Date: 03/28/09 02:40 am Title: Chapter 11
wow only one left!? keep it comin!
Date: 03/27/09 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 11
That was so cute..
Author's Response: Thank you! <3
Date: 03/27/09 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 11
Yesssssssssss... Smutty, fluffy, smuffy, pleasuring, lovemaking goodness. Oh yes. That improved my day immensely. I got to the end of the date, and I was like, "Aw, fluff..." And then Bill was like, "Are you coming in?" and I was like, "Wait, there's MORE?" *checks her scrollbar* "I'M ONLY HALFWAY THROUGH??? YESSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!" No joke, that seriously was the thought that went through my head.
And I love Bill being like, “Isn’t that more of a third date thing?” because that statement is so incredibly ironic. XD
Author's Response: It's your birthday? I wish I've known that. Happy Birthday to you, girl. Hope it ends better than it started :) I'm glad the story was fluffy enough for you because I don't think I'm very good at that sort of thing. <3
Date: 03/27/09 09:05 pm Title: Chapter 10
This made me smile a lot, which is good because today has been kinda shitty. Which wouldn't normally be so bad, but it's also my birthday, so it's SUPPOSED to be a good day. But yay, I have another chapter of this, so I'm gonna read that too and hope things work out with Bill and Tom!
Date: 03/27/09 07:38 pm Title: Chapter 11
Ahhh. Amazing. (:
Author's Response: Thank you! <3
Date: 03/27/09 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 11
“The things I feel when I’m with you…,”
I adored this chapter. I loved how tender they are with each other, how tentative and still passionate. I love the little bits of romance. And the part where Bill says what I quoted above, I could literally see and hear that in my head.
This is a wonderfully written chapter. Thank you so much for this. :)
Author's Response: Thank you for reading it. I tried to make it romantic but for some reason Bill kept jumping Tom and that's not how I wanted it :) I wrote it over and over until he could control himself better. lol. I have no clue why they do that. *hugs*
Date: 03/27/09 06:13 pm Title: Chapter 11
:O I can't believe it's ending already!
Date: 03/27/09 05:02 pm Title: Chapter 11
My gawd that was HAWWWT!!
Date: 03/27/09 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 4
Ohh yeah TOmi admit it! :)
Date: 03/27/09 03:45 pm Title: Chapter 2
A bit syncopated and quick again, but again the plot is so nice one doesn't really mind. :)
Date: 03/27/09 03:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
Well well well... the plot idea is nice, really nice! :) It's all a bit syncopated, but I guess you'll get better the more practise you do. :) Nice story!
Date: 03/27/09 10:14 am Title: Chapter 11
T.T really only a chapter left!??!?! and bill already showed himself without make up! O.O
Date: 03/27/09 10:14 am Title: Chapter 11
That's so cute! Oh, the perfection.
Author's Response: Thank you! <3
Date: 03/27/09 10:04 am Title: Chapter 11
WOW! Amazing! Naughty boys... lol, I loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you did. Yes, sometimes the boys just won't behave ;) <3
Date: 03/27/09 09:35 am Title: Chapter 11
aw i love it! update soon!
Date: 03/27/09 08:37 am Title: Chapter 11
I love how romantic this was without being cliche or cheesy...that's very hard to do! Even though I'll be sad to see this go, I can't wait to see how everything ends!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm curious myself :)
Date: 03/27/09 08:11 am Title: Chapter 11
OMAGAAAAAAD!!!
Just one more left?!?T___T Waaaaahhh... Another good fic coming to an end..T___T Waaaaahhh
LOL love this chapter ahahaha!!XD And you know why!XDXD
Author's Response: I'm glad you like the story. I'm already working on a new one and I'm eager to give it my full attention. :)
Date: 03/27/09 06:07 am Title: Chapter 11
awesomeness... hot hot
Date: 03/27/09 05:32 am Title: Chapter 11
awww.. just one more//