, and very limited Mandarin. Haha. That's a pretty interesting suggestion. I'm not so good with coming up with acts of violence xD
Date: 03/12/09 03:50 pm Title: Introduction
oui (french answer to your which language? dunno :D ) and dunno this is better I think much slower :) so shop is their own shop right? and this is silly of Bill he should do something serious I think maybe he can vandalize the store *evil thoughts*
Author's Response: Nice suggestion; I was doing some research for this little thing that'll be included in the story and vandalizing property is one of the major things that they do. But Bill won't do that; it's another idea I'll use for later. And I used Spanish. I'm only in Spanish 2 but I can understand a little bit.
Date: 03/12/09 03:30 pm Title: He Had the Guts..
Dunno it IS diffrent I was reading the last one this looks dunno much better but wtf Bill is suppose to love her so what'S this huh? :D and Î'm suprisewd cos at the last one she was working in a bakery you know :D now she is a bit rich I think she isn't working in anywhere
Author's Response: Okay, let me explain things more clearly to you. I'm not going to rush anything; it's going to take time and there'll be a bunch of shit along the way. As of right now, Bill's pretty fucked up and has no heart and even has the audacity to hire men to threaten her parents' store. She's not rich; she's middle class, but the money that goes into her tuition is a lot. She helps around the store when her parents need her to because obviously, they can't really afford to hire somebody else and they can do most of the work themselves, but she's still needed just in case. Si comprende?
Date: 03/12/09 12:30 pm Title: He Had the Guts..
she wanted to slap and then punch him too? some balls this girl have xD
i was a little sad and angry that in this new version it was bill who got to turn and walk away >xO
i'm happy you're taking this story more "seriously" :D and i see you changed some things... can't wait to see what more you got to show us :)
Author's Response: Haha, I reread everything and inwardly cringed. Realized you were totally right and decided to try and change things up a bit. It's a good thing that people seem to like it. I agree with you; stinks how she couldn't walk away, but she'll get her turn soon enough... I think. I usually write as a joke or when I'm bored. I've never really put forth a lot of effort, but I like the idea of this story and I've got a sensible conflict set up in my mind with possible subplots involving other characters along the way. Thanks for reviewing! Your reviews are pretty dern right helpful. :)
Date: 03/12/09 01:54 am Title: He Had the Guts..
Wow. Yeah, I definitely have to say that I like the direction that this story is taking now as opposed to the last time. The last time was good too, but this way, the story is every bit as intense as it was in the first two chapters. The intensity is what draws you in, and the plot keeps you there. Keep it up, girlie :D
Author's Response:
I really liked your review :D
And how you pointed out intensity and the plot and such. Thanks for reviewing, and I'm so so so happy that you like this. And have I thanked you for the simple yet alluring banner yet? Haha, I'll just thank you again. THANK YOU!!!! xD
Date: 03/12/09 01:18 am Title: He Had the Guts..
oi that's really low...
Author's Response: Ha, if you think that's low, just wait as the story continues. And thank you for reviewing. :)
Date: 03/12/09 01:03 am Title: He Had the Guts..
Yes.
I do like the new direction.
Now please update!
Author's Response:
Muchas gracias for reviewing!
Date: 03/11/09 11:36 pm Title: He Had the Guts..
ohhh what a bitch bill is! lol looking forward to more =]
Author's Response: Holy shit! *looks at author's name* It's YOU! Like, it's KELS, the one who wrote Remember When that I totally obsessed over!! The only het story that I seriously loved! My god, you're such an amazing author and I could possibly be overreacting, but I've admired you for your writing style, imagery, and the way you use adjectives and metaphors as a literate art form. Wow, I must sound so insane, but the fact that you even bothered to look at this story means a lot to me. And I get what you mean about running out of good stories; I've stopped reading het in general and started to exclusively read twincest and slash just 'cause all the good stories are slash. Whoops, this reply's getting a bit long. Thank you so much for reviewing!
Date: 03/11/09 11:34 pm Title: He Had the Guts..
You deleted so many chapters!
Oh well, it's still good. Like the new chapter.
Date: 03/11/09 11:28 pm Title: Slap
oh yay she smacked him! and please update this soon, i'm running out of interesting stories to read xD
Date: 03/11/09 08:17 pm Title: He Had the Guts..
i very much love the new direction of the story. the other way waas ahh' ok but this way is real good. i really like "I saw Tom give me a sympathetic look" because it shows he knew what his brother was going to make happen was wrong. i love the new take on the story, so come on update faster PLEASE like you have no idea how much i want to see how this direction is going to turn out! awesome update tomorrow.
Author's Response: Whoo, it's awesome that you think this direction's better. It seems to be getting quite some positive feedback. Looks like you guessed which brother's got the better heart and reasoning. Wish I could update soon, but school calls and I've gotta attend Seussical the Musical or else my friends will kill me. xP
Date: 03/11/09 08:11 pm Title: He Had the Guts..
OMG! I LOVED HANA YORI DANGO! AND I LOVE THIS FIC SOOOO MUCH! I also like how its still kinda diff frm HYD. Keep up the good work. I also like how you note tat things do happen to ppl when evry1 ignores things. Can't wait for the new chappie!!! Plz update sooon!!!
Author's Response:
I've watched the first five or so episodes of all three versions; I've never finished any version, so I don't know how it ends. Glad that you like this! And yeah, I was hoping that it wasn't so much like HYD.
Date: 02/14/09 09:51 pm Title: Introduction
thanks for explaning; some (subtended) things you've just said aren't very explicit in the story, therefor my confusion.
maybe it was better if you spent a little more time on the chapters, even if people are pressuring you; i really think your fic has great potencial :)
Date: 02/13/09 10:26 pm Title: Slap
You should have made her PUNCH him...hard
Author's Response: Haha, thanks for the suggestion. I'll take that into consideration for future chapters. A punch is just waiting for him... haha.
Date: 02/04/09 09:17 pm Title: Introduction
ha ha ha. I was reaing and my firsth thought was "hana dori yago??" then I read your end notes. glad you mentioned it. I LOVE BOYS OVER FLOWERS!!! god luck with the story (try not to follow along so closely to the strory...we already know what happened in HDY, surprise us!)
Author's Response: BOF was my inspiration, but trust me when I tell you that the overall storyline will be different. The original had a happy ending. This story is going to be extremely different. I've already come up with the main conflict, and you'll be pretty surprised at what it is. I never finished Hana Yori Dango since it's virtually impossible for me to finish dramas, so I really don't know how it ended. But I've heard some things. That's it, though.
Date: 02/03/09 12:06 am Title: Introduction
I'm loving this.
Date: 01/31/09 12:26 pm Title: Slap
yep, i read the manga and the drama, but i didn't finish both of them since im to lazy ;D
Date: 01/30/09 09:24 pm Title: Slap
Awesome! i love how you changed the story line and everything b29;
Author's Response: Oh, you've seen Hana Yori Dango/Meteor Garden/Boys Over Flowers?