Date: 01/23/09 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 2
keep it comin!
Author's Response: I will! <3
Date: 01/23/09 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 2
urg, good, I need more!
Author's Response: More soon. <3
Date: 01/23/09 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 2
I had a suspicion that Bill was an escort. HA I was right!
Author's Response: Yes, he would probably not have been in that company otherwise. ;) <3
Date: 01/23/09 03:52 pm Title: Chapter 2
What a great plot!! This is a really interesting and unexpected way to meet someone! I like when Tom noticed Bill`s beauty. Indeed, he is the most beautiful boy I`ve ever seen:-) I`m really happy that Tom have managed to save Bill in time! Poor Tom is a bit confused, but it is so adorable!! In a word thank you for sharing this witty and interesting fic!! Ps: I`ve read in your Bio, that you are with child!! I wish you and your baby health, happyness and lots of beautiful moments together in your life!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for those sweet words. I'm so glad you enjoy the story. I agree to what you said about Bill. Can't be legal to look that good. :) love
Date: 01/23/09 03:23 pm Title: Chapter 2
OMG, Bill was higher than plane...but dammit, he was sexy lo!. I bet it took all of Tom's willpower to not give in. And I'm wondering will Bill get fired...
Author's Response: Yes, he was pretty high, alright. lol. Otherwise he would have been behaving better ;) <3
Date: 01/23/09 11:21 am Title: Chapter 2
~He came up empty and looked over at his own black Mustang, knowing he was about to do something really foolish.~
That line was really great. I think it sort of gave the story and Tom’s character a very real life thing. It wasn’t like he just took Bill home because he knew that it was fate or something, he actually had to think about it first.
Lol, that drug has gotten Bill pretty slutty ,) poor Tom. But I’m very happy Tom is the responsible good guy that doesn’t take advantage of Bill, that’s probably gonna pay off in the future. So sweet that Tom gets all hot and bothered though ,p
I’m loving this so much ^^ how Bill’s an escort (so those were the rules they were talking about), but one of the better ones. And how the two boys are being so adorably shy around each other. I’m really curious as to how their relationship will develop after this.
And oh my god, you’re pregnant? Congratulations, girl *hugs* that is so great. And yes, absolutely acceptable excuse, lol ,) I’m so happy for you!
Much, much love
Yours, luce
Author's Response: Dear Lucy, your reviews always make me smile. Thank you so much for that :) I think it's fun to write the boys a little more shy and innocent than usual. And the lack of angst is so liberating! *hugs you back* love Susanne
Date: 01/23/09 11:14 am Title: Chapter 2
Omg...Congratulations. I just read your bio, I'm so happy for you.
You totally have me hooked on this fic now, it is so right. Even straight men can't resist Bill. All in all, I loved this chapter. It was great. I shall be definitely looking forward to the next. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much. You're so sweet. Like I said before, it's so fun to watch the guys at my work gawking over Bill when they think no one's watching. Can't say I blame them. ;)
Date: 01/23/09 10:44 am Title: Chapter 2
Oh goodness! Great chapter, girl! It's pretty sad how high Bill was, but when he's trying to get with Tom was super hot. Now he's sober, though, I'm very interested to learn more about him.
I checked out your bio, and CONGRATULATIONS! I'm so happy for you! Having been though a few pregnancies, I completely understand why it would be harder to write. Take care of yourself and just update when you can. *super!hugs*
Author's Response: Thank you, sweet, sweet girl! Next chapter is already written and big parts of the rest of the story as well, so I hope I will update in time. I sleep like three hours a night and have a soon to be two year old to look after so I'm more asleep than awake most of the time :)*hugs back*
Date: 01/23/09 10:28 am Title: Chapter 2
I liked this chapter alot and i would love to see tom try to explain everything to bills boss lady. Keep it up it is very good.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I will!. love
Date: 01/23/09 10:26 am Title: Chapter 1
Great story so far very interesting, can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. <3
Date: 01/23/09 10:04 am Title: Chapter 2
interesing....
