Date: 03/22/09 02:17 pm Title: The Secret Rules
What a twist!!!! I like it.
Author's Response: Hooray for twists! I'm glad you like it and thanks for reviewing :D
Date: 03/22/09 09:58 am Title: The Secret Rules
:O WOW.
OH MY GOD! i read from start to finish and i ... wow.
i have no idea what to say!
no, yes i do.
1) i really like this story line. it sounds really original to me (never heard of Hana Yori Dango, but i wiki'ed it and it sounds good!)
2) i love the charaterisations! LOL. it's just... it feels like i'm there. when i read the part about Bill walking down the halls, i literally felt the cool white wall against my back and Bill's face all up in mine. (heaven.. xD)
LOL
3) wow. this chapter stunned me half to death! i mean... she's one of THEM!? WHAT EVER SHALL HAPPEN NEXT?!
i want more! more drama, more complications, more romance, but i don't because i know if you give me anymore, i'll die! i will hyperventilate, have heartattacks and stokes and DIE!
BOOM!
you're amazing!
jess xx.
Author's Response: Wow, this is like, the longest review I've ever gotten! Well, on this site. But still! Thanks for reviewing. And thanks for complimenting my characterizations! That's why I deleted the previous chapters; to work on that. And I'm glad that it worked!
Date: 03/22/09 08:27 am Title: The Secret Rules
ooOh I love it soooo much now you're one of us that was great :D :D much more better then the other ojne now I'm glad that you changed it :D perfect excellent :D write soon :D
Date: 03/21/09 11:43 pm Title: The Secret Rules
Welcome to the Dark Side Beth...
Date: 03/21/09 11:23 pm Title: The Secret Rules
omB,T,G&G this chapter is really good. i love the way you are take this story. update soon. u only update on weekends dont you?
Author's Response: Eh, I guess so. It's like I read on weekdays and write one weekends. Haha.
Date: 03/21/09 08:45 pm Title: The Secret Rules
That was a really nice twist to the story!
Date: 03/21/09 08:45 pm Title: The Secret Rules
That was a really nice twist to the story!
Date: 03/21/09 06:10 pm Title: Introduction
i got that and brothers do suck.
Date: 03/21/09 06:02 pm Title: The Secret Rules
i liked it, but it could've been better. i wonder how she'll take that news.keep it up i know your writing skills.
Author's Response: You're right. Maybe I'll edit it sometimes; my little brat of a brother was forcing me to rush since he wanted to watch stupid Resident Evil vids on YouTube. Really, brothers suck, don't they? AND SO DO DBQ'S. I have one due for honors history. Geez, I haven't talked to you in FOREVER. I'm gonna go email you now with an update on my absolutely horrid week. ^_^ (<< That smiley is totally sarcastic, btw.)
Date: 03/21/09 05:40 pm Title: The Secret Rules
it is really good , hope you can continue it, so I can knoe what happened with her entering their society....hope you can add more chapters soon, take care.
Date: 03/21/09 05:37 pm Title: The Secret Rules
Omg that was totally unexpected for me.
I loved the chapter though.
I can't wait for more!
I wonder if Elizabeth will actually want to become one of them.
I hope she does and doesn't at the same time.
You're an amazing writer.
Author's Response:
Hmm, an internal conflict. Interesting; something like that will definitely happen. Thanks for reviewing! And nah, I'm not really an amazing writer. I'm just a freshman in high school with a fast-paced brain that gets inspired easily. xD
Date: 03/21/09 04:13 pm Title: The Secret Rules
Wow, that was quick. Hehehehehehehehe. This is a little twist that I can't wait to read more of. Continue on plz!
Date: 03/21/09 03:49 pm Title: The Secret Rules
Woah
Definitely a change from the first version!
I really like it though
This new direction provides many more possibilities for what could happen later
You're decisions for this story have been spot on in my opinion. I really like the way this is going
Great job!
DCB
Author's Response: Yupperz, change is good. Glad you like it and thanks for reviewing!
Date: 03/21/09 03:47 pm Title: The Secret Rules
I'm actually kinda confused...Bill went from being a complete jerk..to a not so much of a jerk kinda fast. Are you gonna explain the top secret stuff in the next chapter? Don't get me wrong... I like this story it's good..just confusing :)
Author's Response: I don't blame you for being confused at all. If I was a reader, I'd also be confused. Bill's just a spaz, I guess.
Date: 03/21/09 10:59 am Title: He Had the Guts..
oh very nice better =]
Date: 03/16/09 07:32 pm Title: Introduction
Lol! Hey, anytime, it was really no problem at all! :) *hugs*
Author's Response: Eep, I love hugs! I'm one of the biggest hug sluts in my school. And congrats; you're my 100th reviewer. :)
Date: 03/15/09 07:19 pm Title: He Had the Guts..
oh SNAP.
this is good.
i want more.
now !
please ?
[:
Date: 03/12/09 09:14 pm Title: Introduction
yes i have, but i read them and they're so good, i see why they're your favorites
Date: 03/12/09 09:10 pm Title: Introduction
no problem, my new fiction obsession is slash and twincest, it makes for good stories
Author's Response: SOOO true. Have you noticed that all my favorite stories are slash?