Date: 01/19/09 02:20 am Title: Insurance
This is amazing. I'm beyond in love with your dialogue and I can't recall ever saying that to anyone. Your Bushido is so PERFECT. And we don't get a lot of that around here. We actually get a lot of the polar opposite. -_-
Which is why you must write more. Lots more. Much more than lots more. Please?
*_*
Date: 01/18/09 09:13 pm Title: Insurance
Daaaaaaaaaaaamn that was SO fucking hot!
Date: 01/18/09 11:59 am Title: Insurance
You sort of owe it to this fandom and website to write more Billshido after this ;)
Date: 01/18/09 11:57 am Title: Insurance
This is your first one?!
O_O
Well, that was really good :)
Date: 01/18/09 11:53 am Title: Insurance
This is your first one?!
O_O
Well, that was really good :)
Date: 01/18/09 11:13 am Title: Insurance
Wow, I love to hear the back story of how the got together in the first place and what happened that meant the didn't see each other in months,
it was pretty much the perfect balance of smut and story.
And if this is your first I expect only more!
Loves
Date: 01/18/09 10:25 am Title: Insurance
Oh I love you for this!
And you´re sure you've never written before?
This is amazing, you have to write more
Date: 01/18/09 09:04 am Title: Insurance
Oh my lord this was fucking ORGASMALICIOUS!!!!
*huff, pant, drool, convulse*
SOO HAWT!! *adds to favorites* I'm reading it again!! O__o
Date: 01/18/09 08:27 am Title: Insurance
Don't be so nervous! That was really, really hot. And I like your writing, it flows so well and your portrayal of Bill and Bushido is on-spot!
"“You should read end my ride,” Bill says, and they both make a face. “Yeah, that was so stupid.”"
lol This made me laugh so hard!
Date: 01/18/09 07:30 am Title: Insurance
Are you serious? You've never written before?! This is insanely amazing for your first time. I must say, you've done everything brilliantly. It's 6:30 in the morning and it woke me up, it's so good.
I hope to see more fics from you if all your works are going to be like this. In closing, this was brilliant and wonderful and I'm absolutely in love with Billshido.
Date: 01/18/09 07:01 am Title: Insurance
Where have u been before? under a rock
U write AMAZING and I mean it
And u say that this is your first one?
WoW
I like the humor in it,bushido is so comic,he made me laugh
I really needed that
And the sex was really well described and HoT
I’ll keep an eye on you *wink*
And I’m looking forward to read more from u
Date: 01/18/09 06:50 am Title: Insurance
oh..my...gosh? that was ur FIRST ever???!! That was simply amazing! Slow and paced sentences all through, which make the heat intense... not many writers can do that,, trust me i read a LOT and i can tell u that u have a talent!! I can't wait 4 more stories by u!
Date: 01/18/09 06:49 am Title: Insurance
I loved this :D You're very good!!
xx Chi ^^
Date: 01/18/09 06:13 am Title: Insurance
You've never written a story before? What have you written? Because it's not textbooks. I'd have paid MUCH more attention in school.
I liked this a lot. Your Bill characterization was killer; I think you covered all the bases for how I perceive him. He's not completely innocent, though he can play it, he can be bitchy, and impulsive, and you just nailed him. Your Bushido is pretty damn good, too. More patient than people think, especially with those he cares about, he's funnier. He's a strong man, and I can see him having a long fuse, but when he snaps, he snaps quick. Like telling Bill he's a bitch, or throwing him down on the couch. Good!
I liked the development and backstory you put into this, talking about how they'd been before, and letting us see into Bushido's vision of it. It made me curious about Bill's side of the story, and I think that's a good thing.
I think you were a little nervous writing the sex, because it was good, but you were very careful with it. The more you write it, the more you read it, the easier and smoother it becomes. And I hope you will be writing more for us, because you are really good already and show so much potential, as well. And you wrote Billshido, which definitely has it's own niche here. :)
I really enjoyed this; thank you for taking the chance and putting it up here!
Date: 01/18/09 04:48 am Title: Insurance
Oh my God! You honestly expect me to believe that you've never written anything before? Seriously?
Well, I'll give you the benefit of the doubt and believe you. But you, you are very promising. Just incredible. Bushido as you've written him is perfect, you gave him such a distinct voice. Bill was delightful too. Please write more! :)
Date: 01/18/09 04:00 am Title: Insurance
great job. I loved how you characterized Bushido and Bill. And Bill totally acted like a teenager in that situation. LOL. I acted the same way when I had my first accident...last year...a week after my eighteenth birthday...lol. Anyway, great job! I love Billshido! Haha
Date: 01/18/09 03:37 am Title: Insurance
awwwww. I totally heart this. it was pretty good. and hot. and smexy xDD but poor tom. his audi is FUCKED up xD