Author's Response: Thanks! <3
Date: 01/23/09 09:50 am Title: Chapter 2
Oh, Bill :(
I like this! =] Tom seems really nice...and such a gent, haha.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like it. <3
Date: 01/23/09 07:23 am Title: Chapter 2
Really enjoyed this fic so far. Will definately be reading on!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. So happy to hear that. <3
Date: 01/23/09 07:00 am Title: Chapter 2
Nice, nice, nice! I'm liking this :)
Author's Response: Thank you! <3
Date: 01/23/09 06:18 am Title: Chapter 2
i like this chapterr
hope you can update soon :]
i remember my sisters first few months of pregnancy..it was :l
but after all the throwing upp she seemed alright. lmao.
idk if that helped. at all. haha.
oh and i love your banner
they both look... -shivers- :]]
Author's Response: Thank you for cheering me up. Hopefully it'll be better soon. I love the banner too, but I can't take credit for it, since it's made by my best friend as always. love.
Date: 01/23/09 06:02 am Title: Chapter 2
Billa can turn anyone on. This proves the point. :) This fic has most definitely got me on a leash. I fucking love this!!
Author's Response: Thank you. You're always so positive, sweetie. love
Date: 01/23/09 05:57 am Title: Chapter 2
i'm loving the plot in this
Author's Response: Thank you. I don't know what it is with straight guys and Bill, but they sure seem to doubt themselves when it comes to him ,) love
Date: 01/20/09 05:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
Damn this is sooo good!
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm so glad you did. <3
Date: 01/20/09 04:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
It was way scary that we dedicated to each other at the same time ^^ but amazingly fun! Thank you so much for this, it made me feel so warm on the inside and I smiled so bad ,)
So, I thought I’d really outdo myself on the reviewing front as that was exactly why I dedicated a story to you; because you’re great and because I don’t tell you that enough. So here goes.
I’m in love with your detail work!
- Tom not knowing how to knot his tie ^^
- the flirting Monica
- how Tom acts so impulsive about Bill
Very curious as to how Bill ended up in such lousy company…the way you described those guys; cigar smoking, loud, grinning…ugh, nasty people. And Charles was a very good name for him, sounds so…old (no offence to anyone), just not a name that’s used for younger people a lot these days.
Oh dear, Andreas is so…oblivious? In denial? ,p I guess he just really, really don’t want to be bothered by it all because that means that there’s something wrong with his perfect opening night ,) I like how you always make your characters more human by giving them both good and bad traits.
OO fuck…and those idiot perverts just left Bill to die in the fire. Well, if there had actually been a fire of course, but still… So good that Tom is the night in shining armor that carries him to safety then ^^
Favorite line of the chap: “Where do I take you?” Tom wondered aloud to himself. (this one was just so cute and innocent and really proved that Tom is sort of lost for Bill, even if it’s only friendly for now, but he just had to save him, he could think of what to do afterwards ,p)
I’m intrigued by this story and I hope you’ll continue it soon because it was a very good start and I’m sure the rest will be just as good! Well, duh…it’s you ,p
Much love, yours luce
Also, loved your banner
And the fact that you wrote “this is simply a love story” ^^ doesn’t get much better than that!
Author's Response: Wow Lucy! What a review! ^^ I'm actually a little jealous of the way you leave such detailed reviews for everyone. I don't even know how to do that... I really suck at giving them but I always try. I thought the same as you about the name Charles. I know some people think the same about the name Bill but to all TH fans it means something completely different ;)Leaving Bill in the supposed fire wasn't my intention but my friend pointed out the same thing. I didn't mean for the men to be THAT bad. I meant for them to think he was able to walk out on his own. Which he couldn't because it would have ruined Tom's rescue plan :)I'm so glad you liked it. love Susanne
Date: 01/20/09 04:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
I can't wait for more, you write so well, you always have me captivated. The last thing this story does is suck. It's awesome. More soon, honey? :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much. You even made me blush a little. More very soon, sweetie. Love.