Date: 03/15/09 08:35 am Title: Chapter 9
Mmmmmm. Yummy yummy yummmy.
(we all know tom's got sexy abs. Though I'm still in shock considering I was not expecting that under the tent of clothing he where's. :P *drool*)
Brilliant chapter. *dirty thoughts* Fucking hawt!! *salivates*
Woo. It's getting hawt in here. I need some water.
Date: 03/15/09 07:28 am Title: Chapter 9
Can't wait to see what you have instore for how Bill will handle the new turn in their relationship!!!
I do have to say, in gay sex, there is some stretching involved before intercourse or else it will hurt like a Mother Fucker and! he would be limping something aweful! That is a muscle getting penetrated!
Author's Response: I skipped the stretching part because personally I'm a little tired of reading/writing the same thing over and over and though I don't have any gay friends (unfortunately - they would come in handy :))I know some girls who like sex that way and they say it's not always necessary so I took their word for it.
Date: 03/15/09 07:26 am Title: Chapter 9
Finally! Update soon and I hope Bikl doesn't regret anything! Excellent job!
Date: 03/15/09 06:00 am Title: Chapter 9
I woke up, had breakfast, logged on and found this updated…a perfect start on the day ^^
~ “That hardly counted as a kiss,” Tom spoke deeply, before pulling Bill in for another one. ~ hum hum hum ,p he is so damn hot. And it seems Tomi’s gotten some liquid courage ^^
OO this foreplay is sizzling ! Love the detail you’ve put into it
Ooh, I like Tom going all growling animal on Bill ,p it’s so amazing how you’ve built up Tom to this point where he loses control and goes with the feel of things
Lol, “you’re like a dream” smooth Tom xD he’s so cute
What was that thing in the end about, Bill not flirting with Tom anymore. I do hope that’s only Bill trying to be nice and not let everyone know that Tom has gone gay for him before Tom can tell them himself.
Oh, and desktop sex…I think I pretty much died! ,p
Author's Response: I'm guessing from your reviews that Tom is your favourite, am I right? Wet shirt, dark eyes or deep voice, it all seems to work for you. lol. Yes something is going on inside Bill's pretty head but more about that next week. Hope you have a really good Sunday. I will try to get some more writing done but it doesn't look promising. Love Susanne
Date: 03/15/09 05:38 am Title: Chapter 9
OMAGAAAAAAAAAADD!!!XDXD
That was HOT HOT HOT!!! Deyyummm...XDXD
And you leave me begging for MOOOOORREE!! OMG I'm such a horny bitch.. LOL!!XD I was like, "do it again!! Is there a couch or something?! Or maybe the bathroom would do??" LMAO!!!XDXD Daaaammmmnn... Forgive me.. *goes to the kitchen to find chocolates*
Anyway, it was worth the wait! I love it!!XD
Author's Response: lol. I hope you found your cookies. So happy the scene worked for you and yes there will definitely be more. <3
Date: 03/15/09 05:19 am Title: Chapter 9
finally! steamy smut XD love it!
Date: 03/14/09 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 8
My eyes are burning and tearing from staring at the screen, but I still read this chapter! XD 'Cause this story is that awesome. I feel like I just ate frosting and half&half. Which is wonderful. XD Now I'm waitin' for tomorrow~ Lalalala~
Pleasuring Bill was something that had been on Tom’s mind more than once this past week.
I love that line. I love the word 'pleasuring,' it's oooh sexy hotness, mmhm. XD
Author's Response: Thank you. Your reviews always make me smile and I agree. The word pleasuring does stuff to me too :) <3
Date: 03/14/09 05:51 pm Title: Chapter 8
Because it's not! Yes!
Date: 03/14/09 07:54 am Title: Chapter 8
I really like how time passes in this one, you make it feel so natural.
Awww, Tom is so adorable waiting for Bill to come ^^ and being so in denial about it all, I bet it’s something he can’t control ,p
~ Bill was hardly interested in someone who didn’t know which leg to stand on. ~ never heard that use of words to describe sexuality before ,) you always seem to slip in those kind of original sentences all over the place, makes the story so much yours.
Lol, the reason Tom has never learned the bargirl’s name is because whenever he’s at the bar, Bill’s there, too ,p Tom has eyes for no one else ^^
~ Tom smiled back, feeling a wild flutter in his stomach. ~ xD og goddess, I’m squealing right next to him ,p so amazingly adorable !!! You write this Tom so damn well !!!
Hum hum hum, the temperature here just went through the roof with Bill and his innocent smoldering looks at Tom…I can’t keep still
OO what a place to end a chapter…and Tom’s hand on the small of Bill’s back, HOT. Uuuuuuuuuuuuh, I’m making all kinds of whining noises right now, I feel like such a girl ,p Sunday cannot seem to come fast enough, I just hope these damn butterflies will realize that they can’t flutter around like crazy for that long oO you make them do the craziest things, just so you know!
I really hope you’re doing good, darling, and that you’re taking care of yourself and being taken cared of ,) much much love, yours luce
Author's Response: So happy you still enjoy the story. I'm writing every free minute I have which aren't that many. I just want to finish this so I can start a new one :) Already have a few ones in mind. Thank you so much for brighten my day, honey. Hope you're doing well too. I send you lots of hugs by air. Love Susanne
Date: 03/13/09 07:04 pm Title: Chapter 8
Oh my...Somethings going to happen I can feel it.
Date: 03/13/09 07:00 pm Title: Chapter 8
Ooooh! This is gettin' intense. Can't wait for sunday!
Date: 03/13/09 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, you horrid tease, you! *whimpers*
Date: 03/13/09 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 8
Thanks for updating :) I'm sick too, it sucks xD
Date: 03/13/09 12:03 pm Title: Chapter 8
Awww :( Cliffhangers are sooo mean!!
*wants Sunday to come nao*
Date: 03/13/09 11:43 am Title: Chapter 8
oooooooow I want Sunday and I want it now! ;__;
Date: 03/13/09 10:35 am Title: Chapter 8
you are mean...
hahah kidding.. damn that was HOT..
them flirting
Date: 03/13/09 09:51 am Title: Chapter 8
aw i love it... upadte on sunday please!
Date: 03/13/09 08:42 am Title: Chapter 8
Oh! I do agree! That was a mean way to end the chapter!!!!
...But, it made for a great cliff hanger XD
I hope that you update soon, though, because... geez! *whines* Aw, man!!! Why'd you have to end it that way??? *crosses arms and pouts like Bill* XD
Date: 03/13/09 08:25 am Title: Chapter 8
Can't it be Sunday now? D:
Date: 03/13/09 08:23 am Title: Chapter 8
Cliffhangers are mean...but sometimes they really make things exciting! I really can't wait to see what happens when they're outside! ;)