Date: 02/06/10 07:22 pm Title: Chapter 2
Your story was really funny, though Bill got quite bitchy around Prada, not that, that part wasen't hilarious as well. No, I really liked this chapter, and I hope Bill and Tom get to know each other better, and if Toms Barbie ex wants revenge later, it would be really awesome if the boys could hunilate her for a lifetime. :P
The story is really great, and you have all the possibileties in the world in front of you, just make sure that it doesn't happen to quickly, which you haven't done yet, but it's easy to stress =)
Date: 09/06/09 01:58 pm Title: Chapter 2
OMG!!! please please more i love it
Date: 06/15/09 02:03 am Title: Meeting
NoNoNoNoNo,
don't make it Mpreg.
please.
o_o
this should be angsty.
with drama.
and a hit of abuse on Bill's mum/dad's part towards Bill.
o__o
and hurt/comfort on Tom's part towards Bill.
I'M A SUCKER FOR THOSE.
XD
Date: 06/13/09 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 2
You should totally make this an mpreg story!!!!! I totally can't wait to read more!
Date: 06/12/09 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 2
http://fiction.tokiohotelfiction.com/viewpage.php?page=pov
please read it, i'm sure it'll help you to improve your writing skills
Date: 05/25/09 09:30 am Title: Meeting
mpreg, for more drama but not too much drama...? xP I like the intro!
Date: 01/18/09 09:22 pm Title: Meeting
Tom laughed harder LOL! That was like my fave part! You never suppose to give them a decision to stay with you or laugh harder LOL! And I'm such an indecisive person asking me what genre you should add would be like making a life decision LOL! But I love your story!!!
Date: 01/18/09 08:53 pm Title: Meeting
I liked it and I think that it should be a mpreg. I love mpregs!
Author's Response: lol, thanks for reviewing
Date: 01/18/09 06:00 pm Title: Meeting
love it!
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Date: 01/18/09 05:47 pm Title: Meeting
this seems like PWP..... >.> and I THINK MPREG Would like so work it would be great xDDD. its alsokinda funny :D
I like it they should do the smutty smut smut xDDDD jk....
I really dont know...
Author's Response: lol thanks for reviewing i always make it funny some how i dont know i'll try to make it even funnier. ;)
Date: 01/18/09 05:33 pm Title: Meeting
I like it so far
Author's Response: Thank you! :]
Date: 01/18/09 05:32 pm Title: Meeting
XD make it MPreg yet totally fluffy, dude. hahahaha Tom/Bill is so awesome. :) I love Aero, too. :P update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing and i'll take the hint about the fluff and mpreg